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Yep, glad you noticed the slight change. I only did it 'cos you noticed it The next chapter is the Willow stripper thing, and most of that is from Willow's POV, so I hope it goes ok. I may throw in characters POV to break up the chapters into different parts. 'Twas a fine idea mon ami. I thought Willow may strip to 'Faith' by George Michael, it would be the final insult to her Did you check your PM's? I'm pretty sure I sent you my e-mail address, I thought I would send you the chapters so you can edit them before I post them. What do you think?

Honestly guys, I have no idea how all this is going to end. Maybe I'll just end up doing doing a cheap cop out ending eg:- You know that episode where Buffy is in a mental institution, well maybe all this is just the psychotic ramblings of Faith in a padded cell. You never know.... I'm currently playing with the Willow stripper chapter, I think she needs a signature song to dance to. Something sexy, I can't remember what songs were around in '99. Long time ago. Any ideas?

The pencils aren't that strong. They can't re-ensoul the Mayor or bring him back when he is killed though she tries. She has a bunch of ready pictures to unleash on the populace of Sunnnydale as she has a lot of free time on her hands. When Faith "yagsicigam"'s Willow into the pencil world I was thinking that she wouldn't be wearing anything anymore after stripping totally for Buffy, and yes Faith will draw Willow and the Cordettes in dance costumes. (Loved Rose Mcgowan by the way) and I loved the butt plugs idea. Oh yeah, I forgot about Kennedy. I thought that after the Willow strip/S&M club thing Wesley (or Giles) would see that they are totally outmatched and so call Quentin Travers for urgent back up and that they should send 'her'. Her referring to Kennedy of course. The Mayor thing......Kate is in town at this point and so Faith goes to ground (probably in the pencil world experimenting with Tara) so that the Mayor can come up with a plan to keep Faith out of prison, but its all a ruse to seperate the slayer from the mayor making him an easy target. The council and W&H plot to kill the Mayor. Though it is Lilah's idea, it is Kennedy that they get to 'pull the trigger' so to speak, in the other dimension where the mayor is vulnerable. Faith is heartbroken and alone and so redraws Joyce as the loving mother she never had (as some reviewers have suggested) to comfort her in her hour of need. Faith finds Kennedy and draws her in the iron mask in the dungeon while she thinks what to do with her. The council send a wetworks team to kill Faith and rescue Kennedy but they fail, get turned into vampires, and sent back to the council as proof of their failure. To show her disdain at the council's actions she draws Kennedy in the mystic cage thing for added punishment. Kennedy is traded to W&H for Lilah. Lilah has served her purpose and they would willingly trade her for the next slayer. Thus the council wont try to kill Faith anymore as it will give W&H an obedient slayer in their possession, Lilah gets fucked over in the Stepford way (who is her husband though? and maybe she could act as the hated step mother to Catherine Madison who is now an unruly teen) In his video will the Mayor leaves everything to Faith - the house, the cars, several other businesses and properties,and wants her to take care of her town. She wants to as a loving tribute to the Mayor but she realises she cant do it alone - thus giving her a reason to redraw some characters. I thought Dawn as a sexy/naughty secretary type, Joyce could be the new Mayor (- but for public show only as Faith is the real power in town, Joyce is just the face of local governance, she just does the admin and photos with girl scouts, that sort of thing, with a hint of whoreness too?), Yes to the Catherine Madison ploy as it makes sense for something I'm toying with. I thought that now Wesley and Giles are alone against Faith, (and Kennedy hasn't arrived yet) they would set up a protective barrier spell at the library (its a weekend too) so that Faith nor anyone could get to them before Kennedy arrives. Catherine Madison would be a handy ally in breaking down the barrier. Excellent idea my friend. As for Faith destroying the pictures? Like I said, I don't think things through properly. Maybe she's worried that some powerful witch could restore the drawn essences to their rightful bodies and thus cripple all her fine work. I dunno really. But what about Angel?

Ooh, I like the Lilah bimbo plan, I watched the Stepford Wives the other week actually. That could be fun, when I used to write, sell and trade punk 'zines I found this in one of them, it's an actual extract from a good housekeeping book from the fifties. I thought it could be appropriate:- "Have a dinner ready. Plan ahead, even the night before, to have a delicious meal ready on time for his return from work. This is a way of letting him know that you have been thinking about him and are concerned about his needs. Most men are hungry when they come home and the prospect of a good meal (especially his favourite dish) is part of the warm welcome needed. Prepare yourself, take fifteen minutes to rest so you will be refreshed when he arrives. Touch up your make up, put a ribbon in your hair and be fresh looking. He has just been with a lot of work weary people. Be a little gay and a little more interested for him. His boring day may need a lift and one of your duties is to provide it. Clear away the clutter. Make one last trip through the main part of the house just before your husband arrives. Gather up school books, toys, papers etc. and then run a dust cloth over the tables. Over the cooler months of the year you should prepare and light a fire for him to unwind by. Your husband will feel he has reached a haven of rest and order and it will give you a lift too. After all, catering for his comfort will provide you with immense personal satisfaction. Minimise all noise. At the time of his arrival eliminate all noise of the washer, dryer or vacuum. Try to encourage the children to be quiet. Be happy to see him. Greet him with a warm smile and show sincerity in your desire to please him. Listen to him. you may have a dozen important things to tell him, but the moment of his arrival is not the time. Let him talk first, remember, his topics of conversation are more important than yours. Make the evening his. Never complain if he comes home late or goes out to dinner, or other places of entertainment without you. Instead, try to understand his world of strain and pressure and his very real need to be at home and relax. Don't ask him questions or question his judgment or integrity. Remember, he is the master of the house and as such will always exercise his will with fairness and truthfulness. Make him comfortable. Have him lean back in a comfortable chair or have him lie down in the bedroom. Have a cool or warm drink ready for him. Arrange the pillow and offer to take off his shoes. Speak in a low, soothing and pleasant voice. Your goal; Try to make sure your home is a place of peace, order and tranquillity where your husband can renew himself in body and spirit. Don't greet him with complaints and problems. Don't complain if he's late home for dinner, or even stays out all night. Count this as minor compared to what he might have gone through that day." Could be a laugh if she acts like this is her bible. As for trading with W&H, who will be the potential traded? Or will Buffy be offered to them for Lilah? And the 'show don't tell' thing is a good idea. Telling the tale from individual POV's could make it deeper. Thankyou m'dear xx

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Erm, what does that mean? Just a thought, maybe instead of doing one defining situation Faith can de-draw Lilah over and over in multiple scenarios - maid, ponygirl, abdl, etc. and anything original I can think of, in order for Faith to extend her humiliation and send a message of power to W&H.

Yeah, the timeline is screwed but it doesn't really matter that much seeing as I'm adding W&H and stuff. But ok, I'll dump vamp Willow, as I still have to figure out what to do with Angel. You're write about the links thing, I'm just being lazy. Have to flex my literary muscles methinks. And you are right, it is overkill for Kate too, damn your logical mind As for Lilah, well it's her fault that the Mayor gets killed so Faith is going to want serious revenge on her. Something nasty, but I have no idea what. I'm working on the 'cordettes at the motel with cordelia' chapter so we have space to develop other plots. Well, take it easy duder, and we'll talk later in the week. xx

You know how in Guantanemo Bay the prisoners there had to wear the bright orange jumpsuits, were cuffed at their wrists and ankles. Had to wear black goggles, ear muffs and padded mittens so it cut off pretty much all their senses giving them no idea about time or location. Just leaving them with their thoughts in the dark. The big pic was great, much easier to see. But I don't want to get bogged down in too much detail as this was supposed to be a fun, irreverent fic in the first place. But it all helps in building up the right picture doesn't it. And explanations of what the characters are wearing are necessary. I edited chapter one and added a Visual Aid link to what Eliza Dushku was wearing in the episode of Dollhouse where she was a dominatrix si I didn't have to go on and on about what she was wearing. Think we should do the same with Tara, and other chapters? I like a bit of forced diapers too, yeah don't like scat either though, I just got kind of carried away with Dawn Do you think the Doppelgangland episode had happened yet? As vamp Willow was hot and we could have fun with that.

Yeah I had no idea how to kill the Mayor but the whole different dimension thing should work. The Kate PSAS thing will be evil. Mwuh-ha-ha! Maybe a bit of Guantanemo Bay style restraints could come in to play. You're right about Willow's undersmile. So everything ends in her ass? Cool. And lapdancers rule! I think Faith would watch some lapdancing vids and then write them onto the picture to save on the training, she's not the most patient of girls. I think superergonomic for Tara's waistband (why do things by halves) and a hip belt might show off her curves better. When Faith takes Tara into the pencil world do you think she would tell her what happens if they leave touching? Would she believe that this is just a form of escapism and then Faith gets bored and brings her back as her submissive bondage lover?

Yeah it would kill Giles to be a meat headed aggressor, so we'll go with that. As for Willow's anal only thing, what if she didn't have a pussy so to speak. Just a tiny hole to pee out of so she could only take it anally. She would be in a constant state of frustration at being so horny but no way to release it. the cordettes will be working at the club too (i'll have to figure out what happens with cordy and them at the motel) And yes, Amber is awesome! As for the MySteel website I thought... Under Bit's And Pieces - pinwheel wantenburg, spekulum collin, pain paddle, medusa whip, heart paddle (maybe a valentines gift), round paddle. Under Bondage - the collar, wrist and ankle cuffs, bra, thigh bands, pretty much the whole outfit in the middle row on page one you pointed me to. Under Dildo - pure plug 2.0, pure wand. Under Electro - dildo vaginal and anal. Under Chastity Belts - the total system (in chains looks better). And yes I agree, it is a good explanation as to why she wears such bulky clothing. I think she'll have a thing for metallic bondage items. Just thought, when Lilah comes to Sunnydale she goes to see the Mayor and delivers the ultimatem. They were ok to let him go along with his plans of ascension as they thought that Buffy was still a slayer and would stop him. Now she isn't, one of their seer's has seen that he will go through with his plans which will mess with W&H's own plans for dominance. She tells him that they have plenty of sway with the Distict Attorney and he has sent Kate Lockley to investiate the death of Finch. W&H have provided Kate with plenty of evidence so after she puts the pieces together then Faith will go to prison for a long time. Lilah tells the Mayor to stop the ascension or they will nail faith for murder, and as he loves Faith like a daughter he doesnt want that. So Faith draws Lilah in some scenario to send a message to W&H that they are not to be messed with. W&H are pissed at this, and the council are too for the humiliation of Giles/Wesley/Buffy and are now the laughing stock of the demon community. The form a tentaive alliance to kill the Mayor. They do somehow. But Kate is framed for the Mayor's murder instead and she goes to prison.

Sweet velvet Elvis, how hot did Willow look? I see your point So if Faith drew the Bronze as a strip club/S&M club, then the patrons would automatically be into that scene (otherwise why else would they be at a strip/S&M club?) as well being her peers. Should I start off with Buffy getting Willow to meet her at the Bronze (then yagsicam)then, using the Oric13 idea, get Buffy to profess her love and ask for a strip tease in some back room but turns out to be the stage? Or should she do the strip routine then the lights go on to see everyone in the club, all her friends and peers etc. which mortifies her and then yagsicam which turns it into a strip/S&M club and leaves Willow as a stripper? Yeah, I think the second one. You? Perhaps the cordettes could be there and, after laughing at Willow, they are drawn as working there too? Two birds with one stone y'see. Yeah, her duties will be stripping and lap dancing and the like, and I think yeah, an anal girl only. Maybe one day Faith can auction off her virginity? Or take it herself? Ooh, an auction at the Bronze of her slaves/pets at some point. Just an idea. Warren can get in his maid fetish. And the chapter ends with Lilah Morgan in the offices of the senior partners being told to go to Sunnydale to deliver the ultimatem. But what will the ultimatem be? As I'm sure they want him to turn into the demon snake thingy. I'm going to be starting this chapter soon-ish so I need to get it clear in my head, usually I just make shit up as I go along, but I don't think that's gonna fly anymore is it. I don't really know how to do Giles doing the Ripper persona though. But I am well versed in TV/TG fiction so it would be easier for me to do a shemale slut thing, I can make him barely literate to add to his fear of not being able to read, but still keep it within certain confines of him/her still attending school, albeit in remedial classes. But maybe.... Ripper can work at the Bronze strip/S&M club (which Faith wrote in the drawing as being owned by her now) as an illilterate brutish doorman/pimp and act like a bastard to Willow and Buffy (who sometimes performs there). Maybe Wesley can be the she-male instead. Dammit, now I've opened up too many tangents. What about Xander? He was the only one who was (sort of) nice to Faith and she may want to make it up to him for taking his virginity. How should he fit into the story? In the Willow stripper chapter, but something where he fucks Buffy, the girl he always wanted. But what will he have to sacrifice in order to get it on with her? I think Oz should be there to see his girlfriend humiliated, maybe he gets so enraged at Willow's betrayal he goes all wolfie. I've edited the chapters too. Wesley is now there. No reason for this shark, I just thought it looked cool. xx

How about I edit the end of chapter four so Wesley (who does not interact with Faith) spies on them instead. It makes sense seeing as he is around at this point and will give you breathing room for the development of your Kennedy ideas. I only added her as I wanted someone from the council who wasnt Giles to be there. I had forgotten about Wesley. And Faith does not like Mr Wyndham-Pryce, but I don't know what to do with him. Giles has Willow researching into the magic that Faith is now seemingly in control of, so to eliminate the threat Faith does the whole Buffy seduction/strip tease at the school thing (Oric13's idea)before seguing into chapter five where Faith goes up against Giles. I thought that Giles, a man who based himself around being a respected and learned man could be turned into a bimbo slut, called Candi Honeydew (like an even stupider version of Harmony) who only watches MTV, reads Cosmo, loves boy bands and is a cock hungry whore. But to every who sees him, all they see is a blond slut (who maybe will join the cordettes) but to any demons or those with a supernatural slant all they see is the Giles,representative of the council, acting like a whore. This should send a powerful message to the council about who the real power is over the hellmouth. Being such an erudite and repressed man it was be the most hideous torture for him. Or perhaps Giles could become a sissy shemale slut and Wesley is his trainer/lover. It would be hell for both of them as Giles has always looked down on Wesley but now Giles is his bitch. Maybe? And yeah, Faith is probably going to draw Dawn as something else at some point as Miss Attention Span will get bored of doing the same thing over and over - which gives us the opportunity for many new ideas. As for the anal whore, yeah I'm up for it. Oric13 wrote a long synopsis for the Willow idea which I may start on soon. Maybe her? After humiliating herself at school with the strip tease thing she could work at the Bronze (now owned by Faith) to be a whore who only takes it up the rear. To make it up to Xander for taking his virginity maybe Faith can get him involved? And Kate won't be for a while yet. I liked the death of the Mayor/angry Faith aspect. I will think muchly about the idea. And I'll get back to you about the Products and Accessories things.

Well, if Kennedy is about 15, Faith can use a little magic to make her of legal age, then have some fun. And I did like the chastity belts, they look like fun. Maybe I should rethink Tara as a willing slave rather than have it forced upon her, as love is more powerful than a spell. Awww, aren't I the sweet romantic. And yes, she will look damn hot in it. Yes, in fact , maybe she wants to go into the Bronze S&M club as a submissive but is too scared of what others will think of her. In the pencil world she can explore her fetish with Faith before she is ready to come into this world as her submissive lover rather than her slave. What do you think? And Kate's prison is a bastard. Mmmm, gets me thinking. but I don't want to jump too far ahead too quickly, (as I am obviously prone to) but what about the idea about the Mayor trying to call a truce, I'm really not sure about that but I can't think of what to do. Any ideas?

Jesus, you've thought about this waaayyy more than I have. This was intended to be a collection of sordid ideas but seeing it's (honestly shocking) popularity, it would be an injustice, not to mention an insult, to not try to fashion it into a fully thought out tale. At the end of chapter 4 we see that the council have sent the next potential slayer, Kennedy, (I know it's early but she did seem to be much older than the other potentials in season seven, either that or Willow gets it on with someone underage) to investigate why they cannot locate the other slayer. Chapter 4 also hints at the potential for a one shot chapter about the Cordettes and the former leader down at the Sunnydale motel. And also hints at the Cordettes getting their comeuppance.(I took your word at what their names were) I agree, I thought the Lilah Morgan idea was great. I had the plan that now Faith had at last found a real place where she belonged and someone to call family, she wouldn't be able to bear the Mayor's ascension and so draws him with a soul to make sure he would not be manipulated by the forces at work for W&H. With his returned humanity he wants to call an end to the eternal bloody war between humans and demons so tries to bring a truce between the two sides. The council and Wolfram and Hart take umbrage at this and try to take out the slayer and the Mayor. By giving the next-in-line slayer to Wolfram and Hart (to do with as they please) as a sign of goodwill so they think about the idea of a truce, the council would not be able to assassinate Faith as it would just activate Kennedy, and as she is the possession of Wolfram And Hart it would only harm the watchers council. A devious plan methinks. I thought that if the Bronze is drawn as an S&M club/strip club/brothel Faith would draw herself as the owner and have all her pets/slaves perform there for humans and demons alike to try and coerce them into to accepting the idea of a truce. With season three coming to a close I thought I would bring in Tara. I imagined that Tara was so desperate to escape her homelife that she graduated early and is currently living and working in Sunnydale until college starts, her shyness is because of her suppressed dominant edge. She fears the judgment of others if she truly expressed her desires, Faith sees her outside the Bronze S&M club a few times but is too scared to go in. Faith talks to her and they realize an instant atttaction to each other and that she could come out of her shell with Faith's help, but only has the confidence to do so within the confines of the 'pencil drawn spell world', until she is ready to embrace her preferred lifestyle in the real world. They will be equals but Tara will be submissive to only Faith. The initiative will be implied shortly too. And I adored your Anya as a genie in a bottle idea. That'll be great. I'll have to think hard about the restrictions, but i think you are right about her powers needing to be limited. I deleted the Angel/Riley chapter, not because it messed with the storyline too much, but because it was, to be honest, shite. I had a similar idea for Kate doing the whole 'missing persons investigation' thing, but I loved your twist of her being jailed. Oh, and my Wesley idea was shit so I scrapped that too. You have no idea just how much I appreciate this, i humbly thankyou mon ami. xx

Oh, and ANnon82. The idea I had for Tara was not evil. The way I see it that even though Faith is obviously enjoying herself she still feels lonely at not having anyone to share her deviancy with. I thought that a Faith/Tara pairing (which I always love) could be fun. You know how it's always the quiet ones you have to watch out for.....they're the ones with the dirtiest and kinkiest desires. So between them they could have fun dominating and exploring their desires with their slaves and sluts. Maybe even try to wrest control of the town from the Mayor? But as Faith sees him as a father, would she really betray him like that? To go along with your ideas, I thought Lilah Morgan could come from Wolfram And Hart as they want to know what happened to the vampire with a soul. And the council want to know what happened to the other slayer so they could send the potential slayer kennedy to investigate. (But I'm open to negotiations, suggestions and death threats. If you think it's crap just tell me and we can try again )

Hi, I'm a newbie to the forum but I (we) were asked to add a thread on here to make it easier to discuss the story of The Magic Pencils. I (No Refund) came up with the idea and most chapter synopsis' but I let christina boone run with it as she wanted to get involved (aren't I nice). Anyhoo, ANnon82, you have a good point about messing with canon, but how should I (we) incorporate other characters like you suggested from Wolfram And Hart? Title: The Magic Pencils Author: Christina Boone (with the help of No Refund) Summary: It's a BtVS fic where Faith is given a gift (the magic pencils) where whatever she draws, with the help of a little magic, comes true. So all her deviant desires can be played out with whatever characters she feels like. Ratings: Adult++ Pairings : Faith and anyone she feels like from Sunnydale Spoilers : Anything in the Whedonverse really Feedback : I live to be bitched at (or encouraged, it's all good) URL : http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600031970 (Apologies to the site admin people if I've done this wrong Thanks y'all No Refund (on behalf of christina boone)