RogueMudblood Posted May 17, 2013 Report Share Posted May 17, 2013 http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097906pittwitch: Thank you for taking time from your busy schedule to read and review!This was spawned, believe it or not, from an actual scene in one of the later episodes. (Season 5, Episode 3: "Firing Line")I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! I stopped being able to watch the show innocently once I reached season four. I hope I was able to brighten your day a little, at least. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittwitch Posted May 17, 2013 Report Share Posted May 17, 2013 Thank you for the tale! I was perhaps a bit too naive at the original viewings of A-Team to read anything into them. I have since learned better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueMudblood Posted May 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2013 LOL! And you are more than welcome! I actually found I had to cut about 300 words out of the sex scene itself to fit within the prompt limits for that chapter, so I'm glad it didn't come across as choppy. It really does prove to me though that sometimes more is just more, yeah? If you're ever in need of a strange plunnie, there's an episode in season four (Cowboy George) where Murdock dresses as a woman to get into the jail so he can break the guys out. Face's comment and Murdock's rejoinder were enough to send my abnormal mind into fits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueMudblood Posted May 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2013 BronxWench: Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I do so appreciate it. I'm glad I was able to capture Murdock's version of reality. He's a unique and endearing character - not to mention his extremely humorous remarks when his reality collides with the outside world. I'm also very glad that I was able to demonstrate a depth to their relationship. This flashfic challenge is certainly a very useful exercise in determining the correct verbiage to properly express the moment! It has certainly caused me to be much more cognizant of the terms utilized so that the best effect is achieved. What was amusing to me was that right after I posted this piece, of course I went to Netflix and watched the next episode - which started out with Murdock holding up a pair of underwear and asking for B.A.'s opinion. I had to press pause so as to no miss the rest of the episode with the giggle fit that ensued. Then I cussed as a plunnie started nibbling at my leg... Vicious little things breed faster than flies. I do hope I can churn out something to your liking in future endeavors as well! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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