snapesuse

SS/HG Pairing Hi! I like Adult Fan Fiction! I just recently started a story on fanfiction But I believe chpt 6 will get pulled. The story is Life Begins Anew. I have the first 12 chapters completed, but I need help on 13. I can send you what I have. Anyway. The is graphic torture/death/and sexual situations further in. I think I did the graphic torture okay, without portrying myself to be a physcopath. I do not think of these things real life but my story needed it. Would anyone like to review and give me advice? I will post here what I have to equivalent fanfiction. I just think I'll get better support here. Thanks! snapesuse!