From JayDee on April 05, 2020
Onto section 4/actual part 3 thanks to the prologue clarification!
And it starts with Harry in a tent pointing his wand at Hermione’s entrance, her flaps, and muffling, which fulfils my wand gag quota.
Best thing in this part by far is Hermione just cutting the damn thing in half an impaling it on a coat rack. Absolutely awesome moment.
Good use of the old repair spell as well. Really fits in that they aren’t just ordinary folks dealing with this thing but magic users who can keep their environment in decent condition. Wizard Kind have a much higher chance of survival of a zombie apocalypse. Wands don’t run out of bullets even if they can be overrun by a horde like anything else. And remotely sealing doors means that quite simply. Wizards can outlast even heavily fortified muggle locations. To say nothing of a wizard’s ability to repair damage. Where as muggles would have to abandon a location due to a breach.
One thing that stuck out,
His shield kept the dust from flowing out of the security center. An unseen barrier kept the debris from flowing out of the room.
Kind of feels like it is saying the same thing twice? I’m not sure if it is intended repetition or something left over from an edit? Most likely the latter I’ll fix.