ChrissyQuinn

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  1. And chapter 11

    1. KoKoa_B

      KoKoa_B

      oh my gosh; slow down! LOL

  2. ChrissyQuinn

    Danse Macabre - An Original Vampire Story

    Aaaand chapter 10! The weirdness is almost in full swing! I might even get to Chapter 11 this weekend.
  3. Just posted chapter 10 in Dance Macabre :)

  4. ChrissyQuinn

    Danse Macabre - An Original Vampire Story

    Chapter 9! also another long one! Enjoy.
  5. He should put you over his knee for that. You should be more observant. Miss Manners was no longer Miss Manners but another creature entirely which I don’t have a name for. I could practically see her there in my mind, naked, collared and kneeling on the floor next to a chair that had a shadowed figure in it. “I understand if I… you… you want to punish me,” I breathed as my pulse sprang to life all over my body

    1. ChrissyQuinn

      ChrissyQuinn

      Chapter 9... is coming :D

  6. ChrissyQuinn

    Danse Macabre - An Original Vampire Story

    Promoting Chapter 8... It's long!
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    Danse Macabre - An Original Vampire Story

    Holy shit I didn't know this was here... I've been writing! And I'd support an I Hate Kendra fan club... There will be more tomb Vlad stuff coming up and... I'll go back and edit for more gore But... not until I've finished, we're also almost half way (I only planned originally on 20 chapters).
  8. Posted Chapter 8! It's kind of 24 pages... it was 32 but I took out some stuff and moved things... We're almost at the half way point people! Buckle up because it's about to get weird :)

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    Danse Macabre - Review Replies

    So about replying often.. *cough* Unfortunately life reared its ugly head and for a while I wasn't as active about writing as I like to be soooo I was late in getting around to responding and writing but I posted a mega chapter today which is going to make the world hate me so I figured why not update this before people break out the torches and pitchforks #1 Kendra... Yes, she's still here. Thank you Magus! The Kendra thing is kind of confusing, I'll make certain to clear this up in chapter 9 Chapter 9 is a vampire chapter! Yay vampires. 1. I too hate Kendra, 2, THANK YOU and Vlad... well I'll clarify that He's half naked, and his lower have is covered in black cloth... I think >.>. #2 The MARK Yes, it really is! Ha! Aleksi is very evil when it comes to using it too... and it just gets worse > ~#3 Autumn~ First off! Thank you for reading . Autumn is a natural submissive, and contrasted with Leslie who is more of the average individual and not submissive nor dominant but a mix of both. Autumn has issues making her own decisions because of this, also, she's very passive rather than making a decision for herself she'd rather go along with what someone else wants except for in extreme situations like with Garrett and the infamous Orgy and an event that takes place in Chapter 8. As we're nearing the half way point, things are going to start to shift, and this passivity is going to start to cause problems for Autumn. But I get what you're saying, you sometimes want to smack her around and tell her to stand up for herself because most people would, but she's not most people. ~#4 SEX~ Yes, Tahn! They can have sex, but if they have sex people everyone along Aleksi's line from top to bottom will feel it, EVERYONE *Holds up a sign that says 'this is not a spoiler or hint,' look suspicious and coughs* Kendra haters will love chapter 10... or 9... As always! Thank you to everyone who reads and enjoys my work and special thanks to: Tahn, Kitsune81, Magusfang, and Kokoa_B
  10. Posted Chapter 6! I didn't get to add half as much as I wanted to but... I felt like it ended at a good spot.

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    Danse Macabre - An Original Vampire Story

    Updated! Chapter 5 up! I am not 100% on chapter five, if anyone reads it can you please leave some feedback, somewhere. Pretty please? I promise I'll try to incorporate most changes.
  12. Chapter 5 Finally done and posted! There's obvious foreshadowing in it... yay literary stuff.

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    Do You Agree With This List?

    I like my flab while writing, but I call my writing style "STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS" (insert echo-y voice here), it's first person and essentially a running commentary from inside of the main character's head. I think it needs flab for authenticity. I also think if you take out all of those words on that list you end up with something that sounds an awful lot like a term paper and not a work of fiction. Those are actually words we were told to cut out in university while writing essays. Sooo I guess if you like that sort of clinical run down, whatever floats your boat or gives you a stiffy.
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    Measurement Specifics

    Believe it or not, its best to be vague, it actually helps readers connect more with the story on an emotional level. There has been a bunch of scholarship done over it lately, I wrote a paper over it in Psych and lit a few years ago. It has to do with being able to impress your vision of beauty/yourself on the characters or some such, essentially its the same reason why in a lot of hentai the male's faces are darkened out or shadowed. *insert more you know rainbow here*
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    What Song Are You Listening To?

    Haunted - Beyonce - Fifty Shades of Grey OST. (Don't judge...)
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    The Reviews you'd like

    I like active reviews that help me improve the story. Knowing that people like it is great, super encouraging and all of that. But I really adore active input
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    Danse Macabre - An Original Vampire Story

    Updated! Chapter 4 now up.
  18. Posted Chapter 4! Chapter 5 things are going to get... complicated.

    1. KoKoa_B

      KoKoa_B

      Looking forward to the next chapter!

    2. ChrissyQuinn

      ChrissyQuinn

      Awesome! I'm glad someone else is enjoying it! Chapter 5 was just posted.

  19. I just updated Danse Macabre! Working on Chapter 4.