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  1. I too would like to see more healthy developing relationships. Whipe i enjoy the aill they won't they set up and narrative i find mhswlf wanting s sequel based on developing and MAINTAINING that relationship.

    To ise a very strange example, order of the stick is a fantasy webcomic which established an unlikely relationship betaeen two characters developing right away. They stretched it out a bit, but the minute the feelkng were out in the open they were recipricated and they've been working together to maintain it ever since, even when apart.

    To use a slightly more controversial (in some odd way) example, it's why i never objected to the final relationship of legend of korra (no spoilers). To me it wasn't realisign they should date Nd keep dating, it was realising they already WERE, and we'd sewn them working on it for at least two seasons.

    Please forgive my examples if they are confusing.

  2. The ghost girls, ember, desiree etc, aren't ONLY ghosts.

    The setting takes place at a university instead of a high school and the accident is much bigger, occuring in the middle of campus. However, while danny ia the first to be afectes, he's not the only one. All ghosts are actually halfas formed when a ghostly entity unleashed by the accident latches onto a host, merging with them ans trying to take over. Danny's eithsr failed right away or is biding it's time, but ember and the others were original students he knew and had varying levels of connection with who became "halfa's" themselves.

    E.g ember used to be a music student who loved teasing him

    Spectra was an actual and very sincere counicller and struggles with her new urges and the voice telling her to indulge

    Sam is being slowly overtaken by undergrowth's ofdshoot and doesn't know

    Desiree could be a dance sudenr or model OR a pudgy shy girl with rotten luck to shy to talk to her crush, danny, who suddenly finds her wishes being granted out of knowhere.

    Lydia is an antisocial art student and tatoo artist, or a live model.

    Each of them is possesed by the right spirit to make them a half-ghost version of what they are in the show which tries to overtake them in it's appearance but is thwarted by danny.... so they retreat into the girls mind and try subtly influincing them or talking them into things.

    This process also changes their form, making them much curvier and lets them 'go ghost' at will. And since there's only ONE acceptable half-ghost around the girls go looking for their man's secret identity.

    This lets you play with the superhero thing by giving the ghost girls 'secret identities', play with the established and add some twists and mysteries, adds some weight to relationships, gives a nice conflict and problem to solve, lets you write body growing scenes and allows you to solve a bunch of the problems with them not being technically alive.

    You can also mix established characters like dash and skulker or even throw curveballs like making maddie or sam or  danny himself the 'vlad' figure.

  3. I’m well aware of classic vampire lore.

    they also have to compulsivly count seeds, grains and the like or untie knots. they can turn into mist, are only PARALYSED, not killed by a stake through the heart, are repelled by mustard seeds, cannot cross salt lines, can control any ‘night’ creature incluing rats, spiders, flys and bats and can mesmerise victims.


    my current list of candidates (and the thing I’ll make them into if i go that angle) is:

    Mavis (a vampire, no question)

    Wednesday adams (either a vampire or just an adams)

    Draculaura? (punk vampire)

    Gothella/Grufftine (vampire)

    Rachel ‘raven’ roth (probably a witch)

    Agatha penderghast (witch)

    Coraline jones (living doll, and probably also a sort-of witch)

    Lydia deetz (poltergeist)

    Marlyn munster (transfer student)

    lenore the dead girl (zombie)

    creepy creature (bug person)

    rei ayami (clone, homunculous or frankenstein)

    misty (phantom)

    Lacey shadows (drawing a blank)

    shrinking violet (dark fairy)


    and maybe but i’m not sure:

    Alessa ghaletspy?

    tak (alien)

    Elisabeth from ‘end’

    nancy from ‘the craft’

    ruby gloom girls

    danny phantom girls

    jinx (gremlin or imp)



    my current plan is for a ‘vampire’ and ‘witch’ clique conflict and interpersonal drama going on. also, they’ll all be of age



  4. straightforward but gimmicky idea for a spyro story in honour of his reignited trilogy. While this can be done any way you like i personally see the characters in this story as either anthropomorphised or mostly humanised, but still with their traits lile spyro's horns and elora's legs.


    as a reward for saving avalor yet again, elora has decided to arrange an actual beach vacation for spyro with herself coming along to show him to his accomidations and help him settle in. It turns out, spyro’s never actually relaxed before, due to being too focussed on his warrior goals (going by his ‘great warrior falls to love thing’) and dragonfly upbringing and while doing so he starts to notice things about elora…. like the way she sways her hips and juts out her rear (since most depictions of her tend to emphasise her "i’m a faun pose")….. and elora like how this is going, playing it up. Elora decides to stay a while longer, and we get a chapter or two of her flirting and him flustered.


    you can leave it at here, and have him figure it out and pair up with her, ending with their first night


    you can have his old friend cynder at the hotel, at a self-discovery retreat to recover from her brainwashing and evil, and quickly realises spyro’s suddenly taking an interest in her….. noticing things like the way her broach lays in her cleavage (if anthropomorphised or humanised) or the arch of her neck.

    then he introduces her to elora and it turns out spyro (being new to noticing girls) is TERRIBLE at hiding his interest and the girls realise this is a rival with a history right away. so cynder sweet talks spyro into inviting her to join them and invite spyro to joing her at the retreat, which elora joins as well.

    what follows is a series of holiday activities where one, the other or both use it to entice spyro away from the other and grab his attention.


    examples include asking his opinion on swimsuits, beach volleyball (where he gets to watch elora crouch and leap and cynder ‘bounce’ in the air. A tie for his interest) 

    watching them waterski (in soaking clothes and hair with glittering skin/fur/scales (mostly a tie, but elora manages to hip-check cynder off-balance since steadying herself with her wings backfires)

    pool and reef swimming (cynder is a much better athletic and fast swimmer and pulls of a poolside look but elora sneaks spyro off and signs up to explore a reef) 

    or yoga classes (where they brush up against spyro. elora’s legs give her difficulty so cynder outlasts her).

    spyro has odd dreams, sensual about the girls he doesn’t understand.

     but each of them manages to confess and acheve a special first time night which he isn;t dense enough to ignore.

    elora while on a forrested observatory outpost and cynder while spelunking.

    you could have a keijo match between them to entice spyro….. during which they both land breast (cynder) and butt (elora) first on spyro


    If anyone's interested in writing or has suggestions how to continue, please let me know.


    I'm aware cynder wasn't in the trilogy, my current explanation is that the portal summons him from the legends world in this universe, so he alternates bewteen the two settings and spending time with the two girls.

  5. One night, guybrush and Elaine are enjoying a nice, quiet night in when a mysterious pirate ship sails in and attacks, kidnapping guybrush. surprisingly, there’s only a single pirate, morgan le flay, who takes him to another island with a pre-prepared wedding and marries him, proclaiming that through pirate law, as long as he stays on the island he’s hers and elaine will have to deal with it.

    However, elaine launches her own pirate attack and recovers him, but morgan catches up on the trip back and while fighting, the two get so caught up they accidentally sabotage their steering and run aground on a third island.

    due to the wonky laws of the pirate islands, guybrush is married to whoever has his hand on more islands, and an ‘island marriage’ counts. thus the two scheme to seduce and lay with him to legally win his hand. however, the second party quickly realises that they can nullify this by ALSO consummating an ‘island marriage’, resulting in a threesome.

    guybrush is able to create/arrange a rescue, but morgan and elaine glare at each other, silently vowing this isn’t over.

  6. i’m trying to decide the male lead but i’m flexible on the females. examples include Rachel ‘raven’ roth, lydia deetz, wednesday adams, coraline jones, mavis dracula…. maybe Marilyn munster?

    i’m using this as a template at the moment.

    my current idea is that the male is the son of the headmaster or landowner of a school for young women of age and the girls are all very interested in seeing a male after so long. there wuold be pre-existing relationships, friendships grudges etc for him to disurupt.

    i’m thinking there’d also be a rival normal school filled with mundane rivals/friends etc from their respective series.

    I MAY be playing up certain monster angles, like doll-coraline, witch raven, vampire mavis and maybe wednesday…..

  7. her loyal bodyguard becoming beetle is the first, then scorpia, then others. as she begins to get an inkling of who he is she can make a move on peter parker and start flirting/helping him out and getting villainesses closer to home.

    this would also make sable the one behind the sinister 6


    it also adds a good reason for villain attacks and mystery arc to the story


    PLUS, it helps keep a larger cast manageable by making them sable’s sub characters. like how in lewd new world each wife has her own girls? sable and followers would be his ‘villain’ batch of girls

  8. i just had an idea for a story arc for pacing and to tie them all together. you know how i suggested sable is a mafia princess he saves? you remember how in spectacular spiderman the criminals make supervillains to distract him from their crimes?


    what if he saves her at pretty much the beginning, while she’s having a crisis of where to go and sable, for want of a better word, FUNDS the supervillainesses to get more time with spiderman and to try out this direction in life?


    we treat her as one of his ‘core’ girlfriends and the supervillainesses as her supporting cast. that is to say we control the pacing by making it about him taking his relationships with say…. mj, gwen, felicia and sable seriously and taking his time, while the villainesses attack and are backed by a mysterious backer (sable). thus she gets to woo him, get to know him better (because unlike the others she doesn’t have a way to find or hang out with him) and have him ‘save her’ from this life?

    basically, she’s decided she want out and wants HIM to be the one to take her out, but since unlike mmj, gwen and felicia she can only be with him when under attack she makes attacks.

  9. the above should be enough, but these are also interesting villainesses of his

    titania, the hulk villainess, is actually afraid of him

    coldheart the hero-hating goverment assasin targeted him first

    and princess python, snake charmer of the circus of crime, is the first villainess he ever faced.

  10. hmmm…. i like they, because it calls to mind a shadowy mass of preators operating behind the mask of a human being…. but that may be implying a much greater workforce than one person and put pressure on you, so singular faceless entity it is.


    okay, steering away from the…. murderier girls i have some ideas, as said before for how the villainesses can be worked into the setting as people in his college or the like, such as:


    doreen the white rabbit being a rich girl who thinks that she inherently deserves the superhero boyfriend and creates a persona to hunt him down when he isn’t interested. or she tries to seduce peter into doing her homework and refuses to accept no, to the point of caring about that more than the homework. as a gag on his ongoing poverty, he could not be able to stand her but cave quite often because her bribes pay his bills.

    Bomshell sr being one of his teachers and juniour one of his fellow students. they take shifts, covering for each other to throw off any suspicion on one of them. (for those who don;t know bombshell is a mother-daughter pair of superpowered theives who got their powers from a presumed failed experiment when the mother was un-knowingly pregnant)

    ana could be still be in training and much more interested in modern hunting techniques and social behaviour while still learning the classics from her dad. as a nod to kraven marvel’s spiderman, she livestreams her hunts, including the ongoing one with spidey. she’s also very blatantly interested in him and trying to keep her dad from knowing her fans ship them hard.

    speaking of, Screwball. world’s first live-streaming supervillain. she could be in a continuous rivalry with ana over views and spidey. Her main interaction could be challenging him to bring in hits on her show. she obviously jumps in to help him against ana at times. in marvel’s spiderman she’s liz allen, compensating for being only a normal intellect in a school of geniuses, but you dont have to go that way, though we don;t have any other identity to use. having her fans attack people only happened in the video game. in the comics, however, she’s been known to help spidey out by using her gymnast abilities to pose as him when needed.

    scorpina (goverment asasin, goverment unknown) could be a student from a rival school who decided to trash the place by building a super-suit and framing it as a random villain attack. if they’re holding some kind of science contest, she could simply be sabotaging the cmopetion/ or maybe she’s drawing out spidey for observation under ana’s orders, making her a professional spider-distraction.

    Keemia marko, as said before, is a homeless runaway and part of an outreach education program peter is enlisted in, so he tutors her part time. her dad has no idea where she is and is motivated in this version by finding her. she has some bitter feelings towards him and like in marvel’s spiderman, the same powers.

    francine beck is a bit of an egotist actress, but nowhere near as bad as her father. she’s overdramatic and friendly with her fellow students and doing an engineering degree alonside drama in order to learn special effects. which brings her in contact with peter. she is very fond of him and his dramatic life and walking comedy tendencies but blames spiderman for her father’s long absences in her life (due to his being in jail and in hiding keeping him from her. in reality he just doesn’t care). she is a very accomplished illusionist and special effects wizz, but no mysterio yet. instead, she’s best at camera-jacking, footage analysis (spotting fakes) and getaways or alibis.

    Lady octopus (carolyn trainer, i’ using the marvel’s spiderman design) an egineering student alonside peter and personal pupil of doctor octavius. recognises peter as brilliant and has a slow growing crush based on that and a number of other things, like accidentaly finding out he’s unusually well-built for a nerd and his saving her (as peter) from her old teacher gone mad.

    komodo, goverment spook with the lizard formula, could be a girl trying to piggyback doctor connors research or an actual sheild operative sent to tail him.

    silver sable, up and coming mafia princess who gets attacked for her family quite a lot and starts coming on to spidey out of appreciation and because she wants a bodyguard and maybe offers to fund him. a somehow less evil white rabbit.

    Janice lincon, as a nod to her father’s mob history and the beetle’s mercenary career, could be sable’s actual bodyguard, but a mundane one overwhelmed by all this at first, so they steal designs and parts for the beetle armour to gain an edge. janice is pretty much silver’s number two and muscle/enforcer/best friend and her personal super after the upgrade. incredibly loyal and willing to stand by silver be she good or evil, as a nod to both of them having history across the spectrum (silver being a classic somtimes antihero sometimes antihero and beetle being in the thunderbolts). she GLADLY fetches spiderman at her boss’s request and is very grateful for keeping her alive. may have a crush on her boss.



    so as i was saying earlier it would be fun for spidery to have these girls fall for him, some as peter, some as spidey and have that be the reason for a new sinister six, they team up to catch their crushes, confess and win them over while holding them far away from anyone else. the spidey girls agree to help the peter girls if they’ll return the favour when it’s their turn. they probably do this because it becomes well known spidey’s dating black cat and peter’s dating mary jane.

    any of the above ones would work. i’ve tried to give them all different motivations and reasons to like him as a nod to the dynamic in spectacular spiderman

    given white rabbit’s history of forming teams that ditch her at the drop of a hat since she’s so abrasive and crazy, i’m gonna say it’s her idea  born out of both her perceived boyfriends ‘cheating’ on her, and while the girls take up the idea they don;t include her in the plan.

    they probably go after peter first since they’re new to supervillaining and he’s an easy taget. plus his reactin to hearing the plan, both targets and his being used as bait to draw out spidey would be hilarious.




    Charlotte winter, madame web’s granddaughter. she could be really fun for messing with timelines or as a plot person.

    joystick….. not much on her. she’s an adrenaline junkie who enters illegal superhuman gladiator contests, so given the name maybe seeing spidey inspired her to take up real-assasin’s creed stlye free-running and  videogame-inspired fighting and thrills?

    also, instead of she-venom, eddie’s ex girlfriend, what if the symbiote was an independent harem member? simlar to suu, from monster musume or ship in you ben 10 story, and capable of becoming a costume for anyone or groping them. alternativly, in the future-storyline of spidergirl, the venom symbiote is bonded to mary jane, which might work here and allow for her to join in heroics.





    to keep things clear, anyone below this line is a option, but comes with a LOT of baggage and is probably a bad idea.



    the murdery ones include

    goblin queen,  an evil clone jean gray and her clone-self army

    the queen, master of all insects and insect people




    francin frye, electra (VERY unhinged supervillain fan and stalker of electro of all people. got her powers through the genius method of kissing him when he was out of controll, dying and coming back). i’m imagining her as a very punk anarchist figure, mixed with the jla version of livewire.



    REALLY tricky ones include

    stunner: is a hologram. and yet somehow doc ock’s girlfriend. she’s not even HIS hologram

    delilah, the rose’s  (kingpin’s son’s) girlfriend. incredibly tangential

    shathra (evil spider-wasp shapeshifting god. eats totem people like spiderman)

    carmilla black, new scorpion, ex sheild agent and user of chemicals

    commanda, armoured theif. hasn’t been seen since civil war ad only briefly before that.

    lady stilt-man (because you KNOW you’ve hit rock bottom)

  11. well it was pretty much a normal colledge that co-incidentally kept attracting colledge age heroines and villainesses (like big hero 6 or disney’s marvel’s spiderman) but fair enough. i’ll make a prompt for it later.

    but i’ll hold onto a villainess list just in case. and to keep things clear they are NOT simply genderbent villains, but existing characters from various mediums

  12. so, the premise of the avengers academy mobile game is that everyone’s college age and enrolled in ‘avengers academy’. evil organisations like hydra, aim and thanos’s army are treated as rival schools, while still torturing their students, committing crimes and terrorist-like attacks.

    hero school, villain schools, so to speak.


    i just thought it could be a neat concept to play around with.

    maybe bombshell sr is a teacher and her daughter a student.

    maybe mary jane and gwen are roommates to make the love triangle extra awkward pre resolution

    maybe scorpina the assassin is a saboteur and vandal sent by a rival academy then persuaded to switch sides for real.

    maybe keemia is part of an ‘outreach’ program for people who can’t go to college for various reasons and peter’s the one in contact with her.


    that kind of thing. i had a few more, but what do you think of the idea?

  13. i meant actual, established villainesses like bombshell, silver sable, white rabbit, joystick etc

    as well as yes, female counterparts, but estabished female counterparts, like sandman’s daughter keemia, mysterio’s daughter francine and lady octopus (student, no relation)

    i have more, and i had a notion how you could work them in by using the colledge theme. including the villain’s daughters in a way which has them as civilians first, villains second to get around that.


    but good point on not noing whether preator’s writing it. i missed that. sorry.

  14. Speakig of, can i reccomend some villanesses? If he's in colledge i've some ideas how we could implement them…

    I DO need to know how AU i’m allowed to go though.

    i may be taking it a bit literally or a bit far but i know a feudal shiobi-lord themed spiderman harem fic and that the mobile game ‘avengers academy’ have given me some ideas…. plus i looked up a bunch of them

  15. Honestly i agree about sue, it is usually just a shot at reed and there are other guys in the universe. Maybe you could mention some other heroes going through something similar? Obviously not to the same degree…


    Okay, but if he's colledge age, that may make some of his villainesses a bit well established for him to charm.