Strange_idea

May 30, 2018

Well queen la could be captured for slave trade or hijack a ship that crashes. Shencould stick aroind longer until hiccup finds a long-distance portal yo get her home.

Megara could encontered either unlocking or unBLOCKing the ressurection system

May 30, 2018

Nothing like watching a game crash in a way that defies common sense and the growing realisationthat he has to do it again. It's the personality that makes it. A bit like msytery science theatre.

May 30, 2018

Its like watching sports, not everyone's thing but something to bond over and enjoy the human element from the commentor.

Another reason i ilke chugga is his luck pinballs from supernaturally good to bad, so his playthroughs are often very eventfull. Plus, he makes good points and has good humour

May 30, 2018

And i aplogise but i am in the process of writing the story, as i said in my dislaimer. I just wanted feedback

May 30, 2018

14 hours ago, WillowDarkling said:

Images are not allowed anywhere except for the Art Forum. And this is supposed to be a forum for discussing stories that are already written, or in the process of being written, not for challenges.

Willow Darkling, forum moderator.

Can i keep the links as references?

May 30, 2018

I reccomend chuggaaconroy, he goes into great detail about everything in the game and points out the lore whenever he cab. Bit of a cornball sense of humour and loves bad puns

May 30, 2018

A lets play is a gamer uploading a walkthrough and commentary of their experience with a game

May 30, 2018

Twilight princess is the specific zelda title midna appears in.

May 30, 2018

Spread across several consoles. Lets plays might be uour friend

There are emulators though

May 30, 2018

1 minute ago, Jwsponky said:

I admit that was an idea I hadn't really considered... Hmm...

It'd give a chance for character building and to bring them back once in a while

May 30, 2018

It'd give a chance for character building and to bring them back once in a while

May 30, 2018

Midna was the priness of a shaow world ganon took over for troops, and was cursed into imp form to keep outmof the way. She's beautiful in her true form, but people really like her imp form

May 30, 2018

Hmmm. Well, you could still have the girls run territories, but also have them send relief troops (extra units) to hiccup and act as a sort of summon when needed

May 30, 2018

It happens. Everyone has a different first game

May 30, 2018

Legend of zelda. Longrunning game series.

Theres a bunch of fanarts of 'sexy imp midna'. Check it out on ideas for how to sexify a dwarf or imp

May 30, 2018

I appreciate you listening to our suggestions, but don't feel pressured to use the ones you don't want. I like you're reasoning for hiccup, that does sound like him.

Here's a scenario, orcs are an aurora only unit because she's FURIOUS with the elvea over how they treated maleficent. And one thing that makes them fearsome is the twisting keeps them alive until the last drop pf blood is gone and the lasr bone is ground to poweder, so less guilt about it, since theu're fine when she changes them back. Thats assuming an influence from maleficent

May 30, 2018

1 minute ago, Jwsponky said:

This is also true. Though now I'm stuck by the idea of Maleficent being exiled from Pixie Hollow for actual evil deeds, leading Zarina to kind of panic when first meeting her...

This is great, yoy can build up the terror and mystery of how she turned into that for a while vefore revealing it.…

Ooh! What if she merged with aurora's mother as part of a sorcers deal that didn't go well for her. Or she's been channeling power from Aurora and getting human traits from exposure

May 30, 2018

5 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

Well, one of the original Netherghul in Fellowship of Evil was a male dwarf named Hakon, who in addition to planning to rewrite as a female named Haka, I had though about making an orc, since a dwarf mistress could be somewhat awkward given they are roughly child sized...

Not ubdoable, there's a thing i fojnd recently called shortstack.

Heres a picture of midna to illustrate

https://pokenerd2499.deviantart.com/art/Midna-648629935

2 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

This is true, even in the Overlord series fairies were only about the size of halflings... Though if I did go with Maleficent being a fairy that would mean they'd be human sized... This merits further consideration...

Or that she's a very old and powerful fairy sorceress, or and elf who became a firy through power, or human who was absorbed into a fairy as a host

6 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

I had planned a connection between the elves and orcs, but something for along the lines of a common ancestor, like for example with coyotes and wolves. One species, the elves in this case, being more agile, and the other having the advantage in brute strength, the orcs.

I feel my suggestion allows a lot of potential, such as maleficent or aurora punishing elves by drafting them into her dwarf army, and hiccup when he gets the girl.

You could have the elves inist that MAYBE thr orcs have a common ancestor, or the fact that they do be how the twistibg works.

It also leta you turn elf antagonists into ibteresting one-wing angel forms or have hiccup swit h elf and orc girls around for fun and punishment.

May 30, 2018

for bonus points, in true overlord style the elves deny this vehemently and insist that they rule the fairies absolutely

May 30, 2018

If you take your time and make things lead into each otger you can get away with more. By making orcs part of the elves you make it easier to takr in at once

May 30, 2018

Actually, have orcs. Make them elveas that the fairies proper twisted for a joke or punishment.

May 30, 2018

I agree. If you want a race for her under her ghouliness, you can say she was an elf and it reacted REALLY badly to the transformation.

Like in tolkein!

May 30, 2018

I enjoyed it, but largely because I'm a fan of old fairy stories. And i made sure to see them as seperate continuities. Theres a surprising number of nods to medival traditions and stories between them.

The part i think you could use is, aurora thinka the fairies are her aunts, but knows theres something not right about her life and luck, sowhen the mysterious otgerworldly lady shows up she thinks maleficent id her fairy godmother. (Maleficent's face is priceless). You could use that as part of your version

May 30, 2018

I meant in terms of breasts, but thay works similarly.

As for aurora, well she's a bit bland but workable. She has some personality to work with, and if you take her as 'raised by fairies' you can have an interesting and slightly off persona for her. Shes also better in 'maleficent', so there's that

May 29, 2018

Rules:

no rape

No NTR, I’ve been told what it is and now I KNOW i don’t want it

No gore

No bashing

No edgey nonsense

No downer endings or wanton character killing

Quality of writing is important to me, so if you try your hand please give it your best. I know you can make it interesting.

Character development

Story is king, erotica on it's own is not enough. Take your time ans build, the pauoff will be worth it.

Im more interested in character interaction and experimenting with relationship writing prefer to use erotoca to enhance, rather than making it the whole point. If you get burned out on such a story it's hard to enjoy after all.

No scat.... eww

Try and keep people in-character or a twist on the character

Make it as beleivable as possible, at least by internal logic

a reminder that i do intend to write at least a version of this story, but am completely okay with other’s trying their hand at it

Tmnt

inspired by flick-the-theif’s or cochi’s on deviantart (they may or may not be the same guy) gendbend pics and some other scattered ones, either a male april or normal leonardo are the only male member of the cast of a not-outright-pornographic-but-still-sexually-charged version of tmnt 2012…. with some other versions thrown in here and there.

one character would be male, every ither major character would be female and trying to get into their pants (or shell). If i go with leo, it's about a hero trying to focus on his mission while his enemies and sisters are drooling over him, if i go with april, its abou him investigating and winding up helping the turtles and being and awkward teenage boy while doing so (them being innocent to human ways. This method also has a female clone april to replace her now male self as resident boob queen), and if i go with karai, its about him being seduced to the right side by acxident because if all the cute girls. Either way, it'd be a modifeid, sexually charged retelling of tnmt 2012. With a ton of mythology gags. But i cant know more until i decide a lead.

Optional but not nessecary inclusions

Option one: April's older ajd younger designs are split into a pair of sisters, with the younger being jealous of the older's figure.

Option 2: A dimension X accident causes April to aborb traits from her alternate counterparts, giving her young form her adult breasts and hips, as well as skills. And possibly her mutant cat form (catwoman of channel 6) as a willing transformation. If male april is a lead, its a clone e perimentes on by krang.

option 3: If male April is the lead, a female clone april is formed and partnered with karai (the boobs to karai's rear, not that they completely lack the other), ala dani phantom, with an older clone formsd and trained as psychic mission control. There were more attempts but these were the survivors. Instability (or mutagen) causes the two to merge, same as option 2, as well as a cat.

currently, by popular vote leo ans male april are leading. Please feel free to vote and leave your argument why.

our possible leading men

Our ladies

The turtles

https://tmntfans.deviantart.com/art/FIGHT-527082274

https://tmntfans.deviantart.com/art/Turtles-424460872

The foot

April

Cat april

https://tmntfans.deviantart.com/art/April-The-kunoichi-catgirl-728897430

https://tmntfans.deviantart.com/art/Request-Kitty-April-615608288

https://tmntfans.deviantart.com/art/april-cat-request-for-WEREKATT-487853759