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rinsparrow

Choose Your Own Yaoi Adventure!

Your Yaoi Choice for Ch1  

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  1. 1. Who should Ferd go off with this evening?



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For those interested, you can vote on Chapter 1 Choose Your Own Adventure (Yaoi Style!) here and the new chapter will post Friday! Right now the main character (our lovely catboy Ferd) has to decide who to go off with after his shift at the bar. ;) Looking forward to seeing people's opinions! I plan on writing a chapter a week on this story, just for fun as a side project from my work at Yaoifix.
Rin

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I voted! I'm interested to see where this will go with reader input, I know there's no way I could write that way so good luck! :P

If I could mention one thing though, you're story is really scrunched up and hard to read, an extra space between paragraphs would make it much easier on the eyes. Just a suggestion. :D

CL

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@rinsparrow, if you're copying from word (or any other word processor), you need to look at the invisible characters. As long as each paragraph has a marker at the end, it'll have a line between. Of course, if you have it with 2, it'll add two, and so on.

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