Calanthee

Rectum... hell! I'd Killed'em!

Its fine to seek perfection in yourself if that's what you want to do, but have compassion for those not as skilled as yourself some people just enjoy telling a story even if its not grammar and spelling perfect. I have read stories with perfect grammar and spelling and tone of voice that comes across superior and the story ends up boring as hell! To me a good story makes me want to read each word that comes next even if they are spelled wrong and the periods and commas are missing. To me character development and plot structure are much more important than pure and perfect grammar and spelling... surely not every word we say to each other daily is perfect english we are all flawed is some ways, so are stories. A really good story rises aboves its flaws just like people do. No ones perfect, neither are stories. It must be very boring to read stories only to seek out their mistakes. Guess that's why I wouldn't make a good editor. Cal

Its fine to seek perfection in yourself if that's what you want to do, but have compassion for those not as skilled as yourself some people just enjoy telling a story even if its not grammar and spelling perfect. I have read stories with perfect grammar and spelling and tone of voice that comes across superior and the story ends up boring as hell! To me a good story makes me want to read each word that comes next even if they are spelled wrong and the periods and commas are missing. To me character development and plot structure are much more important than pure and perfect grammar and spelling... surely not every word we say to each other daily is perfect english we are all flawed is some ways, so are stories. A really good story rises aboves its flaws just like people do. No ones perfect, neither are stories. It must be very boring to read stories only to seek out their mistakes. Guess that's why I wouldn't make a good editor. Cal

Its fine to seek perfection in yourself if that's what you want to do, but have compassion for those not as skilled as yourself some people just enjoy telling a story even if its not grammar and spelling perfect. I have read stories with perfect grammar and spelling and tone of voice that comes across superior and the story ends up boring as hell! To me a good story makes me want to read each word that comes next even if they are spelled wrong and the periods and commas are missing. To me character development and plot structure are much more important than pure and perfect grammar and spelling... surely not every word we say to each other daily is perfect english we are all flawed is some ways, so are stories. A really good story rises aboves its flaws just like people do. No ones perfect, neither are stories. It must be very boring to read stories only to seek out their mistakes. Guess that's why I wouldn't make a good editor. Cal

Some vicious Grammar and Spelling Freaks seem to read stories not to just enjoy them but to find fault with them in every possible way. Not to be helpful, encouraging, or constructive but just to feel superior and bring some one down. People write for a lot of reasons not always to create world shattering litature, but sometime for personal reasons. It helps them to relieve stress, sometimes just to be creative, or simply deal with lifes everyday problems. So what's wrong with that if this a free open website. Everyone, except plagiarizers or stealers of others people's words, should be able to write and publish here whatever their skill level, unless you plan to start testing us for grammar and spelling! God Forbid!
If you find a story you don't like and you feel that it's beneath you.... simple don't read it. Don't troll it with hateful nasty critics just to tear the down the story and its writer. If you feel you can be helpful with your critisms and your intent is pure then fine go ahead kindly make suggestions. But vicious cruel preditory Grammar and Spelling Freaks are not wanted, your the worse Trolls of all! Cal

New original story by Gslinger, I have no beta, any feedback would be appreciated!
Story by Gslinger
Title: That Necessary Shimmer
Summary: A very beautiful synthetically created humanoid with a twofold or dual gender called an Ashim was purchased to service the carnal needs of the crew and officers aboard a starship.
Fandom: N/A Original
Chaptered Story: 1 &2 so far, more to come.
URL:
http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106198

If it sound like an autopsy... it too clinical and not sexy, still some slang word are vulgar or sexist, I rather use a discription of what the body part does or how it reacts, in place of slang or anatomical terms, to me it's whatever makes the story flow and evokes the right sexy mood.
Angry Cursing is another story, it calls for different guide lines, it need to shock!
I positively hate the word cunt it is totally sexist,...I wont use it for any reason what- so- ever, not even as a curse...and pussy is silly I can't take it seriously. I'd rather use wet folds, or moist petals. For Female insults I'd rather use slut or horny bitch.
As for men I perfer Cock, shaft, manhood over dick, but will use dick in cursing, even though it could have two different meanings in that context.
For what it's worth my 2 cents
It would be nice it they would come up with more cleverily discriptive words for sexual functions!
Even thought it probably considered anatomical or clincal...I'm sort of like the word ejaculate, it has its own funky class.LOL
Cal

Getting near the end, been writing this story since 2007! Be-warned needs a beta bad, because I am a horrible editor. I had two or three beta's. but they fled long ago, so all mistakes are mine. I decided to write the story just for me, experimenting with content, humor, and sex as it pleased me. Only Chapter 75 and the Hot slashy afterwards to go.
Title: Darkness
Author: Gslinger
Rating: Adult+++
Pairings: Darkness and just about everyone who moves!
Summary: A Demon warrior is sent to kidnap a young half-elf boy, for his Dark Wizard Master, who has special plans for this particular boy.
Feedback: Oh yes please, just have mercy on my poor spelling and grammar!
Fandom: Original story with D&D influence, depending on a heavy slash content, because a beautiful evil wizard can't keep his hands and his perverse appetites under control... because he's a dedicated full time bastard... oh but he is pretty, but he tries to disguise his good side.
Url: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094883
Thanks for reading, Calanthee aka the Gslinger
Guess what guys I actually got a volunteer to beta for me... Yippy-ki-ya... Hooray, and I thought nobody liked me. I just hope everything works out all right...because I had several beta's that fled after only a short time. I look forward to see how it all works out??? Stay tuned for further updates.

I know this is obvious but, normal words used in sexual context can have a totally different meaning
These are just examples; if you can come up with better ones go for it, any help would be appreciated. Calanthee
Abandon, yielding control to someone else or yielding to natural impulses. [sex impulses]
Abandoned, morally unrestrained [ wanton]
Abdomen, area of the body between the chest and pelvis [belly, stomach, abs etc]
Ablaze, being on Fire [on fire with lust]
Abuse, a corrupt practice and misuse....by abuser [molester]

Rectum... hell! I'd Killed'em!

Being very sexy and having a seductive personality and having alluring salacious personality... has nothing to do with old age at all... For surely there is ... a good number of older women and man, out there with the skills, abilities, and artistic charms to seduce just about anyone. It all in your stance and mannerisms and the image of confidence you project to the world. Just think of all our older actors, who still project a confident sexy personality and outstanding charisma.
Age has not nothing to do with it, its all in your outstanding smooth active romantic groovy style!
Groovy, Calanthee

Being very sexy and having a seductive personality and having alluring salacious personality... has nothing to do with old age at all... For surely there is ... a good number of older women and man, out there with the skills, abilities, and artistic charms to seduce just about anyone. It all in your stance and mannerisms and the image of confidence you project to the world. Just think of all our older actors, who still project a confident sexy personality and outstanding charisma.
Age has not nothing to do with it, its all in your outstanding smooth active romantic groovy style!
Groovy, Calanthee

Bronxwinch,
One is never told old to indulge our wild and happy muses, for their of appreciation of hot classy elvish smut or any other kind! The day we allow ourselfs to get too old... were dead... so we might as be buried! Age is just a number not a lifestyle!!!
Cal the Gslinger

How about the evil villains that justify themselves by telling themselves they are doing the right thing...they don't think of themselves as the bad guys?
To me the biggest "real" such bunch of Villains in society are politicians, and I am non-partician! They are too party centric [they believe there party can do no wrong] and this smoke screen keeps them from seeing what needs to done to help the country and the people as whole. And they justify themselves by holding the delusion that what each of their party wants is right and correct no matter who it hurt or kills in process. And we in society stupidly back them up and vote for bodies/faces/parties, rather than the necessary issues that need to be addressed... in a way we get what we deserve I suppose?
I think this country's in bad shape and falling further into a dark deep hole, especially with joblessness and poverity,for our villainess politicians are the slaves and lackies of corporate purse string pullers, these people are making money on this country's present conditions... so why change things! They want the wealth to be in the hands of 10% of people or companies, while the other 90% of the people go to hell in a hand basket.
Super Villains exist all around us, but they don't see themselves that way... no they think their the good guys!
I perfer my dear unreal fantasy villains, who know they're the bad guys and when I get tired of them, I can close the book or turn off the computer, but truth and reality is a another story, we can't run from it... we are surrounded.
Just a thought... or my opinion, Calanthee
Perhaps I should just

Dear High Masters of Forum?
To many do-dads and thing-a-ma-jiggies on this new forum and no explainations as to why they exist? Why?
Damn-it I still miss the battle-game where I could kill things and get kill... it helped to reduce my daily stress levels.
So what's with reputation score thingies and what do they mean. How can I raise or lower it to be good or bad?
Bored badass old Dog/Wolf, which prefered the things the way were in the good old days, so there can you dig it?
Calanthee