vladpryde

I second that! I really wanna see someone write this!

I have two chapters of this story done, and I have four total planned. I have decided to do a fourth and final chapter, which will be Ron's funeral. There, a special guest, or guests, show up to pay their respects, and someone says goodbye. Plot: Ron dies. It is the job of his friends and family to prepare his body for eternal rest. Warnings: Alternate Universe, Necrophilia, Angst. Characters: anyone you can think of. Link: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097819 Reviews and comments are greatly appreciated! Thanks!

Ah, yes, please do move it! Thank you very much; I looked around for a while, trying to figure out where to put this. Thanks!

This story has only barely been written. However, I have a good start at 271 words. This story will go 12 chapters, and takes place in either their 6th or 7th year (I haven't decided which yet). I wanted to build up anticipation for it, so this is what I have for the start: So what do you think? Does it give a chill up your spine? That's the goal I was shooting for: major anticipation. I really don't have anything else going yet, neither ideas or thoughts. I have a "sort of" idea of how I want this story to go in places, but honestly, I've never written anything on this scale before. So it will be challenging. I am open to thoughts and ideas. Each individual should have their own ideas about this story based on the Prologue. I would love to hear them! Thanks for reading, and wish me luck! Please leave your thoughts/ideas here.

Just curious: what's a "pansexual"? I'm bisexual; I've never heard that term before. Thanks!

Glad I could help, thank you for reading my thoughts, lol. Yep: it's all instinct. Our Primal Goal as Males is to spread our sperm. At the end of the day, the Animal Within does not care how he goes about doing it, as long as it gets done. Again: the power that a male feels during orgasm simply cannot be explained, or is very difficult to understand from a Female's POV. I can often recall (during or shortly after orgasm) wanting to run to the nearest window or door and screaming outside for all to hear, "hey, this is what I did, this is who I am, and I am the dominant!" At the end of the day, women simply cannot understand that, though many try sometimes successfully. As mentioned before: I believe it is perfectly possible for the opposite sex to write an appropriately erotic sex scene from the other's POV. You just have to get into the mind of the subject to do it, with a good understanding of the appropriate Psychology and Instincts. I've sometimes tried to imagine writing a scene about a woman using a Female's Instinct, but I usually end up either mixing a hint of "male personality" into her character (usually in the form of aggression), or I inadvertently turn her into an absolute emotional basket-case. I'll give you an example: a while back, I thought about writing a scene from the Anime "Jormungand" (if you haven't seen it, you won't know what I'm talking about) [In short: it is about an Arms Dealer named Koko who's bent on world domination so that she can bring about an everlasting peace through her control, and she adopts a child soldier, Jonah, as one of her bodyguards]. In this scene (played out in my head), Jonah gets seduced by Koko, and she ends up pregnant with his child. Then Jonah is kidnapped by a rival Arms-Dealer, and Koko just completely falls apart. Which is contrary to the complete and utter control that she displays in the Anime. Koko is ALWAYS in control and in a calm demeanor. Yet, when I envisioned how she would become while pregnant, I turned her into a blubbering, emotional mess. I did this because I tried to add the added Instincts that I imagined women to develop as they become pregnant. And I have only my experiences to go on this. I watched how my sister went through her pregnancy, and listened to the stories she told me later about how she changed as she became pregnant. So yes: the appropriate study of the various psychologies and instincts out there is crucial to understanding and writing the appropriate erotic scenes. Anyone can do it; you just have to know your stuff.

Title: "Cum Once, Cum Twice" Rating: Adult + / NC-17 Characters: Harry/Ron Warnings: Wank, mutual, underage, etc. Plot: Harry recalls an experience that he shared with Ron in his 3rd year. It is one which millions of boys before them have experienced together, and one which they now are familiar with. Chapters: 2 total (one finished); Chapter One: 'Ron's Cum', Chapter Two: 'Harry's Cum'. Story Link: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097862 I wish more people would read this. This has to be, by far, the hottest fanfiction I've ever written. I hope it makes you hot-n-bothered too! Reviews on the comments section of the story are greatly appreciated. And any feedback for the story, good or bad, can be placed here. Thanks!

I've read up more clearly on the answers here in this thread. Research, as you say, is the key to understanding how you can better write sex scenes between the sexes. For guys/males, try looking into the start of puberty, and work your way up through the teen years to about age 17. These are EXTREMELY important years of a boy's life, which will determine many things; namely his sexuality, his future sexual performance, his sexual activity as he matures, etc etc. If I could speak on a personal note: for me, I started puberty very young; about 8, 9, or 10 years old. And I distinctly recall experiencing many things far more early than most boys probably did at my age; my first erections, first pubes, my first erotic thoughts and fantasies (VERY active for me at that age), discovering that girls were different from me in a physical sense, etc etc. These sorts of things lasted even into my Junior-High-School years, when I REALLY started paying attention to girls and trying to cop peaks down the various shirts of girls who bent over in front of me (hey, I was 14-ish), And I think that, because I started puberty so young, that I was very...precocious and curious, and did many things that other boys (and especially girls) would only dream of (this was ages 9 to 10 for me; perhaps even younger by a year or so). These things included trying to engage the other neighborhood kids in sexual situations that I myself didn't understand at all, and urinating with friends openly in random places and laughing at the "thrill" of it (which I understand now was a sort of sexual arousal at the time). As an adult, I look back on these times and sigh with mild embarrassment, but it's important to note such things if anyone wants to learn from these times and experiences to get into the head of boys at a young age. Again, these times (9-17 years of age) will shape a boys life forever. And understanding these times is crucially important to understanding the psychology of the Male Species. Going back to what others in this thread have mentioned: it really all depends on the individual writing the story in how they experienced such things. Their experiences will most likely shape how they write sex scenes between guys and girls, girls and girls, or guys and guys. And understanding the broad spectrum of experiences of boys and girls is a must in order to understand the psychology of sexuality between the two, so that you can best write the appropriate scenes. In one of my Harry Potter fan fiction stories, entitled "Cum Once, Cum Twice", I noted in the beginning of the story ("Author's Notes") that I tried to use my own sexual experiences growing up to shape how I wrote that story (it's a Harry/Ron slash; 1 chapter done so far). The fact of the matter is, that as I got deeper and deeper into the story, I found it taking the shape, not of how my own sexual experiences occurred at that age, but rather: how I wished they had occurred. In the story, I tried to show a deep affectionate emotion between Harry and Ron, that could easily be translated into a "Love" rather than just an "Affection". But again, this was based on my wishes, not necessarily my experiences. Rather, the physical aspects of the story (how Harry masturbates Ron, for example) were based on my actual experiences growing up. Not the emotional part; just the physical part. You can read the story here: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097862 I hope this answers some questions, or gives you some incite, into a little bit about the Male Psychology when it comes to Sexuality. If you would like to continue this with me in depth, you can email me (I'm very open about my sexuality/experiences): vladpryde@hotmail.com, or PM me here on this forum (if you can). Email works best though. Keep in mind: I am just one guy. A broader expanse into the Male Psych should be sought if at all possible, from any viable source necessary.

I hope somebody writes this!

Someone tell me if they write this story, and when they update it, as well as where I can find it. Thanks!

I wouldn't mind seeing this.

Please tell me someone, somewhere, wrote this! Please do!

Keep me up to date if you write it. I'd love to read it.

Wow, this sounds REALLY hot! Maybe a bit over-the-top, but hey: that's what makes it fun. And hot. Get writing, people!

I briefly skimmed over these answers, so forgive me if I didn't catch anyone specific. I think that women, for the most part, are perfectly capable of writing male sexual desire scenes. You only have to look at great Fan Fiction artists like Amanuensis of the Harry Potter universe to see how true that is. She loves smut, and usually does male/male pairings. I've long loved her work, and it's very erotic. However, one thing I believe (again, this is MY belief, and my opinion alone), is that women will never truly understand the psychology of the man during sex, or during the build-up to arousal. Yes, many men make love to their partners with an amazing amount of love and feelings. However, underneath that single emotion is a mountain of Primal Instinct, which exists in all men. The Primal Instinct involves the subconscious telling us, as men, to mark our territory. To claim it. To mark it as OURS. When a man ejaculates or orgasms, there is nothing that even comes close to anything in this world that is as powerful as placing our sperm into another person. Or onto a person (example: facial). It is Instinct at its most Primal. WE have to be the Dominant. WE have to claim our Positions. And, in my opinion, nothing says that like ejaculating. It's also why we tend to brag after sex, or about sexual experiences: beneath the bragging, we're telling the other males "this is what I did, and with whom" and "I'm dominant, don't fuck with me." And it's not something that we can help. Again: it's Instinct. It's been this way as long as Man has walked this Earth. And the same could most definitely be said for Women as well. We, as men, will never know what it's like to carry a child. To give birth. To nurse a baby. To experience those "Mother Instincts" that every woman has when she becomes pregnant. We'll never understand that. Only women will. And women will ALWAYS be better at writing such nurturing scenes than men ever will be. Anyways, that's all. Just thought I would chime in on this subject. I was letting my mind wander (never a good idea, lol) and I came across this topic while cruising the forum.

Hello everyone! I would like to submit my role as a Beta for anyone who's looking for accuracy when it comes to Guns and Ammunition. I am a self-taught hobbyist in the field of Firearms, Self-Defense, and Ammunition, with over 10 years of experience. I currently own 6 guns, and have owned as many as 8. I carry a gun daily (licensed by the State; I carry a Glock model 22 chambered in .40 S&W), and have carried a gun as part of my work as an Armed Security Officer with two different companies. Furthermore, I have studied/read thousands of articles related to Firearms and Self-Defense with a Firearm. I have also read many articles related to ammunition. I currently have almost a dozen books on the subject of Firearms, Self Defense with a Firearm, and Ammunition. I am also a current member of the National Rifle Association. In .22 Long Rifle caliber, I hold the titles of Marksman, Pro-Marksman, Marksman First Class, and Sharpshooter; awarded through the NRA. I've also won 2nd Place in Pistol Range out of 180+ participants of the Washington State Law Enforcement Explorer Academy of 2003 (Summer Academy), representing the Vancouver Police Department. Finally, I am a member of GlockTalk.com, which is the largest Firearms forum on the entire internet. I have been a member in Good Standing with them since August of 2004, and have approximately 3,800 various posts throughout the forum. This is not much; there are many people there who have over 50,000 posts in a far shorter amount of time. There are also countless more people there who own far more guns and ammunition then I do. This forum is a great resource for anyone seeking like minds when it comes to Firearms/Self Defense/Ammunition type of subjects. Also, if I ever need to refer to someone to get an answer, this is where I'll be going. A pool of knowledgeable people always trumps a book written by one. I am also a great admirer and follower of the work of a man named Massad Ayoob (check out his blog here: http://backwoodshome.com/blogs/MassadAyoob/). He is a World-Renowned Expert in the field of Self-Defense, and has acted as an Expert Witness for the Courts for about 40 years. Currently, he is a Part-Time Police Captain (sworn Officer of 40+ years) in New Hamshire. He has written dozens of books over the years, including his gold standard "In The Gravest Extreme" which was a self-defense book written in the 80's. I have much of his work, and greatly admire it. I have also had the privilege of corresponding with him through GlockTalk, where he is a Expert Moderator in the "Go Ask The Experts" section. He's a great guy, and a bastion of wisdom when it comes to Self-Defense of all types. So ask me anything about firearms/ammunition/Self-Defense/Use of Force/Use of Force Continuum, and I will get back to you as soon as possible. If you need a Beta for information or knowledge when it comes to firearms/ammunition (or any of the reasons I just listed), I'm your guy. Thank you very much. I look forward to hearing from you, -Vladpryde

I fourth this! Sounds VERY hot! We demand details too!