katiii 0 Report post Posted December 3, 2014 I would love to read a story about Harry who is sorted to Slytherin.Then everybody hates him (Slytherin because he is the BWL, the rest because he is "dark" and Snape because he blames him for Lily' death). His dormmates don't let him use his bed, so he has to sleep in the cubboard. They hex/trip/prank and humiliate him. Then in his first transfiguaration lesson he gets detention because of McGonagall's prejudice. Snape gives him a hard and cruel public spancking as a punishment in the common room. The other Slytherin enjoy it and after that Snapes gives them allowance to spank Harry when ever they think it is necessary(which is always) After awhile the beatings get more and more cruel. And to top that at Halloween (when Harry "killed" their master and Lily)the Slytherins+Snape decide that there should be another step up. They gang rape him. After that he is used rapidly. (toys,humil, beast(?),enemas(?)..................................) I really hope someone will write this soon Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest smiley Report post Posted December 7, 2014 I feel like this should not be when he is 11. If you dont mind I'd like to change it to maybe his 3rd or 4th year, and just come up with a reason why he is starting years late. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted December 7, 2014 This would be great as well Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest smiley Report post Posted December 7, 2014 Ok, awesome. I'm starting on the first chapter now, so hopefully soon i canhave it up Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jojo 0 Report post Posted December 7, 2014 plz post a link to the story when you are done Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted December 8, 2014 That's great. I'm already quit exited Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest smiley Report post Posted December 8, 2014 About half way through chapter one!!!🙊 this is a new record for me! Very excited and just plain inspired by this, which sadly is something I've been lacking lately, so my normal readers might get a little miffed that I'm starting something new before updating, lol. But as soon as its done I'll go over it again to try and catch any mistakes (as i sadly do not have an actual current beta) then post it and links. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted December 9, 2014 Fantastic. I really can't wait !!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest smiley Report post Posted December 9, 2014 First chapter will be just background information and setting the story up, chapter two will probably be him going to Hogwarts. Then from there it'll move into the main plot. First chapter is a good 3/4 done though, mainly just trying to mold it into a good start. But hopefully will have it done within the week if life allows it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted December 10, 2014 This is great I never really expected someone to answer so soon But it's really fantastic Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted January 26, 2015 How far did you get?? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted January 30, 2015 Have just about finished chapter one (sorry I'm a slow writer) I just have to put some finishing touches on it. Then a friend is gonna beta it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted January 30, 2015 Jay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 1, 2015 By the way I'm going to have the 3rd chapter be where he goes to Hogwarts Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 1, 2015 Now just trying to come up with a name for the story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jojo 0 Report post Posted February 1, 2015 how this the slytherin little slut Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 1, 2015 I don't know, I'm sure I'll think of something, but in the meantime I'm starting on chapter two. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 1, 2015 The Suffering of the Dead AFF ~ http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600098348 FF ~ https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11014803/1/The-Suffering-of-the-Dead AOUO ~ http://archiveofourown.org/works/3270962/chapters/7133957 Hope you guys like it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted February 1, 2015 Love it Are you planning to make Sirius and remus bad as well??? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 2, 2015 Not quite sure yet, as of now they are just guardians. I'm open to suggestions for them if you guys want that though. And thank you, I'm glad you like it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted February 2, 2015 I don't know I would enjoi both, but I think I like bad Sirius/Remus a bit more. So Harry has no one Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 3, 2015 Do you have any specific ideas for them? I could probably work it in as disappointment for being in slytherin. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 12, 2015 So I've been working on chapter two, it has definitely gotten away from me..... It was supposed to be about the length of chapter one; it is twice that and not quite finished. :Eye: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
katiii 0 Report post Posted February 13, 2015 Great !!!!! and about sirius and remus, they could hate the "evil" harry I'm really excited to read the next chapter Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Smiley Report post Posted February 13, 2015 Well, it'll hopefully be up this weekend I'm just putting the finishing touches on it then gonna have a friend read over it and fix any mistakes she sees, then once that's done I can post it Just keep in mind that this will finish up the basic start and chapter three he will go to Hogwarts. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
