Need beta for story Carmen Elisa Need to Die

[Thundercloud 146]

I am in need of a beta reader for my story Carmen Elisa Need to Die in the originals section (http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109195).
Story Codes: Bi Fingering MF Violence TF FD Toys Anal MiCD Bond

Three chapters is posted so far out five planned, average chapter length is 12k words. I have chapter 4 on my harddrive...but self editing is a drag.

I much rather trade beta service with somebody else. Anyone that can be of assistance?

[JayDee 2,015]

I hope you find a beta so part 4 is up to read soon! I’d volunteer but I am the worst beta ever. All I have is relentless positivity when people need harsh constructive criticism. Also my grammar and spelling are terrible.

[Thundercloud 146]

3 hours ago, JayDee said:

I hope you find a beta so part 4 is up to read soon! I’d volunteer but I am the worst beta ever. All I have is relentless positivity when people need harsh constructive criticism. Also my grammar and spelling are terrible.

Thank you for upvote of the story being worthy of having a beta.