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  1. Magic Knows (Draco/Harry) Review Replies, Comments, and Research

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    So I am sorry I disappointed people. I had never written a story where the bulk of the story telling was past memories. So I wanted to try and make this a sort of snapshots in their life type of fic. Right now I don’t have plans to flush it out into a crazy long story, I can see myself writing one-shots within this verse at least later.

    Beginnings of the fic and Research

    Genetic-y stuffs: How the story came about was a combination of things that were bugging me mainly in MPreg fanfiction. I seem to find a lot of MPreg fiction where the couple has a girl(s) and I just remembered my Punnett Squares from high school and statistically male off springs are more likely (yeah, yeah I know MPreg not exactly do able right now leave logic out of it, but my brain goes there automatically). How to do Punnett Squares Part 1, Part 2

    I also watched a video clip once that was saying why in a family with multiple male siblings, there was a higher likelihood of the youngest being gay. In this clip it said that a woman’s body would attack a male foetus trying to make it more female or something (I cannot remember, and I do not know the validity of that argument (and I cannot find the video again)) but so that with each passing male foetus the female’s hormones got stronger. True or not the like genders are easier on the prospective parents gender seemed to stick in my mind, with me at least.

    Somewhere around the time we learned base genetics in high school and getting into MPreg stories I had wondered what would happen to an YY foetus. Based on survival rates of XYY foeti, I concluded that most likely result would not be viable. But I felt that if magic was taking what it had to work with especially the first time it had ever done something like that, excluding YY as a combination when there was a 25% chance of it, would be negligent. So that is where the quints came from. . Punnett Square for MPreg Offspring Biological Gender

    I looked up all the ways that sperm could meet an egg (I started on Wikipedia and when I got the official names of things but needed more info I moved to google and books and things), and ended up drawing it to keep it straight and then I added in the statistical likelihood of male, female or YY babies and went from there to create the quints. Then I took the statistics for hair colour and randomised those amoungst the quints and randomly gave them eye colours keeping them to the recessive end of the spectrum with blue, green, grey eye colour (the squares of colour next to the names).

    I also did the Punnett Squares for the hair colour (explanation) of Harry and Draco’s offspring (eyes are too complicated) and statistically divided those amoung the kids. (Draco is blond which means he is double recessive blond and double dominant Not Redhead; Harry has dark non-auburn hair but had a redheaded parent so he theoretically is dominant/recessive Brunet/blond and Not redhead/redhead). This also means that unless there is a mutation or some other fun quirk in genetics it would be practically impossible for Harry/Draco to genetically have a redheaded child. But genetics are complicated and fun so that is why one of the girl’s has strawberry-ish blond hair.Added is the combinations of genetics for hair colour for Punnett Squares for some HP characters. Most people were brunet (since all the Weasley’s are the same, and there isn’t a lot of Malfoy’s to boost blonds). But if I remembered someone as brunet when they aren't I’m sorry. And I did the Punnett Square for Harry X Ginny’s Offspring as it is cannon :( and they have a one fourth chance of auburn haired children.

    Curly hair is dominate over Straight hair it might seem negligent but I never do squares for this as on a single persons head (of curly hair at least) not all of the curls are the same type. So I usually guess at it.

    This is of course not an exact science I know someone that was born with black hair that became blond within their first year naturally. All three of my cousins (by one aunt and uncle) are blond despite both parents being brunet and they are the first blonds in the family in a long while. So yay genetics!

    Babies are born with brown or blue eyes and they can change from there. This could be such a quick change that you could have sworn that they always had green eyes but it really wasn’t so. For example my mom swears my brothers always had hazel eyes but they were most likely born with brown eyes that lightened to hazel (instead of blue; as my mom doesn’t remember blue eyes for them).

    Names: The names also bothered me a bit as JKR clearly took the names she used from the same sources per-family (if not purposely it looks that way). But my grandmother ended her generations-long naming convention when she had kids so really kids can be named anything. I just had fun looking that stuff up, this is a happy website for surname meanings.

    But What I always found interesting is that in some fics they state Harry’s full name as Harold, Hadrian, or Harrison which I find funny because his full name is Harry James Potter and Harry is a nickname for Henry. So instead of having a Henry Jr. they could name their son Harry (Or call him that) and then the son of Harry is Harris and then the son of Harris is Harrison. That is something I am pretty sure that very few people remember occurred with names and naming children (I’ve met a Douglasson who was a son of a Douglas!). So in the end I had fun looking up names, stars, constellations and trying to fit it all in nicely so it made sense. The Prince naming convention I thought up as the most likely way for Albus Severus to keep that name, I just like saying it. But names are important they are who people are, they have stories and weight. I believe the writers should think about that when naming characters, history is important especially when you want to name someone something like Jack Jonathon, which you could mean to do that, but Jack is a nickname for John so you essentially named the guy John Jonathon (though the two evolved separately from Yahweh; Yahweh is Gracious (John/Jack) and Yahweh has Given (Jonathon)).

    Holidays: Somewhere around eight-ish-years-old I had realised that I don’t believe in the Abrahamic God. My parents wanted to let us make our own religious choices and as a family we celebrated Christian holidays as that was how my parents were raised. I had tried Christian religions but couldn’t agree, and found Wicca when I was about ten-years-old. When I realised that I still didn’t believe in Gods but liked the interconnectedness of the world, celebrating time, seasons, harvest, etc. I was what I called Wiccan but not Pagan for a while, then realised that the Wiccan holidays were set rigidly in the calendar, and Mabon was a name that made little sense and had no historical standing. And I did more research into the history of Celtic pagans and Germanic pagans (as that is my ancestry). Read Bede, did a lot of research a good portion of it in German and then came up with a meshing of holiday traditions as historically accurate as I could get them and have been celebrating this mesh of a godless form of the old religions for a while. So that is the culmination of almost 20 years of research and living. I have some bookmarked sites, Wikipedia actually has a good amount of info. I did read some of the stuff from Saint Bede the Venerable (English monk lived from 672/673 – 26 May 735)’s books, I count and calculate the dates of holidays in accordance to the traditional time and length that they were, etc. I have the info as I use it, which is usually easy to point out the origin of certain traditions.

    So if you need more info you can ask me. Before you write in a story somewhere that Beltain is 30. April or 01. May (from a traditional Celtic pagan perspective, those dates are true-ish for at least some Wiccans) you can ask me. Just tell me the year and as long as I can get a calendar and the equinox and solstice dates I can tell you when the holiday was. Same goes for the Harvest and Hunter moon. Unless you’re asking for ten or more years in the past or into the future, I probably have the dates already calculated out. If you ask me for this sort of calculations (I can also teach you how to do it yourself) please give a timeframe for when you need the info by, so I can get it done in a timely fashion.

    Review Replies

    Yeah I need a beta. If you corrected bits for me Thanks! If you offered to beta I’ll probably be in touch. I have the worst luck with betas not being able to stick around, RL gets in everyone’s way, which makes sense.

    Yes I know that pregnancy is a wonderful experience and an important step in life. But Harry stayed in the Room of Requirements, mostly alone, reading. I couldn’t write that for anything, to me that sounds utterly boring (to write) the same thing practically every day. I have another MPreg fic (partially written, not posted yet, SS/HP, mostly porn) that actually goes through the pregnancy, and I researched for that one like crazy!

    Like I said before I may in the future write one-shots about the life of the characters in specific circumstances, so one can see the difficulties in raising all the children.

    Sorry Draco was only slapped ‘in scene’ not punched, but off scene he was verbally punched a lot.

    This pairing in this fic I suppose is not romantic, no. I think they are super cute and sweet. My idea of sweet and soppy is a happy ending for everyone, so sorry that our ideas don’t match up.

  2. My SciFi/Fantasy NaNoWriMo Novel was entered in a Contest I would appreciate the support

    in Great wall of ...

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    So I really haven't done anything exciting China and Travel-wise but I did write another novel in November for NaNoWriMo.

    The novel that I wrote for NaNoWriMo this November is entered into a contest at Jukepop where I could win $200 and have it put in a library. To win I need a lot of +votes. To read my novel you have to sign in to the site but you can do that by signing in with Facebook, or signing up for the site regularly. The contest ends at the end of February I'll update at least a chapter a week, and if you like it you can give a +vote for each chapter. This is also a first edit, so critique and suggestions are welcome!

    I would really appreciate your support and opinions on my novel! Thanks!

    If anyone else is in this contest pass your story link on and I'll check it out!

    http://www.jukepop.com/home/read/6035?chapter=1

    Summary: Time and Space are infinite, and always changing. They are not linear or logical at the best of times, but it doesn't mean that they cannot be hurt. Christopher Michael Smith is a Business Management Major in College He is an average guy with an average life. There is nothing spectacular about him nor is he boring and easily missed. He is from a statistically average family, in a statistically average town. He believes himself to be a practical and average person.

    But when is average and common an anomaly? When that is all you are. An anomaly so singular, so strange, so common, that it is stabilising, that it can fix and balance the wounds in the fabric of space and time.

    But do the wounds need healing? And if they do how much? Who is right and who is wrong? And what will it mean to the world as we know it?

  3. NaNoWriMo Characterisation Help: Survey for Business Majors

    in Original Character Development

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    This November I am writing a novel for NaNoWriMo. The basic plot is there are rips in Time and Space and the only one who can help heal them is an utterly average, and common human. I have looked up statistics and figures on the most common names, family style, university major, etc. Business Management Major is the most common. But there is nothing about what the average Business major likes to do. So if you are, will be, or were a Business Major in College (ages 16 and up) could you please fill out my survey and base certain answers on what you liked during college (or present if you haven’t gone to college yet). Any personal questions about religion, etc. are only in there so if I can see if certain beliefs and thoughts are more common to business majors. For example: My Character’s parents are from Generation X (born between 1991 or 1965 (depending on who out talk to) to 1981) which statistically mean that they had a strict religious up bring and when they got older they let up on that. So I want to combine that statistic with the most common ideology of Business Majors that I can find. Thank you and please return this to me before 01.November. 2013, when possible. The questions will become more specific to my novel at the end. If there is anything else you think that I should know pleases feel free to add it or if you don’t want to answer something that is cool too. Thanks!

    1. Are you: About to study Studying Graduated?
    1. Do/did/will you have a minor in school?
    1. What is one of your most difficult or time consuming assignments in college? And for what class was it? (doesn’t have to be related to your major)
    1. What type of classes did you take?
    1. What do you need to be good at to be a successful business major?
    1. What country are you from?
    1. Do you have any siblings? If you do are you the youngest, oldest, etc.?
    1. What religion were you raised with? What was/is you religion at the time of Business School?
    1. How strict was your religious upbringing? How strict were/are you in your religion at the time of Business School?
    1. In elementary/primary school what was your favourite and least favourite subject?
    1. How do you usually spend your free time?
    1. What do you typically do on a weekend night that you don’t need to study?
    1. What are your favourite books (at least 3)?
    1. What are your favourite movies (at least 3)?
    1. What are your favourite TV shows (at least 3)?
    1. What are your favourite genres?
    1. Do you consider or do others consider you to be overly curious?
    1. Do you believe that there are multiple universes?
    1. Assuming that there are multiple universes how likely do you think travel between them would be?
    1. Do you believe time travel is possible or will be possible in the future?
    1. Without looking it up, do you know why Chinese people put Fudogs (those stone lions) outside of buildings? If so why?
    1. If you saw a strange knot in a tree, would you go investigate it?
    1. If you did and the knot wasn’t really a knot but some sort of inky blackness. Would you touch it?
    1. If you found a sort of wooden rubics cube in the tree and when you accidently dropped it you were transported to a brightly lit room where you met a being that appears to be made of light and sounds vaguely female as they speak to you in your own language. How would you react?

  8. chan

    in Harry Potter

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    Here is a couple that I could think of

    FOR SERVICES RENDERED by Quill Lumos http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600007474 Severus/Harry

    Becoming Aria by Bjoernbaer http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095738 Vernon/Harry so far

    The Children of Atum stories by MeToo

    http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296869215&view=story&zone=hp Sirius/Remus/Harry, Severus/Harry

    Squires of Slytherin by DuisterNacht http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023742 Various/Harry

    Through the Glass, Darkly by Lexin http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=253 Percy/Harry, Severus/Harry

  9. Looking for any good Slave and Master fics/ sub Harry

    in Harry Potter

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    Here are my favourite BDSM fics all are SS/HP though. And If I remember right these are the ones that include collaring or similar etc.

    FOR SERVICES RENDERED by Quill Lumos http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600007474 Severus/Harry

    Pandora’s Box by Suzie74 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095003&chapter=1 Severus/Harry

    Life as I know it by Blinded_HP http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600007185 Severus/Harry

    The Rules of Life by Blinded_HP http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600012301 Severus/Harry

    Bruises Pristine by Eriador117 http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=5554 Severus/Harry

    Silver and Gold http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=26443 and the sequel Blood and Gold http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=28802 by Eriador117 Severus/Harry

    Of Skin and Hearts http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=11228 and the sequel Of Masters and Madness http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=13666 by Eriador117 Severus/Harry

    Serpent Child by Eriador117 http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=15760 Severus/Harry

  11. Master Servant Fics

    in Harry Potter

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    Here are my favourite BDSM fics all are SS/HP though.

    FOR SERVICES RENDERED by Quill Lumos http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600007474 Severus/Harry

    Harry’s Master by LokiGodric http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600026013&chapter=1 Severus/Harry

    My Pet Harry by aibean http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544199718 Severus/Harry

    Pandora’s Box by Suzie74 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095003&chapter=1 Severus/Harry

    Life as I know it by Blinded_HP http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600007185 Severus/Harry

    The Rules of Life by Blinded_HP http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600012301 Severus/Harry

    Bruises Pristine by Eriador117 http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=5554 Severus/Harry

    Silver and Gold http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=26443 and the sequel Blood and Gold http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=28802 by Eriador117 Severus/Harry

    Of Skin and Hearts http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=11228 and the sequel Of Masters and Madness http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=13666 by Eriador117 Severus/Harry

    Serpent Child by Eriador117 http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=15760 Severus/Harry

    Eriador117 http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewuser.php?uid=898 has a lot of other BDSM fics

  12. croosdressing harry fics

    in Harry Potter

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    Here is a list of my favourite crossdressing!Harry fics. Some are not complete, some are, in some of them Harry crossdresses a lot and others just on occasion. Sadly I lost two fics that were great and should be on the list one is a KS/HP that I was sure was on HP fandom and the other one was a LM/HP on FF.net that I am 85% sure is not Jade Green Eyes (because they don’t begin the same, but the author could have rewritten the fic). Enjoy!

    Little Miss Mary by Athea http://www.e-fic.com/athea/hp/harry1.html you can find the rest of the fic here http://e-fic.com/athea/hp/ just scroll down to the bottom of the screen it is Severus/Harry

    Love in the Dark by Heceteslover http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6587471/1/Love_In_the_Dark Eventually Severus/Harry so far Harry/Various, Flint/Harry and Millie/Harry (just snogging)

    My Pet Harry by aibean http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544199718 Severus/Harry

    Wife Swap 2.0 by Vampira6 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094577 Draco/Harry

    Secrets in Lace by AnnikavonRammstein http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=4110&chapter=1 Lucius/Harry

    A New Fetish by lightgoddess http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544194559 Severus/Harry

    Our Little Norrie by Aikawa_Akihiko http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094200 Weasley Twins/Harry

  13. Harry/incest/others

    in Harry Potter

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    I remember reading a similar story which I don't remember them ever mentioning Petunia, which was removed because of plagerism, so what you are looking for might be the original... which I have yet to find. So I hope someone knows this fic!

  14. Old/Middle English Gender-neutral Pronoun declension

    in Writers' Corner

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    I'm looking for the Old or Middle English pronoun declension for the gender-neutral pronouns 'a' and 'ou' I have found the declensions for all other pronouns but all I can find for the gender-neutral is that 'a' or 'ou' was used instead of he, she, or it (Old: hē, hēo, or hit Middle: he, heo, or hit) This however doesen't help for when I need to use the gender-neutral form or him/her, his/hers, etc. Does anyone know the declension for this?

  15. Myths and Facts of Homosexual Relationships

    in Unofficial Guides

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    I know it is a myth that all gay/any relationship has a strict top and bottom. But I must admit that the majority of people who are inclined to discuss their sex live with me are set in their ways and always top or bottom. A large part of this is due to these people being a part of the BDSM community. I do however feel in the case of fanfiction some of the original authors/producers wrote overly emotional emo and or girly male characters to begin with. and those particular characters I feel just belong on their knees or need to top once or twice to get over themselves.

    I have also had some friends, male, female, trans, straight, bi and gay cry on my shoulder, I've done it a few times to friends it doesn't have anything to do with my preferences in bed. I'm still a guy. So yeah it happens maybe a bit too much in fanfiction and BL and Yaoi, but we have tear ducts for a reason. Vulcans on the other hand do not have tear ducts and therefore should never cry (as it is physically impossible).

  16. Looking for Harry/Many - Mainly a chapter with Harry/moony w/ sirius watching

    in Harry Potter

    Posted

    I just read that fic! But I couldn't find it. I did however run across a similar fic in which Harry finds Sirius and Remus having sex and wants to join in. I did not read too far into it since I need to go to bed so there might be a beast scene similar to whac you described in this fic. It is very chan (Harry is like 9 fyi his whole sexual nature is due to some curse or similiar) it is called The Children of Atum

    If you haven't read it you might enjoy it.

  17. Harry Dancing Topless w/ nipples pierced

    in Harry Potter

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    So my last fic search I confused two fics. the first one was founds so now I'm looking for a slash fic in which Harry is at hogwarts and just happens to dance topless (not overly whorish, just with friends), I'm remembering/thinking gold nipple rings and green pants (for the whole gryffindor/slytherin thing) Does this story even exist?

  18. SSHP abused Harry saved by Snape

    in Harry Potter

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    i think you have two stories mixed up. The one, with the pierced nipples, sounds like For Services Rendered. The other, i'm not sure about

    Soche funny thing is I had decided to reread For Services Rendered about a week ago and stopped at chap ten and started reading new thing it must have gotten stuck in my head. I wish their had been dancing though. Thank you for your help. By the way I like your Inu-Youkai

  19. SSHP abused Harry saved by Snape

    in Harry Potter

    Posted

    I'm looking or this fic I once read. It involved Harry being very abused, or sold as a whore when he was younger and Snape saving him. I just remember at one point Harry and Snape have some of the Slytherins (possibly Gryffindor's as well) over to Snape's quarters and there is dancing. Harry is only wearing green silk pyjama bottoms, and he has his nipples pierced (or something similar). One of those Harry doesn't attend Hogwarts as a normal student fics.

    There is a possibility that I am confusing two stories together and it might have a diferent premise (Like Harry wanting to be Severus' sub or something) I'm mostly looking for a fic inwhich Harry is dancing (for fun with friends) topless and he happens to have his nipples pierced. Thanks for the help!

  22. Dursley's raise Harry as a Whore

    in Harry Potter

    Posted · Edited by draechaeli

    I'm looking for a fic that was being updated around the same time as 'Reluctant Slut' was on AFF. It was in the 'Harry Potter AU/AR' threesome or male/male section.

    The premise is that Vernon decided that Harry was too costly or something, and raises him as a whore to raise money. The first few chapters is Harry with various OCs that are his clients and he is unhappy. When Harry gets his hogwarts letter there is like an auction for the last customer of the school year. and Fudge (who Vernon doesn't know is a wizard) wins. Then Harry goes to school and is relieved that his whoring days are mostly over. But he ends up being really horny and wanks in a bathroom stall and is caught by Theodore Nott (I think) who demands that Harry be his own personal slave.

    The story hadn't updated for a while and then when I couldn't find it to see if there was an update I thought it was moved. I searched in the Harry Potter AU/AR- threesome, Harry Potter AU/AR-male/male section and the Harry Potter- threesome.

    Anyone have any idea where this fic went? only 5 or so chapters and if it was removed for plagiarism I wouldn't mind a link to the original. Thanks

  23. Question about Fanfic warning preferences

    in Legal Questions/Debates

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    That was what I was figuring.

    It wasn't that I wanted more people to read the fic so much as that when I see some warnings I expect it to happen in between chapters 5 and 10 and when it doesn't happen until chapter 50 I get antsy. like with MPreg I'll be like... 'Ooo, ooo he's pregnant... oh no he's not.' Or in the same instant, the characters in the fic are like 'why is he sick to his stomach and moody?' and I'm screaming at my computer 'He's pregnant you idiot!!!'

    So yeah, warn I shall

  24. Question about Fanfic warning preferences

    in Legal Questions/Debates

    Posted

    I have a fanfic idea that involves MPreg. But I really don't want to add it as a warning, because then anytime any characters in the fic have sex people are going to assume they are going to get pregnant.

    I just wanted to hear peoples view on this in general. I mean I got into MPreg when I was reading a really good fic and suddenly the male character was pregnant. Personally I have all these standards for MPreg. For me to look for MPreg in a fandom there has to be a decent reason for a guy to get pregnant: a world with magic, a society set a couple hundred years in the future, the parties involved are not strictly human, etc. I will admit that I do often when coming across a MPreg fic in for example: House MD. I read it because I want to know how in 2010ish House got Chase pregnant, or something similar.

    I already have this future fic of mine planned out. I have a logical reason for this male getting pregnant. I also believe that I am a good writer, and therefore no one could get angry at me or those respects.

    I was just wondering how many people would get angry and stop reading the fic because of surprise MPreg, or would you continue reading because the situation was well thought out, logical (as logical as MPreg can get) and well written?

    The second part of this is do you think I would get in trouble on any fanfic posting sites/LJ if I left this warning off? For other reasons this fic will have a pretty high rating so it is not like I'm saying "Please, 12-year-old whose parents would kill me if they knew you read a suplise-mpreg fic, come read!"

    Thanks for your imput, and sorry I'm not going to tell you the fandom, since that would ruin the surprise.

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