lexxfan4life

To the reviewer from my latest story, Wishful DragonCon: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107141 First off, I usually take my critisim personally, but learning to take them as ways to write better. I've always seem to write in a narrative transcript format. Yes, I had many complaints about it, but this is the style I'm comfortable with. I have, no complaints, for my recent version of Maroon Lust, which is written the same way. Also, this story is mostly taken from it being made into a script. I was told, in a script, that there are less detail. Also, my characters are not based on anyone, I know, personally. Hannah, is not me, at all. I'm not the character's age. I try, to make the story, as real as possible. Well, I try to make the settings real. Yes, I've been to Dragon*Con, so I try to make look like I'm not making any errors on location and what would generally happen at this particular convention. Yes, it does feel short. Try writing it. It's 86 pages out on my WordPad and over 100 pages as a script. As for the sex scenes. I am writing a script and try not to give out a lot of graphic detail. I have had, complaints, where my details were too graphic. That's tame, compared to what I can write. I will try and make it more like a novel, but it will take a while. A long while. Also, you think this one is bad, you should read the plot from 2008. It may had, a lot of detail, but it contained myself and people I knew. But, the plot was confusing and some scenes actions didn't make sense, some dialogue was pointless and the action was out-dated. That is all, for now.

I enjoy writing sex scenes. As much as I want to make the scenes real, I end up making it fiction as well. For instance, "Long John Lovers". A commenter said "it wasn't a realistic sex scene", in a way. But, it's a fictional story. I may have experience, I'm just not gonna be right 100% of the time, on an actual sex scene.

For those who read my recent version of Maroon Lust, I am rewriting it again. I know, it can be tiring to reread the same topic over and over, but as a amateur writer, revisions need to be made. That's what writers do anyways. Nothing is final, with me, apparently and I keep getting ideas to make the story better. The revision, is in progress, and I'll start publishing once I get a lot written. For now, if you want, enjoy what I've written so far. If you have read it, and wanna give me feedback here, I appreciate it. I take, all feedback, as a way to write better. Plot wise, anyways.

Thanks for helping me. It's one thing I don't have to worry about.

In the television section, there's a drop-box for Misc. TV Shows and Crossover. Should I use that? That's the only solution that comes close.

Something like that. An original story that involves fictional online role-playing.

Okay, I am writing a story (that's not posted yet) cause I have no idea what category to label it in. It's original, yes. But, it will have two people, from the story, participating in an online role-playing game. The name of the fandom and fictional online characters are named, such as "Zoey gets on her computer and role-plays as Xev, from Lexx" It will also include the story line and dialogues while on the computer and in role-playing mode. There are also her times, in real life, outside of cyber-space. So, what category am I looking for?

Not an issue anymore. I get it now.

I get that the Mods here are very specific on what they want to see as a disclaimer (to all the stories) down to the very last word or else your story will be hidden or deleted. I get that for the TV shows and stuff, but Original? I thought, writing an original story, you can make up your own disclaimer...I was wrong. I always hope my my stories to get reviews, but the only reviews I seem to get are the disclaimer is somehow wrong with the story. Why is that, when I write original, I can't make up my own disclaimer? It's my story anyways. I will make the changes, though. I admit, I'm not a morning person and seeing my disclaimer notice was not the first thing I wanted to see.

Thanks

I have a question. Where do you publish a story that includes a crossover of an original story and tv show characters from a different Genre? You see, I'm writing an original, but using characters from a TV show. The story has nothing to do with the TV show at all. Just using first names and character descriptions. Do I put it in the Crossover section? Original? Or TV Series? And how would I write the disclaimer? I'm writing a story on a teenager's crush on her high school teacher. I'm add in the names and descriptions of characters from LEXX. Xev and Kai as her parents, May as the school's head cheerleader, President Priest as the Principle, Prince as the History teacher and Bunny as his wife. Of course, there will be five added original characters. Thanks to those who help me

I'm looking for some Genie and Master erotica stories. Not many of those around here.

My birthdate is set correctly. I'm glad I checked that out