JCullen

Chapter 12 posted up today! Please leave feedback!

I know! It makes me pout. It's like "Okay well, people reading it...but do they like it? Do they hate it? Are they indifferent? I don't get it!!!!"

Hey guys! I wrote this story as a break from All I Know. I love the movie Boiler Room and have always wanted to see something happen between Vin Diesels character and Scott Caan's character. This is a little take on something happening between the two actors. Feedback is loved as always! Title: Giving In Author: Jack Cullen Summary: Vin Diesel and Scott Caan get closer during the filming of Boiler Room. Rating: Adult+ Pairings: Vin Diesel/ Scott Caan Spoilers: None Feedback: Desired greatly!!! URL: Giving In

I posted chapters ten and eleven! Eleven is a sex scene!!!! woot woot!!! Read and review ya'll!!!!

Chapter nine is up!!

No I totally know what you mean. That's exactly how I write as well, but right now I'm writing a story based on a film and all I'm really doing is adding a character to the original screen play and shaping it to fit the character's presence. So I'm going to end the story where or around where the film ends but not using the films ending and also not really knowing completely how I want it to end. Happy ending? Sad? Ironic? It's an amazing unexpected journey.

When you're writing your story(ies) do you ever wonder yourself how it will end? Or do you already know how you want it to end in your head and giggle as you slowly reveal it? Usually I already know how I'll end a story, but this time...with the one I'm currently writing...I'm wondering how it'll end myself because while I had an ending in mind to begin with, I don't know if I want it to end the way I originally planned. It's kind of fun! hehe...how about you guys?

Chapter Eight is up!!! Read and review!!

It really is sad that people waste energy on flaming other peoples work...what a shame.

Personally, I'm here mostly to improve my writing. Though a part of me enjoys knowing that other people are reading my stories and I honestly cant wait to receive reviews (good and bad) because it can only help me grow as a writer.

Just posted Chapter Seven Reviews would be adored!!

I'll admit, sometimes I have started to read a story solely for the sex scenes but as I read, found it intriguing and end up reading the entire thing, which makes the sex scene all the more gratifying as was previously mentioned. I personally depend the build up on the characters I'm writing. Is the character meek and/or shy...a virgin even? Or is the character sexually confident by nature? The answer to this is usually what determines how much of a build up you have, I have found.

Gr. I get so annoyed with that as well, especially if the story is good and you want it to continue. Another thing that annoys me is when the story was clearly written by someone who does not speak English as first language. Don't get me wrong, I applaud those who make an effort to write in a foreign language but they should also make an effort to make sure the grammar and connotation is correct. If anything, they could have an English speaker proof read it for them.

I see...got it. Thank you! hehe Excellent! Again, thank you

Chapter six is up!!