InvidiaRed Posted July 28, 2015 Report Share Posted July 28, 2015 I'm mainly looking for a beta that can look for grammar errors and spelling mistakes. Those two common errors that easily stump writers of all kinds also one that can kinda push description. Since that is a problem area for me and I'm always open to suggestions for improvement. 1. My current story is Sedition And it's mainly about a false prophet being usurped by a dark lord right before his master plan of revenge on the gods after a millennium of planning. He turns the tables at the last moment and ends up the elvish companion to the elf who is the god chosen hero. As he recuperates from his humiliating defeat. Its going to have Bigotry, Mind-control, Corruption, Man on Man action, Tentacles and Torture. At-least one orgy of varying genders and one scene where he seduces a queen. Its going to have serious scenes since there are going to be apocalyptic consequences for having the temerity to want vengeance on the gods. To say nothing of the reason why he chose this particular time to spring his master plan. (Don't want to spoil too much.) I'll be happy to look at any takers works. I post one per week on Saturdays. 2. My second original story is a sequel taking place two hundred years after the events of my story Demonic. Titled Maelstrom I haven't finished the prologue yet. Realms are merging and the seven gates of heaven are shattering under the onslaught of the maelstrom that is wreaking havoc on the realms and inhabitants of limbo. Ned is caught up in maelstrom. Don't have a list of all the tags yet. I'll post links for sedition and demonic below. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107808 http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107662 Thank you for your time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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