[Hueco Mundo Slave story]

Forgot to post this under my username my bad

[Why Do We Hate Mary Sue?]

Well, that's kinda the point. If there's a good backstory, hell if it's a good story, then it's almost certainly not a mary sue. A major trait of a Sue is that the character doesn't make sense OR, more importantly, eclipses the canon characters who are the reasons we read X-Fandom stories in the first place.

If chess was a TV show with a large fandom, then the fanfiction of the Mary Sue figure would start out as a pawn on the white side, but turn out to be the love child of a white knight and the black queen, with all the moves of the queen AND the knight. Her dual-color heritage would allow her to make moves during white or black's turn. Jealous kings from both sides would want her dead. But the pawns would protect her because she's one of them.

She finally fights her way to the last file, where she announces her intention to be promoted to Queen, but to bring back her mother ,the other queen, but only after delivering a touching 'we should be building our kingdoms, not crushing them!' speech.

A heartbreaking death scene leads both leaders to regret their actions and they cooperate to give the resurrected queen a chance to resolve everyone's issues and end the game in a draw.

Parody can be overdone, but i can see, theoretically, a story written to make fun of the Sue twins rather than just use them. it'd be tricky, though.

Hmm, a parody being overdone? I never seen it done before. I've seen people make stories to take shots at the sue twins and some of them are good but others tend to drag it out to the point where its no longer funny and just annoying. So how would you take a purposeful sue empowered parody and turn its attention away from the sue and more on the humor of it all.

[Journey To The Lorde]

Hi guys, this is the first chapter to my bleach harem story. It's basically a humor with lots of sex. Hope you enjoy

Title: Journey To The Lorde

Author: Ndasuunye

Rating: R-Adult

Summary: A normal Vizard wants more power......the power of a Vasto Lorde and he will do anything to get it......even allow himself to be in a harem.

Feedback: Most desire please

Fandom: Bleach

URL: http://bleach.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600011696

Thank you for taking the time to read this as I hope you enjoyed yourselves. Chapters will be uploaded hopefully in a fast manner,

Ndasuunye

[Why Do We Hate Mary Sue?]

Saw this thread and thought I post as the new guy on campus. I heard this story so many times before, we all hate mary/gary sues because they just ooze perfection with a haunted past which only makes them absorb even more power. And I'm pretty sure it's considered self insertion am I correct. But what about stories with canons that take them to the extreme with power, perfection and so forth. But hold on, there is a good back story and a good reason for them to constantly get power. It's a good qualitiy story line, plot just with a canon character as the driver. Also, what if the OC created as a Mary Sue is done for humor purposes. Like for example, I got this story, where the guy is uber powerful, for shit and giggles, but also to pick up chicks and have hilarious sex. The main point isn't about him having the greatest powers that can't be imaginable, but for the sex and the humor. SO my question, would you guys hate a gary sue, in a story like that? And I'm not a crappy writer, I just made the story for shit and giggles and self pleasure.