MajorMarioc Posted July 23, 2015 Report Share Posted July 23, 2015 (edited) No no destruct switch he created the nanites and never thought a chonchesness was even possible they were nothing but beneficial to him I guess tecnicly his dad started the nanites wich makes it less likely there is a shutoff switch Edited July 23, 2015 by MajorMarioc Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 23, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2015 Hmmmm, maybe a fourth book where legion becomes the bad guy A battle to the death between old friends : O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted July 23, 2015 Report Share Posted July 23, 2015 Nanites in the grass Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MajorMarioc Posted July 23, 2015 Report Share Posted July 23, 2015 (edited) Dust in the grass "legion flew like a sandstorm" Or storm in the grass Edited July 23, 2015 by MajorMarioc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jelad Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 Max doesn't know how they became self aware, it was a happy accident so he probably never thought he would need a fail safe. Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 Or all of this was just Max laying out back toking away and the General Title for All Books is Weed in The Grass. gamascal@gmail.com 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthel0101 Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 Hmmmm, maybe a fourth book where legion becomes the bad guy A battle to the death between old friends : O Where's the DISLIKE button? Legion has not had much experience with emotions and hatred driven rage is an alchemist's brew of deadly proportions. Give Legion time to mourn; give the other AI's and ensouled robots time to teach him to deal with his rage; give Amy time to help him heal; he can, and should, be given time. Rescue25 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 Hmmmm, maybe a fourth book where legion becomes the bad guy A battle to the death between old friends : O That doesn't sound too bad, you know. But, how about finishing this one, plus Northstar and weave a story around Going Home. What do you think Magus? Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 Hmmmm, maybe a fourth book where legion becomes the bad guy A battle to the death between old friends : O If you are putting that to a vote put mine in the NO column. Maybe twice!!! B gamascal@gmail.com 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 @DA I like your new graphics. Now let him go long enough to get a new chapter posted. B Totally agree Rescue25. C'mon Magus, I want to see what made cop and ex-soldier vomited! I wonder if the nanites strip the flesh off their head while they were still alive! This is too much guessing now! Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MajorMarioc Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 (edited) Im going with the blender effect from the fingertips starting with all the veins or bones first turning the bodys into floating jeliton of there screaming foarms keeping them alive and awake in just that instant to feel every sinle piece of there bodys torn apart and finaly organs just instantly liquified and caught by the clouds of nanites that sedated the girls first so he could fuel his rage wothought any restraint to harm those who he keeps alive Doctors can be the worst monsters imaginable keeping the victims alive Edited July 24, 2015 by MajorMarioc darthel0101 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 (edited) sounds like a wood chipper would do just fine (feet first, of course) Edited July 24, 2015 by Joe Long Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexy68 Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 Hey Magusfang, sounds like the natives aren't just getting restless but blood thirsty as well! LOL Any ETA on chapter 10??? Rescue25 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 I agree that as time goes by Legion starts to calm down but at the same time Albert, Jeeves and some of the sentient spiders start to realise that they must now be more vigilant and rather than running in down mode they are more active and in the middle so that they can easily go to battle mode at any sign of strange happenings around their human friends or their Home. Th Mainframe is now always in active/surveillance mode and goes to defense at the slightest sign of things being different. It doesn't attack but it goes to battle ready and advises all defenders of the possible threat(s). Now Max wants revenge but he also wants to be more protective of those he loves especially the twins knowing now that some will die without downloading to the MF like Mika. I think he'll be understanding og Legion as he knows how he feels about Alice and maybe even helps Legion to come to terms once "To-day I am." ends and he feels regret for some of those lives he took. He was taught after all by Max. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 24, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 eta on 10 is today, had to scare the boyfriend, put me back a little Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted July 24, 2015 Report Share Posted July 24, 2015 eta on 10 is today, had to scare the boyfriend, put me back a little I would say you took great pleasure in that Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 eta on 10 is today, had to scare the boyfriend, put me back a little OK What time? B Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 now, it's posted Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 Thank you, thank you, now I'm going to read this short chapter. Thanks Magus. Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 So Adams is Control? It's not any of those that had intimate knowledge of ALICE a he states that she was of Max's inner circle. The Major is sure hard to kill and now out for vengeance being attacked by the retrieval team. Rescue25, darthel0101 and Flexy68 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthel0101 Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 So Adams is Control? It's not any of those that had intimate knowledge of ALICE a he states that she was of Max's inner circle. The Major is sure hard to kill and now out for vengeance being attacked by the retrieval team.That is roughly how I read as well. Not sure about Adams as control could have others getting information. Mr White was just flat-out too military minded; the best snoop is not a spy, watcher, or mole. It's a reporter.Remember that the core group has history in Rick's school and it wouldn't take much to I'd the entire group. Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sniper014 Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 (edited) Will be. Awaiting chapter 11. Blood lots of blood everywhere. Maaahhhaaa. Edited July 25, 2015 by Sniper014 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 I know its a long shot, but there was a line in there that triggered something for me. It was when the major was on the sat phone, right towards the end of the conversation it said the voice spoke with 'almost a fatherly tone'. I think the SG could be run my Max's dad, or at least a brainwashed version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 Or if fangface really wants to O'Henry us it's Rick, who never left SG after all & is just smart enough not to let out about Alice incase Major escapes being killed. It could be any of the older coc that served in special ops command. They always think of their "boys" (& now "girls" too)and talk fatherly to them. To paraphrase the English: "who'll be father?" Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 25, 2015 Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 Guess on of the recovery team did something wrong to get Alice shot. What about all the coolant she lost? Don't like the spoiler about 10 or more "good guys" out. I know this does happen RL but this is fiction and I, for one, would rather not see anymore "white hats" down. B Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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