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  1. A Kiss of Moonlight I think the word count is between 3k-5k. So, it isn't a very long piece. I mainly have trouble with commas and grammar. I promise my spelling is good, I know how to dot Is and cross Ts. I also know how to capitalize and other basic stuff. So, what you will Beta isn't complete drivel nor is it hard to read. I put spaces in my work. Making it easier to read. I do have a few warnings! It is a porn without plot. It has a very nice, graphic sex scene in it. So be prepared. I don't want to shock you. I was thinking of turning it into a short chaptered piece, but I am not 100% sure I want to. So, as it stands. It is just a one shot. Any help with this will be greatly appreciated!
  2. Has extremely chapped cheeks. Now I can't rub them or touch them without an annoying, painful burning sensation. >.< Damn cold weather!

    1. BoredStraight

      BoredStraight

      Winter strikes again!

  3. Is happy her SciFi/Fantasy story has a hit count of 1,100 and 6 stars. I figured it would do horrible here. Goes to show me.

  4. Feels a tad better today. Still, the plot bunnies won't sit still. This is going to take a while.

  5. I challenge all you writers out there to write a story or one shot based on this song: Let's Dance by David Bowie If you do not have access to the actual song, look up the lyrics. I have been wanting to write one based on this song, but I am to sick to concentrate long enough to do so. Any way, it can be yaoi, yuri, and/or het. You can write in alternate universes if you would like. No cross overs. Just to throw a wrench in things... the story (or one shot) needs to be no shorter than 5,000 words. Happy writing! P.S. - If you finish one let me know? I wish to read it.
  6. Happy Holidays and Winter Solstice!

  7. I really hate being sick. I still got to wrap presents. Blah

    1. Onihime

      Onihime

      Hope you feel better soon!

  8. JayDee - I must say when I read the title suggestion I about killed over in laughter. However, I do not think anyone would take me seriously or the story seriously if I named it "A Kiss That Drools". Even now I crack up and I can't help but grin at it. It is unique. I will give you that, but I just don't think that will work. CloverReef - Good suggestion and thank you. I know what you mean about a name (or nickname) and sticking a powerful adjective in front. However, none of my characters have nicknames. But, I think I may eventually come up with something. Thanks!
  9. Okay, I know I read some where that a good title sometimes helps draw people in and kind of gives a hint of what the story maybe about. Not always, I know, but generally most people do this. Right now, I have title block. My story "A Kiss That Bites" is about werewolves and the over all general plot of the story has changed since the first title development. So, I am looking at a title that no longer truly fits the story. When I see it, I think vampire and I don't want the audience to think that. However, I also do not want some cliche title that everyone uses. Such as, "Full Moon Madness", "Howler Next Door", etc. So, I am stuck. I have no idea what to name the story and the title is just a throw off for me now. I could use some help in coming up with names for the thing. So what do you guys do? What makes a great title? Basic Summary: He was to be the king of all the Pure Lycki until betrayal stripped him of his crown. Now over 1,500 years have passed and he has settled into a remote area of Colorado. Hoping to escape his past and live out the rest of his miserable life. However, one chance in encounter will bring back old pains and bring his past back to haunt him. Will he over come this and find true love? She was an ordinary woman living in the heart of the south until that fateful day her friends whisked her off on a vacation. There she runs into a man that will not only break her free from herself, but just may be the key in unlocking a past that she knew nothing about. Will she fall in love with this man or will she forever hate him for what he is?
  10. I am going to have agree with Apollo on this one and say that balance is need with "asshole" male characters! I am no expert writer and many would probably call me amateurish, but I do try to write my male characters with a balanced personality. To me, that makes the character much more believable than one that is just this way or just that way. If that made sense? Example! Alexander is a character I am developing in a story I am writing. He has a very asshole front to him. I mean, he can be blunt and cold. However, he is not really that way. He had a rough childhood and uses such extreme behavior to ward people off. Inside he is lonely, loyal, has a heart of gold, and truly is a nice guy, but due to past experiences, he is a bit harsh. He even dresses in a way that make people walk away from him instead of approach him. It is all a front to protect his heart. I guess that is his armor. His asshole nature. I enjoy writing characters like that. Unless the character is just truly a extreme asshole and just evil to the core. Then it is a bit different. For example, Samuel, in the same story as Alexander, is a very sleazy, nasty person who is a grade A asshole. He is the kind of person most people do not want to be around or even screw. But, he is a bad guy in the story and I wanted to exaggerate his evil nature and the best way I know how is to make him into an uber asshole. So, yes, I do believe in balance. I want my characters to seem like an asshole, but they not really. At least the good ones. For villains, I love them to be just the biggest asshole you could ever meet. I think these kind of characters make people happy in their dark places of their souls and dream about those rough around the edges guys and how manly they are. Then again, that might just be me. I guess the best example I can think of is Acheron from Kenyon's books. He can be an asshole, but it turns out he is very mushy on the inside. I love characters like that. I can't really explain why, but it is just something about that front those characters put on that catch my attention and intrigue me. Makes me really want to read the story and find out if they are truly that way or if they are using that as a front. I think that is why I love them. The mystery they hold.
  11. Really wants to be in bed, but instead is going to stay up and write some more to her stories. =]

  12. Hello! I recently posted the Prologue and the first two chapters of this story. It is a work in progress and if you love dark, angsty things... this story is for you! So far, I have over 430 hits and only 4 votes of 5 (stars) pluses! Just a slight brag there. Title: The Chronicles of Andrainea: The Beginning Author: TheChosenDarkness (me) Rating: Adult ++ Summary: My life was just one big, joy ride. Sure, I got taken away from my family at the age of 21 and sure the government killed my entire family, but hey, at least I was alive? And if you do not know what sarcasm is, well, you just got a taste my friend. I hate the government and their experiments. I just happened to be one of them. In fact, I am the governmental experiment X-234A45 or just simply, project X. I am to be a new race of super human soldiers for the government. Obviously they could no longer keep up with modern weapon warfare and turned to science to create something to combat the failures of their weapons. Which brings us to my story. How I became a soldier of war, my travels, and eventually my freedom of myself and my people. Feedback: I greatly desire some and maybe a few reviews! Fandom: Sci-Fi, dark, twisted things, angst, etc. URL: The Chronicles of Andrainea: The Beginning Thank you for looking, TCD
  13. Really needs to start writing to A Kiss That Bites again. Darn you procrastination!

  14. I am looking for someone who has a great deal of patience and has a good knowledge of Grammar. My grammar skills are horrible to say the least and I would really love some help finding errors of this nature. Maybe even other errors like miss spellings, word insertions (like random words in sentences that don't belong), and maybe even punctuation. Fair warning this story is a Paranormal Romance Novel in the making. Meaning, that werewolves and other Myth beasts are bound to leap out of the pages on your computer screen and lovely sex scenes shall be abundant. By the way... this is not going to be similar to any twilight or other types of Young Adult novels. This story is for an OLDER audience. Also, right now there is a total of 11 chapters and over 24,000 words to the current story. I plan on finishing it. So, if a beta reader or two is interested in the long haul.. that would be awesome, but it is NOT required. Also, there is an abundant use of profanity in the story and some rather... vulgar.. scenes in the story. This is just a fair warning to any that might be interested. I also rated the story as Adult ++. You may message me here to apply. A Kiss That Bites
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