lolawithlove

I i'm looking for a beta for a draco/hermione fan fiction. It's my first and i want to improve my writing, so constructive criticism would be apreciated (especially from a journalist). I have to tell that my stiry is totally A/U and harry potter characters are muggles... So I have already posted two chapters ... you can check them out. The story is "Back To You". I would apreciate your help...