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    Techno-Ninja reacted to mannahpierce in Commentary that can ruin a story - a reader's plea   
    I was just reading a story on this site - no point saying which one because it applies to many. We get a chunk of the writer chatting about the story, then the chapter, then another chunk apologising for the writer's shortcomings.
    It detracts. If the end of the chapter is particularly good, it can ruin it.
    Maybe it is just me. I am the person who never wants to watch the programmes about how films were made. I leave the DVD explaining all the ins and outs in the box. I want to lose myself in the story, not have it explained to me.
    So my plea is this. If you as an author cannot resist writing about the chapter, separate the commentary from the body of the chapter. The site allows you to put in a horizontal line. Please use that or something similar.
    Give people like me a chance to know when to start and, more importantly, to stop reading.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to mikimaro in Writing or typing?   
    A long time ago I used to type everything I wrote on my computer. Then one day, half the files in my "unfinished" folder got corrupted and I lost a bunch of stories I'd been working on. I was heartbroken. I tried to re-write them, but they just weren't the same. From that point on, I started writing everything out by hand, so I'll always have a hard copy.
    And I've found I like hand writing so much better. While I type fast, my accuracy is horrible, so with writing I don't end up stopping every other word to fix typos. I can just go with the flow of my pencil. The other advantage is that nobody but me can read my handwriting, so if I'm writing during my downtime at work and get that eerie feeling that people are lurking behind my desk, I'm assured that there's little chance they can read what's in my notebook.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Melsiebug in Writing or typing?   
    A while ago I told my sister I had been writing stuff and posting it online, I knew she couldn't read it as she had no internet acess, but then recently she told me she was getting broadband and asked where my "novel" was, as she put it.
    I couldn't tell her not to read it, but I kind of needed to warn her as well, or she was in for a bit of a shock. I'm not sure how much she got of what I was telling her, she'd never heard of slash, or come across the world of online smut writing, and although I don't write it she'd never even heard of fanfic either (I guess you miss a lot not being online for years), and I'm not sure she got just how explict it is.
    I don't know if she's read it yet, I think I may text her right now to find out, I really have no idea what she's going to make of it.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to DemonsAngel in Writing or typing?   
    I rather enjoy both. When I am first starting a story I prefer to start out with plain old pen and paper. Unfortunetly I tend to press fairly hard and write so long I get blisters and my hand massivly cramps up. But after I get the first part down I type it out, start editing and then usualy progress from there via computer. Though I still tend to take notes on what I am writing via my spiral note book and pen which I always keep handy when working. When it comes to editing I also like to print out what I have, make notes and then change things on the computer. ^^
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    Techno-Ninja got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 15: 1-16-11   
    Pen name: Techno-Ninja
    Story: A Crumbling Reality
    Review Replies Link:
    Type: FlashFic
    Fandom: Star Ocean 2
    Pairing: Ashton X Noel
    Warnings: Anal, M/M, WD, Other (Heavily implied chemistry between an adult and a teenager.)
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Melsiebug in Writing or typing?   
    I write longhand in notebooks then type it up. It's a convience thing, I do more writing out of the house than in it and I can't carry a laptop everywhere I go.
    I have an hours commute to work on the train and I often use that time to write, and I always use spiral bound hard backed note books as they are the best sort for balancing on your lap.
    I hate the typing bit, it makes my shoulders ache and gives me blurred vision. At work we do these DSE courses which are about how to set your desk up correctly to avoid RSI and that kind of stuff so I know that typing at the kitchen table sat on a small, hard wooden chair is not helping matters, but it's either that or balanced on the couch which makes things even worse. I wish I could touch type, at school we were given the choice of typing lessons or craft lessons, an hour spent hunced over a typewrited or an hour spent messing about with clay, which do you think I chose? Gah, I think it's too late now, I have too many typing bad habits.
    I know what you mean about getting excited by a trip to Staples (I also really like Ryman, not sure if they exist outside the UK), I'm very into buying pens at the moment as I go through a lot of them, I like liquid ink rollerball with the finest point I can find (less than 1mm for preferance) in either black or blue, don't like writing in fancy colours, and I never use biros, they make your notebook pages go all crunchy. Just read that back, I really am a little obsessive aren't I? Well, at least it's a cheap hobby, I have friends who are just as obsessive about things like snowboards and musical instruments, and they cost a fortune.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to DemonGoddess in Writing or typing?   
    I write stuff too, on paper. Not for writing, per se, as I'm not a creative writer. But, for code changes and other things? You betcha. Besides, while computers are wonderful things, I always have a paper back up too. Especially when it comes to keeping track of what I've changed, and things like that.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to BoredStraight in Writing or typing?   
    I write first drafts by hand in notebooks, binders, napkins, whatever. Partly because I love the physical act of writing, and partly because like you I don't always have access to a computer. PLUS I've lost a lot of work when computers have kicked the bucket on me. I edit when I type out the finished peice. I also like to write by hand because I love to buy notebooks, pens, even post its. I actually just went to Staples yesterday and I was like a kid in Toys R Us.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Keith Inc. in Your opinions, please.   
    Well, sure. In my stories, there's a part of me in each and every character. But it's not self insertion. I think the technical term would be 'unavoidable.'But if you're writing and you start to worry that someone may think your character is SI, it may be worth reviewing. Maybe your subconscious or your muse is trying to tell you something. Don't be afraid to count traits. "Like me...not like me...identifiable as me from orbit...not like me...."
    But it's not a crime. Hell, Self Insertion isn't criminal. But at the level of Mary Sue, it starts to look like masturbating...which is frowned upon in public venues...
    Zacktly! Just make sure your character is believable. IF you have that down, no one even notices if it's Self Insertion.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to JayDee in Writing or typing?   
    Well that's very kind of you to say so, I thank you for it.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to BronxWench in Writing or typing?   
    I started out writing longhand, in a series of notebooks, going through pens at a prodigious rate, and working on my laptop desk or at the pool. Then I would type everything up on the computer, and edit, edit, edit...
    It got colder, and I moved indoors, and eliminated the middle man, so to speak, and now I work on the computer. I still make notes to myself on all sorts of things, including scraps of paper, post-it notes, and my arm.
    Many, many years ago, I had an old Royal typewriter, with the cloth ribbons, and I used to love pounding away on that old thing...
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to JayDee in Writing or typing?   
    I prefer typing, mostly because it would feel like a waste of effort to me to write everything out, then type it up for my internet victims readers.
    Typewriters are great to use, but it's been 13 or 14 years since I had the chance. I like the noises and the feel of them, but as noted by SK, mistakes could be an issue - especially if your typing skill was as weak as mine could be.
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Shadowknight12 in Writing or typing?   
    My handwriting is terrible. Seriously, I teach courses on deciphering it. I also tend to press pens very hard against the paper (to the point where I can't use pencils, because I'll break them), so the sheets in my notebooks end up curling like used parchment. I am also prone to mixing up languages, which means typos. I hate typos.
    All of this combines to make me vastly prefer typing to writing. I'm a very fast typist and a rabid editor, so typing will always be more efficient and satisfying to me than handwriting. Which is really only suitable for when a computer is unreachable or infeasible to keep around.
    EDIT: I had a typewriter once. Loved it, because it allowed me to type forcefully (I had to learn how to type gently when handling keyboards), but it was very unforgiving of mistakes.
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    Techno-Ninja got a reaction from FairySlayer in Review Replies - AFF Prompt/Yule   
    Your welcome. : )
    I love stories that focus more on emotions rather than just jumping right into the action. Though I have never played the game, I will definitely go back and read the rest of the story, and continue to follow it!
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to JayDee in Week 11: 12-19-10   
    Pen Name: JD/JayDee
    Story link: Mindy's Revenge: The Holiday Special
    Type of story: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult++ for violent sexualised death
    Fandom: Cartoon > The Simpsons
    Pairing: Dickgirl!Mindy Simmons X Lurleen Lumpkin
    Warnings: (for Holiday Special Chapter specifically:) Contro, Death, fingering, F/D, humil, Language, MCD, NonCon, PWP, RapeFic, Violence,
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to FairySlayer in Week 11: 12-19-10   
    Pen Name: Fairy Slayer
    Story link: Yule Regret This
    Review replies link: in Cartoons > General subforum
    Type of story: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult+
    Fandom: Cartoon >> Scooby Doo
    Pairing: (barely) Daphne/Freddie
    Warnings: Challenge, Complete/One-shot, Death, No Sex, Violence
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to BronxWench in Week 11: 12-19-10   
    Pen Name: BronxWench
    Story Link: Story: Yule
    Review Replies: Review Replies - AFF Prompt/Yule - AFF Community Forums
    Type of Fic: FlashFic
    Rating: Adult
    Fandom: Dragon Age: Origins
    Pairing: N/A
    Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, Complete, NoSex
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to pittwitch in Week 11: 12-19-10   
    Pen name: Pittwitch
    Prompt: Yule
    Fic type: drabble, 100 words, no more no less
    Story: Yule Balls ARE Nice.
    Pairing: Originals
    Fandom: Originals
    Warnings: anal, M/M voyeurism, bad pun
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Keith Inc. in Your opinions, please.   
    I've drawn from life a lot, and used 'self insertion' only twice.
    For a lot of story details, people who know me could point to the scene or the dialogue and say: "I know where you got that!" or they might point to a character and say: "HE's a lot like you." Well, we write what we know. None of my characters are first-person SEALS because i don't know enough to support that. Many work in a cubicle. But then, many people who are not me work in corporate environments.
    For one of the SI's, i went full bore Marty Stu on purpose. There just wasn't a way or a reason to put a pretend layer of separation. No way to move the details enough to make it not me and still have a story.
    The second SI was a pun...
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Melrick in World Building   
    World building is where people decide to essentially create an entire world, on paper, at least. Or hard drive. Whatever. Anyway, it can be amazingly complex if you want your world to be uniquely yours and realistic. People have been known to work on their world for many years, without it being completed. How detailed you want to get is up to you, but if you're thinking of writing six 500 page novels all about your fabulous world then you'll want detail. This gigantic list might be of some use, if you use it as a checklist. Keep in mind, though, that not all questions may be appropriate.
    Arts and Entertainment
    What is the status of the various arts (dance, music, theatre, etc.) in this society?
    Are artists revered or mistrusted?
    Who supports the arts? Which arts are most highly valued and why?
    Are there permanent theatres or concert halls for performing arts?
    If so, who owns and runs them?
    Are there also travelling troupes?
    What do people at various levels of society do for fun?
    Can magic be used in the arts and if so, how paint that glows, pictures that move, flutes that play themselves, etc.?
    Is there a separate branch of purely magical art, like illusions?
    What sports or pastimes are common (hawking, hunting, skiing, baseball)?
    Which ones take skill, money, and/or leisure time?
    What games are commonly known -- chess, dice, poker?
    Which are common among everyone, and which are limited to the peasantry or nobility?
    Are certain countries/cities known for a passion/expertise for particular games or pastimes?
    Are there non-human races that tend to be naturally talented painters, dancers, etc.?
    How does this affect human practitioners of these arts?
    Do non-human races have their own games and leisure pastimes?
    How do they differ from human games?
    How do they reflect the physiology and/or particular magical talents of the non-human races?
    What is the most common building material?
    Why is it used (availability, cheapness)?
    Does it have any major drawbacks (wood=the Great Fire of London)?
    How are buildings normally ornamented carved gargoyles, painted murals, geometric patterns?
    How tall a building can be constructed at a reasonable cost and in a reasonable time?
    What are typical floor plans like can people afford to waste space on hallways or do they just have a series of rooms opening into other rooms?
    Are buildings normally built square, triangular, domed, what?
    How many people usually live in a typical house?
    How large is a typical house?
    What are the differences in materials and appearance between a lower class, a middle-class, and an upper-class type house?
    How do city houses differ from those in rural areas?
    How are living quarters arranged?
    Are bedrooms on the top floors for privacy or on the ground floor for convenience?
    Are parlours or libraries common?
    How are houses heated/cooled?
    Crime and the Legal System
    How has the presence of magic and magicians affected law and government?
    Are wizards barred from certain kinds of jobs (judge, jury, police)?
    Do some jobs require that their holder be a wizard?
    What are considered normal and legal ways of gathering evidence and determining guilt?
    Is torture allowed?
    Truth spells?
    Are arbitrary judgements by the lord or landowner allowed, or is there a standard that they are supposed to follow?
    If someone doesn't like the judgement he receives in court, is there anyone he can appeal to, like the Emperor or the Supreme Court?
    Are there laws forbidding certain types of people (peasants, wizards, priests, women) from carrying arms?
    Are there laws requiring certain people to be skilled with certain weapons, as England for some centuries required yeomen to be proficient with the longbow?
    Is forensic magic possible?
    Commonly used?
    Admissible in court?
    Used only for certain types of crimes (and if so, what)?
    Is it something any wizard can do, or do you have to specialize?
    Are certain spells (as opposed to magic generally) illegal?
    If so, how would a criminal magician be detected?
    Punished? Are criminal magicians dealt with by the same court system as everyone else, or is there a special branch of the courts, or are they handled by the Wizard's Guild, or do you just send out a bunch of heroes to kill them off?
    Are there separate courts for civil and criminal matters?
    For magical and non-magical matters?
    For humans and non-humans?
    What are the differences?
    What things are considered truly serious crimes and why? (Example: a trade-oriented culture might consider counterfeiting a death-penalty crime; in a place where life is cheap, murder might be something that only results in a small fine.)
    What are the punishments for serious vs. minor crimes?
    Are there prisons, or are people punished and released?
    Are there degrees of punishment branding vs. cutting off ears vs. cutting off a hand vs. decapitation or do they just hang everybody?
    Who is responsible for catching criminals?
    Who pays the crook-catchers--the king, the city government, a consortium of merchants, somebody else?
    How are they organized--into independent police precincts, or into overlapping districts, or just according to whoever wants to hire them?
    Are there lawyers or advocates?
    Who can afford them?
    Who trains and/or certifies them?
    Are people guilty until proven innocent, innocent until proven guilty, or does it depend on the mood the lord is in when the case comes in front of him?
    Are there judges other than the lord/king or landowner?
    If so, how are they paid, and by whom?
    How often are outlying areas likely to see a judge?
    Is "mob justice" common?
    Approved of or disapproved of?
    Are there sumptuary laws requiring certain clothes to be worn or not worn by certain occupations or classes?
    Do judges wear robes or wigs?
    Are highwaymen, muggers, bandits, or pirates common or rare?
    What sorts of crimes would the average citizen be likely to run across during his/her lifetime?
    Who can make or repeal laws--a group (such as an elected Senate, an appointed Council, or an hereditary House of Lords) or only the king/emperor/head-of-state?
    How are alleged criminals treated before/after their convictions?
    Do the police/military/city guard make a practice of roughing up suspects, or is this frowned upon?
    Daily Life
    How do people feel about foreigners?
    How ready are they to accept different ideas?
    How cosmopolitan are they?
    How much social mobility is there?
    Is it easy or hard for a person born a peasant to advance to the middle class, or for a middle class person to advance to the upper class or nobility?
    How much resistance would there be?
    Would such a person ever be accepted socially?
    What things are considered luxuries (e.g. chocolate, coffee, cotton, flush toilets, spices)?
    What do people in general look like?
    Would a blonde (red-head, brunette) stand out in a crowd?
    Someone 5' tall?
    Do non-humans?
    What is furniture like--big and blocky, delicate, simple, elaborately carved or decorated?
    What is it mostly made of--cloth, wood, stone, etc.?
    Are certain things (like chairs with arms) reserved for high-status individuals?
    In what ways does furniture design reflect the customs of people (example: beds with bed-curtains for privacy in medieval keeps where servants wandered through rooms without warning; chaise lounges as common furniture in a society where people are accustomed to recline rather than sit, etc.)?
    What are plumbing and sanitary systems like?
    Who builds and maintains them?
    How reliable are they, and who do you call when the drains back up?
    How do they differ from city to farm?
    How do people cope with various disasters--fire, floods, volcanoes, plague, etc.?
    How common are such disasters?
    How early do people get up in the morning in the city?
    Are clocks common, or do people tell time by the sun or by listening for the church bells?
    What dishes are considered holiday food?
    What foods/drinks are associated with particular holidays, events, (e.g., funerals, weddings) or times of the year?
    When a guest arrives, is food or drink offered immediately, after an interval, or only on request?
    Is there a particular food or drink that it is customary to offer a newly arrived guest?
    A guest who is departing (stirrup cup)?
    How many meals are considered normal in a day?
    When are they served?
    Which are substantial, and which are smaller?
    Are certain foods (e.g., eggs and bacon) reserved mainly for a particular meal (breakfast)?
    What dishes would be considered typical of this area?
    What wines or beers?
    Is there a safe supply of drinking water, or do people (including children) drink ale or beer exclusively because "water is unhealthy" (i.e., contaminated and will make you sick)?
    What foods are considered peasant food?
    What foods are staples, commonly eaten every day?
    What foods are rare?
    What foods are normally cooked/eaten raw?
    What is the food like?
    What herbs and spices are readily available, and which must be imported?
    How common/expensive are imported foods and spices?
    What spices are commonly used?
    Do people tend to like highly spiced food, or not?
    How is food preserved for use during the off-season--smoking, canning, drying, etc.?
    How reliable are the methods used--how often does "preserved" food spoil?
    When food is in limited supply, who gets first crack the labourers and farmers who have to work to produce more, or the children who are the next generation, or the wise and revered elders?
    What foods do non-humans like, and how do these differ from those favoured by humans?
    Are some foods poisonous or distasteful to one species that are delicacies or necessary to another?
    Fashion and Dress
    What do people wear?
    How expensive is it?
    Can the material be produced locally, or must some or all of it be imported?
    Are certain clothes customary for certain occupations -- e.g., military uniforms, judges' robes, sports team uniforms, etc.?
    How much variation is allowed?
    Could a scholar wear a fluorescent green robe as long as the cut was right, or would that be too much?
    Is it colour or style that is most important?
    Are the dyes for certain colours -- purple, indigo, blue, etc. -- rare, making cloth of that colour more expensive and/or reserved for nobility or other high-status people?
    Are there sumptuary laws, defining who can wear what?
    What are the penalties?
    Who decides when changes are needed?
    How often are they adjusted?
    How many changes of clothes can a normal person afford?
    A noble person?
    A peasant?
    What are current fashion in clothes like?
    In hats?
    Do such fashions differ for humans/non-humans?
    From country to country?
    What materials are appropriate for the climate?
    What cloth (e.g., silk) must be imported, and is therefore used only for expensive upper-class clothing?
    What styles are considered tacky and vulgar, and what is stylish?
    What types of decorations and accessories are common?
    What colours and combinations of colours are thought to look well together, or to clash?
    Do opinions of this vary from race to race?
    What physical types and characteristics are currently fashionable--tan vs. pale skin, the "consumptive look" vs. robust good health, fat vs. thin, blonde vs. brunette, muscles vs. "dead poet", etc.?
    How does this vary for non-human races?
    How do non-human fashions reflect the habitat and physiology of non-humans?
    Do mermaids have a nudity taboo?
    Do dragons dress for dinner?
    Eating customs
    Do men and women, parents and children, servants and master, eat separately, or does everyone eat together?
    How is status displayed at the table (seating above or below the salt, near or far from the head, serving first with the best, etc.)?
    What dishes are considered holiday food?
    What foods/drinks are associated with particular holidays, special events (e.g., weddings, funerals), or times of the year?
    What distinguishes a formal, high court dinner from an ordinary meal, besides quantity and variety of food?
    How do formal, high court manners differ from everyday ones?
    What eating utensils are used, if any forks, eating knife, spoons, chopsticks, etc?
    What is the order of a typical upper-class meal--do they start with wine, then a sweet, then stew, then salad, or is everything brought in at once?
    What shape are tables/eating areas (round, oblong, square, rectangular, etc.)?
    Where is the "place of honour" for a guest?
    Where do important members of the household sit/recline/whatever?
    Are special arrangements necessary for entertaining guests of different races/species--taller chairs for dwarves, raw meat for werewolves, perches for harpies, etc.?
    How do the eating customs of different races reflect their cultures and biology?
    What things are never eaten (i.e., what's not kosher)?
    Are some common human foods poisonous to dwarves or elves (or vice versa)?
    How much does it cost to get various levels of education?
    What education is available, and where?
    Are there schoolhouses in every town, or do ordinary people have to travel if they want to be educated?
    Are there universities?
    Private tutors?
    What is the literacy level in the general population?
    Is literacy considered a useful/necessary skill for nobility, or something only scribes/clerks/wimps need?
    What areas are considered absolutely necessary knowledge for a courtier (poetry, languages, skill at arms, etc.)?
    Which are nice but not necessary?
    Which would be slightly embarrassing if anybody found out (a passion for comic books, etc.)?
    How respected are teachers and scholars?
    Who supports them?
    Foreign Relations
    Does this country have formal relationships with other countries?
    If so, who can be an ambassador/envoy?
    Are there standing embassies and consulates, or are envoys sent only when something specific comes up?
    How are treaties arranged?
    Are there any significant ones currently in force or coming up for signing?
    How much do official attitudes toward other countries affect commerce and trade?
    Do merchants pretty much ignore tensions between governments as long as they can make a profit, or will this get them into trouble?
    How much formal spying and intelligence gathering is normally done by governments?
    By the military?
    By merchants?
    Who has the best information-gathering system?
    Which countries are traditional allies?
    Which are traditional rivals?
    How do these traditions affect current foreign policy?
    Which heads of state are related by blood or marriage?
    How important are marriage alliances?
    How do ties of blood/marriage affect foreign policy?
    Are gestures and body language in this society generally subtle, or not?
    Do people talk with their hands, or is that considered vulgar?
    What gestures are insulting?
    What do they mean?
    Do some gestures differ in meaning depending on the culture or time (example: the American "V" for victory sign, which became the peace sign, is/was highly insulting in Europe)?
    How do overall gestures and body language differ between countries?
    Are there things that don't matter in one area that are mortal insults in another (eating with the left hand, etc.)?
    What are the different ways of showing respect (bowing, saluting, etc.)?
    To whom is one expected to show respect--one's elders, superiors in rank, social superiors, teachers, priests, etc.?
    How has the presence of magic and magicians affected law and government?
    Are wizards barred from certain kinds of government jobs or offices?
    Do some positions require that their holder be a wizard?
    How has the presence of non-human races affected law and government?
    What is the basic form of government in this country--feudal aristocracy, oligarchy, absolute leadership, democracy, what?
    What forms of government are used in neighbouring countries, and why are they the same or different?
    What services does the government or head of state provide: schools, wells, courts, an army to protect people from the Vikings?
    What services are provided locally or privately?
    Who has the right to levy taxes?
    For what purposes?
    On what or whom?
    Can taxes be paid in kind, or do certain things require money?
    Who provides support services for the head of state?
    What are they called: King's Councillors, Cabinet ministers, Secretary of State?
    Are these hereditary offices, appointees, career civil servants, or elected officials?
    Is the relative power of a country or king usually measured by the size of the army, the number and ability of the wizards, or the amount of money/trade flowing through it?
    What are the easiest/most common ways to advance in status--amass more money, marry well, get the king's eye, etc?
    How much resistance is there to someone advancing in social status?
    Who will take over running the government if the current head of state is incapacitated?
    How is this determined?
    Is there an heir apparent (either actual or political)?
    What happens if the heir is a minor?
    Who is responsible for protecting the king or head of state his personal guard, the Secret Service, an elite group affiliated with the regular military?
    What safeguards have they got against assassins, poisoning, direct assault, magical attack?
    Who can give orders (to military, to tax collectors, to servants, to ordinary folks on the street)?
    How are such people chosen?
    Who is responsible for coinage: the king, local barons, merchant guilds, someone else?
    Are there generally acceptable standards for coins?
    How easy/common is counterfeiting?
    Is there an organized system of education?
    If so, who provides it: government, temples, private persons?
    How is it supported?
    Who can call up men for an army, and how?
    Does the king ask his lords for men, who in turn draft their peasants, or can the king go straight to the bottom?
    How much formal spying and intelligence gathering is normally done by governments?
    The military?
    The merchant guilds and wealthy tradesmen?
    Do relations between countries depend mainly on the relations between the heads of state, or can two kings hate each others guts without being able to just declare war and drag their countries into it?
    Greeting and Meeting
    How did the greeting gesture originate (example: shaking hands to prove one's weapon hand was empty)?
    Is there a special I-am-not-armed gesture for wizards?
    Is there a difference between the greeting offered to an equal and that offered to a superior or inferior?
    Between that offered a man or a woman? (cf. the various levels of curtsey)
    Between that offered a human vs. a non-human?
    Is there a way of changing a greeting gesture to make it insulting?
    When meeting someone for the first time, how are they greeted--wave, handshake, bow, some other gesture?
    Does this differ if one already knows the person?
    If you see someone you like on the far side of the street, how do you acknowledge them?
    How are two people who have not met before introduced to each other?
    What is the order of precedence when there are several people of differing sex, social status, or race/species present who must all be introduced to each other?
    Are there people or beings who are never introduced to each other?
    Are "true names" significant, and if so, under what circumstances would someone be given someone else's true name?
    Are there customs involving the way in which someone is named when being introduced? (Example: giving all of a person's names and titles at the first meeting, but never repeating them afterward, so that he's always referred to as "George" even though he's introduced as the Duke George Edward Canterbury Gordon de la Suis-Foule, Marquis of Horsham, Whitewater and Framingham, Earl of St. Peter's Close, and Viscount of Abernathy.)
    Is there a "trade language" that facilitates commerce between countries that don't speak the same tongue?
    Is there a "universal language" spoken by educated or noble persons, as Latin was in the Middle Ages?
    Are some or all people bilingual?
    Is there a common second language many people know?
    Are there "secret" languages or codes known only by priests, soldiers, guild members, etc.?
    If so, why were they developed?
    What are the variations in speech patterns, syntax, and slang from one social class to another?
    One occupation to another?
    One region to another?
    What areas do local slang phrases come out of? (Example: In a fishing town, referring to good luck as "a good catch"; in a farming town, as "a good harvest", etc.)
    What kinds of colourful turns of phrase do people use?
    What things in this culture would their language have many specific words for (e.g., the Inuit languages that have 14+ words for different kinds of snow)?
    What do the people in this culture consider important enough to name?
    What will people swear a binding oath by?
    What do people use as curse words?
    How many languages are there?
    Which ones are related (e.g., the Romance languages of Europe) and why?
    Which languages borrow words or phrases from other languages?
    Which are likely to be most widely spoken?
    Are there different languages for different races (dwarves, elves, etc.), or is language based more on geography than race/species?
    Is there a special language you need to learn in order to talk to dragons or other magical beasts?
    Do wizards have a special language that is used for magic?
    If so, where do they learn it?
    Is it safe to chat in this language, or is everything said in it automatically a spell?
    Magic and Magicians
    Are the laws of nature and physics actually different in this world (to accommodate magic) or are they the same as in real life?
    If the same, how does magic fit in?
    How do magical beasts fit in?
    If there is no specific point of divergence, what are the differences between this world and ours?
    If magic exists but history is the same, how is this justified?
    How do organized religions react to magic?
    If there are imaginary animals (dragons, unicorns, etc) how do they fit into the ecology?
    What do they eat?
    How much and what kind of habitat do they require?
    Are they intelligent and/or capable of working spells, talking, etc.?
    Where did civilization begin?
    What directions did it spread?
    How was its development affected by the presence of magic?
    The presence of non-human races, if any?
    Which peoples/races/cultures/countries are most technologically and/or magically advanced?
    Least advanced?
    Is magic legal?
    Any magic, or only some types?
    Do laws vary widely from country to country, or is the attitude generally similar?
    What wild animals, actual or imaginary, live in this area?
    Are any of them potentially useful--e.g., for fur, whale oil, hides, magical ingredients, etc.
    Are there magical beasts, like dragons and unicorns?
    If so, which ones?
    How many?
    Are they common, or are some endangered species?
    Have any been domesticated?
    Are there magical artefacts (rings, swords, etc)?
    If so, who makes them?
    Are they permanent, or does the magic wear off after a while?
    What effect has magic had on laws?
    Where is scientific and/or magical research done--universities, private labs, under the auspices of the king/government, etc.?
    Given the magical/technological level of this society, what is an appropriate ratio of farmers or food producers to urban residents?
    If this is based on the presence of magic, how many urban residents are going to starve if the spells supporting farming fail suddenly?
    Are magicians a force in politics, or are they above it?
    Are there national politics that revolve around magic/wizards (i.e., trying to outlaw or promote certain kinds of magic, trying to draft all wizards into the king's army, licensing of magicians, etc.)?
    How much as the presence of magic affected military strategy and tactics in general?
    Is healing usually a magical process?
    If so, how does the magical healing talent/spell work (i.e., speeding up the body's natural healing mechanism vs. doing instant repairs from outside)?
    Does a magical healer have to consciously direct the healing process (meaning that lots of knowledge of anatomy, etc. would be required), or does magical healing simply speed up the normal, unconscious healing process in the patient?
    Is there more than one kind of magical healer (as there are surgeons, eye doctors, orthopaedic doctors, etc.)?
    Are there both magical and non-magical healers, and if so, are they rivals or simply different specialties?
    What level is medicine at?
    Who are the healers?
    Do you have to have a talent to heal?
    Who trains healers, herbalists, apothecaries, surgeons, magical vs. non-magical healers, etc?
    Is forensic magic possible?
    Commonly used?
    Used only to investigate certain types of crimes (if so, which)?
    Are the results of forensic spells admissible in court as evidence?
    Are there separate civil and criminal courts?
    Is there a separate court or procedure for magical crimes?
    Are judges and other court officers required/forbidden to know magic?
    Magic and Technology
    Are there magical means of transportation (teleport spells, magic carpets, dragon-riding)?
    How do they compare in speed, safety, and expense to non-magical means?
    Are there any drawbacks (e.g., air sickness)?
    How commonly are they used, and for what purposes (industrial shipping vs. travel for fun)?
    Are magical weapons available?
    Can magic be used in warfare?
    In what ways?
    Are spells fast enough to be useful in hand-to-hand combat, or is magic more of a siege weapon, useful only for long, slow things?
    How has the presence of magic affected weapons technology?
    Do you have to do anything special to armour, weapons, walls, to make them better able to resist spells?
    Can ordinary objects be enchanted to make them extremely lethal (the Frying Pan of Death) or will this work properly only on things that are already weapons?
    Can ordinary objects be enchanted to make them (or their user) much, much better at whatever they do (the Frying Pan of Ultimate Gourmet Cooking, the Comb of No Bad Hair Days Ever)?
    How common and useful are such enchantments?
    To what degree do magical objects and the presence of wizards and spells replace technology (e.g., a chest that is enchanted to stay cold replacing refrigerators)?
    Duplicate technology?
    Supplement technology?
    What distinguishes a formal, high court dinner from an ordinary meal, besides quantity and variety of food?
    How do high-court manners differ from everyday ones?
    What are the rules of precedence--who gets to go through doors first?
    Who gets introduced first?
    Is there a distinction between "formal" good manners and informal, everyday manners?
    When and where are people expected to be on their best behaviour?
    How important are "good manners" in this society?
    How do "good manners" differ from race to race?
    How to people/dwarves/elves/dragons react when someone has just been, by their standards, rude?
    What customs surround death and burial?
    Is there a special class of people (doctors, priests, funeral directors, untouchables) who deal with dead bodies?
    How accurate is the diagnostic process?
    Do healers have ways of telling two diseases apart if they have similar symptoms?
    Do healers depend on standard physical medical tests -- reflexes, temperature, contracted pupils -- or do they normally use spells for diagnosis?
    How expensive are healers?
    How available are such services to ordinary people?
    How much is known about anatomy, physiology, pathology, etc?
    Are treatments based on purely practical experience ("We know this works but we don't know why"), or do healers understand at least some of what they are doing?
    How much training does a healer normally get?
    From whom?
    Is healing generally a magical process?
    If so, how does the magical healing talent work?
    Does a magical healer have to consciously direct the healing process (meaning that lots of knowledge of anatomy, etc., would be required), or does magical healing simply speed up the normal, unconscious healing process in the patient?
    Is there a reliable method of birth control?
    Who normally handles births--midwives, or doctors?
    What is the mortality rate for pregnant ladies, new mothers, and children?
    Who can become a healer?
    Are there various kinds of healers (herbalists, wisewomen, pharmacists/apothecaries, surgeons, doctors, etc.)?
    If so, why are distinctions made?
    What kinds of treatments are available--herbal brews, vaccinations, acupuncture, etc.?
    How effective are they?
    Is it possible to resurrect/resuscitate someone who has died?
    If so, how long is it before this becomes impossible?
    Before serious brain damage sets in?
    How is insanity treated?
    Are there asylums or treatment centres?
    How effective are treatments for insanity?
    How much do the physical differences between human and non-human races affect their medical treatment?
    Are there some diseases that only affect non-humans, or only humans?
    Are some treatments lethal to one species but effective in another?
    Do doctors have to specialize in non-human medicine in order to do a good job of it?
    People And Customs: Ethics and Values
    What will people swear a binding oath by?
    What do people use as curse words?
    What are the most desired/most valuable things in this society--gold, jewels, drugs, money, furs, reindeer, oranges, etc?
    Why is it desired/valued?
    Do different races value different things?
    Is there a race/culture for whom non-material things (information, time) are the valuable things?
    How did they get that way?
    What things are considered normal and acceptable in this society that would not be considered normal or acceptable in yours? (Examples: duelling, drugs, open homosexuality, polygamy, infanticide.)
    What things are considered shocking in this society that are not considered shocking in yours? (Examples: showing a woman's ankles, eating left-handed, reading in public.)
    What are the reactions of ordinary people when someone does one of these things?
    What are the acceptable limits to honour and/or honesty in this society?
    Is a binding oath unbreakable no matter what, or can you get out of it if the other party turns out to be evil scum or if you weren't fully informed?
    Are "white lies" acceptable socially, or is lying in any form unacceptable?
    What are the attitudes toward ownership?
    What constitutes "theft" and what can be stolen--gems, gold, purses, small moveables, someone's good name?
    Are thieves organized in a guild, licensed by law, freelance, or what?
    Who is considered a citizen, with the rights and privileges thereof?
    What are those rights and privileges (voting, protection from thieves, the right to a hearing in Rome) and what responsibilities go along with them (jury duty, providing funds or knights for the lord's army)?
    Are there certain classes of people (wizards, foreigners, children, peasants, women) who have fewer legal rights or less recourse than full citizens?
    Are they considered mentally or morally deficient, a danger to the state, or is there some other rational?
    What are the most controversial subjects in this culture?
    What things can you easily start a friendly argument about in any bar?
    What things will automatically start an unfriendly argument? (cf. the list of topics forbidden for discussion on this echo)
    What are the social taboos--what things are "not done", like wearing a bathing suit to the office?
    What things are never talked about?
    What would happen if someone did?
    How do these taboos vary for different races?
    What are the biggest social faux pas--burping loudly at a formal banquet, drawing steel in the presence of a king/noble, asking a dwarf whether it's a male or a female?
    What subjects or actions cause embarrassment or discomfort?
    What are the society's mores regarding courtship, marriage, and family?
    Is marriage primarily a civil or a religious institution?
    What are the standards of beauty for people?
    For paintings and sculpture?
    For clothes and furniture?
    How do they differ from the standards in your culture (example: a culture which considers fatness a highly desirable beauty trait)?
    How do they reflect the physical traits of the various people (example: dwarves considering height a *negative* trait, werewolves attracted by length of teeth or scent, etc.)?
    What kind of ideal life do people aspire to?
    Does everyone want to be an English country gentleperson, living out in the country, or is it the New York social whirl, or the jet-set lifestyle, that attracts most people?
    What kinds of people are the rebels and outcasts of this society?
    How does society deal with them--prison, exile, decapitation, reformation, etc?
    Who are the arbiters of ethics (as opposed to law)?
    How did they get to be arbiters?
    Who are the arbiters of the social milieu?
    Is magic a profession, an art, or just a job? What is the status accorded to magicians in this society? Are they forbidden overt political action, or are wizards and/or the wizard's guild knee-deep in court intrigue?
    Is there tension, rivalry, or outright hostility between any of the actual gods? How does this affect church politics? Court politics? People's everyday lives?
    Does the level of technological advancement match the level of social and political advancement?
    What are the major political factions at present? How long have they been around? Which factions are allies, which enemies? Are there any potential new forces on the political scene (e.g., a rising middle class, a university gaining unexpected power because of certain magical discoveries, etc.)?
    How much influence do "special interest groups" such as merchants, wizards, or various religions, have on court politics? How do they exercise their influence--indirectly (by talking lords or council members into taking their sides) or directly (by having their own representatives on the council)?
    What political positions are considered conservative? Liberal? Unthinkable? How do such positions differ from what is considered conservative/liberal in your own society?
    Are there any shaky political alliances between disparate groups? Why were they formed? How long is it likely to be before they fall apart? When they do, what will the effects be?
    What ancient rivalries and hatreds still affect current attitudes and political positions (examples: Scottish and Welsh separatist groups; Catholics vs. Protestants vs. Muslims; Hatfields vs. McCoys; dwarves vs. elves)?
    What kinds of people are likely to face prejudice: dwarves, werewolves, merchants, women, undertakers? Is this institutionalised (i.e., a matter of law), or is it mostly a matter of public attitude?
    How many people are there in this country? How does this compare with world population? What is considered a small town/large town/city in terms of number of people?
    How diverse is the population of this country--how many different races (human or non-human), creeds, cultures, etc. normally live in various cities and towns in this country? In what percentages?
    Is population shifting from rural to urban, south to north, mountains to coast, etc.? Why--invasions, plague, job opportunities, gold rush? What effects has this had on the places being left? The places gaining people?
    Given the magical/technological level of this society, what is an appropriate ratio of farmers or food producers to urban residents?
    Is there much immigration into or out of various countries? Why? To or from what other areas?
    Which geographical areas are most heavily populated? Least? Why? Are certain regions or types of terrain more popular areas for non-humans (dwarves, etc.) to live? Why?
    Religion and Philosophy
    How do various religions, if any, view magic? Do any forbid it? Require it? Why, or why not? Do any require/forbid magicians to be priests/priestesses (as opposed to members of the congregation)?
    Are there actual gods/godlike beings? If so, do they take an active role in the religions that worship them? Do they take an active role in the lives of everyday people? Why?
    How many gods are there, and is there a hierarchy among them? Which ones are good or evil, or is this meaningless when speaking of gods?
    How do various religions view non-believers? Foreigners? Non-humans? Which support the state/king/government, and which are more interested in ordinary people?
    Is there a difference between miracles and magic? If so, how are they distinguished in everyday events?
    Is there tension, rivalry, or outright hostility between any of the actual gods? How does this affect church politics? People's everyday lives?
    Where does religion fit into this society? Is there a state church? Is freedom of religion the norm? Do people generally think of the temples/churches as parasites, or as useful parts of society?
    If there are actual, demonstrable gods, what part does faith play in their worship? Why do they want worship? What are their various rites like, and why? What offerings are considered good, better, best? Are people supposed to pick one or more gods to worship and ignore the others, or do most people pray to whoever is most likely to grant results in a specific situation (the god of harvest when bringing in the crops, the goddess of war when in battle, etc.)? How do people decide whom to worship? Which temple to be affiliated with?
    How much part do various religions and philosophies play in public and private life? Are philosophers and theologians considered academics, or do they debate in the marketplace, like Socrates? How much influence do their theories have on the way people actually behave?
    Are priests or philosophers full-time occupations, or do they need day jobs? If they are full-time, who supports them--the congregation, a wealthy patron, the temple's investment fund?
    Why are the gods interested in people? Are they like the Greek pantheon (quarrelsome, larger-than-life humans), or are they more transcendent and incomprehensible? Do the gods have limits to what they can do? To what they will do? Can the gods make mistakes?
    How do the various temples and philosophies explain the classic "problem of evil"? Do they think bad things are always a just punishment for some transgression, a character-building exercise, the result of an evil antagonist (Satan, Loki), or just something the gods can't prevent?
    Rules of Magic
    What things can magic not do? What are the limits of magical power?
    Is there a difference between miracles and magic? If so, how are they distinguished?
    Where does magic power come from: the gods, "mana" (cf. Larry Niven's Warlock stories), the personal will power of the magician, etc.? Is it an exhaustible resource?
    How does a magician tap magical power? Does becoming a magician require some rite of passage (investing one's power in an object, being chosen by the gods, constructing or being given a permanent link to the source of power, successfully summoning a demon, etc.) or does it just happen naturally, as a result of study or as a part of growing up?
    What does one need to do to cast a spell -- design an elaborate ritual, recite poetry, mix the right ingredients in a pot? Are there things like a staff, a wand, a familiar, a crystal ball, that are necessary or useful to have before casting spells? If so, where and how do wizards get these things?
    How long does it take to cast a spell? Can spells be stored for later, instant use? Do spells take lots of long ritual, or is magic a "point and shoot" kind of thing?
    Can two or more wizards combine their power to cast a stronger spell, or is magic done only by individuals? What makes one wizard more powerful than another--knowledge of more spells, ability to handle greater quantities of mana, having a more powerful god as patron, etc.?
    Does practicing magic have any detrimental effect on the magician (such as being addictive, slowly driving the magician insane, or shortening the magicians life-span)? If so, is there any way to prevent these effects? Are the effects inevitable in all magicians, or do they affect only those with some sort of predisposition? Do the effects progress at the same rate in everyone?
    How much is known about the laws of magic? How much of what is "known" is wrong (as Aristotle's ideas about human anatomy were wrong, but accepted for centuries)?
    What general varieties of magic are practiced (e.g., herbal potions, ritual magic, alchemical magic, demonology, necromancy, etc.)? Do any work better than others, or does only one variety actually work?
    Are certain kinds of magic practiced solely or chiefly by one sex or another? By one race or culture or another?
    Does a magician's magical ability or power change over time -- e.g., growing stronger or weaker during puberty, or with increasing age? Can a magician "use up" all of his/her magic, thus ceasing to be a magician? If this happens, what does the ex-magician do--die, retire, take up teaching, go into a second career?
    Can the ability to do magic be lost? If so, how -- overdoing it, "burning out," brain damage due to fever or a blow, magical attack, etc.?
    Can the ability to do magic be forcibly taken away? If so, how and by whom? (Traditional example: certain spells could only be worked by virgins; raping such a witch robbed her of her power.)
    What is the price magicians pay in order to be magicians--years of study, permanent celibacy, using up bits of their life or memory with each spell, etc.?
    Rural Factors
    Given the magical/technological level of this society, what is an appropriate ratio of farmers to urban residents?
    Given the state of roads and transportation, how much food is it possible to ship to a given location before it spoils? (This limits the size of cities.)
    Are rural areas primarily farms, forests, fields for grazing, or "waste land"? In outlying areas where there aren't many people, how many roads are there, who builds them, and who maintains them?
    How reliable is the weather from year to year -- is crop production relatively dependable, or do people have to cope with regular famines due to drought or floods?
    What kinds of catastrophic/weird weather are common--tornadoes, hurricanes, blizzards, waterspouts, dust storms? How do people cope? How do non-humans cope?
    How are farming/food-producing areas divided up between humans/nonhumans? What kinds of conflicts are likely (example: expanding human farms encroaching on the forests werewolves or dragons use for hunting)?
    Can peasants/yeomen own his own land, or does it all belong to the lord? What kinds of rights over land, crops, game, etc. does the lord/landowner have? Is poaching a problem?
    Science and Technology
    Is the level of technology in this society comparable to that of ancient Rome, the Middle Ages, the Renaissance, the Industrial Revolution, what?
    What important inventions or advances have been made (the wheel, gunpowder, printing, flush toilets)? Have any of them been produced in quantities sufficient to affect the daily lives of the average person, or are flush toilet a luxury for nobility only?
    What inventions or advances have not been made that you would expect to see at this stage of technological development? Why? Which ones are about to be made?
    How much is known about the laws of nature, physics, and magic? How much of what is commonly known is wrong (e.g., Aristotle's ideas about human anatomy, which were wrong but accepted for centuries)?
    Are the laws of nature and physics actually different in this world, or are they the same as in real life? How does magic fit in? How do magical beasts fit in?
    Where is scientific and/or magical research done -- universities, private labs, under the auspices of the king or government, etc?
    In what areas might magic replace technology, and thus suppress its development (example: if a spell to keep food cold is easy and cheap, there's no need to invent refrigerators)? In what areas might magic cause more rapid technological or scientific development (common use of crystal balls might lead someone to think of inventing the lens/telescope sooner)?
    How do the technology levels and scientific knowledge of non-human races compare to those of humans? Are there significant differences, and if so, why?
    Social Organization
    Where is scientific and/or magical research done -- universities, private labs, by the government, etc.?
    Does it require a license to be a wizard? A driver's type license (something nearly everyone gets upon coming of age) or a doctor's-type license (something that only a small portion of the population will ever get)? Who certifies wizards: the government, wizard's guild, local priests, independent accounting firm?
    What are the various ranks and titles and proper forms of address for the aristocracy/nobility? Is everybody "my lord" or "my lady," or are there more distinctions (your grace, your highness, your majesty, your holiness, etc.)?
    Which occupations are most respected? Which are most looked down on? Why?
    How many levels are there in this society (e.g., peasant, bourgeoisie, warrior, nobleman)? How firm are the divisions between classes (is it disgraceful for a nobleman to engage in trade or for a warrior to help with the harvest)?
    How difficult is it to rise or fall from one social level to another? How much social mobility is there? How much do people think there is?
    Transportation and Communications
    What are the common domesticated animals used for transportation at various levels of society -- e.g., oxen, horses, donkeys, camels, etc.?
    Are there magical means of transportation (teleport spells, magic carpets, dragon-riding)? How do they compare in speed, safety, and expense to non-magical means? How commonly are they used, and for what purposes (industrial shipping vs. travel for fun)?
    For travelling short distances within a city, what are the alternatives? Can people hire a cab, a litter, a rickshaw, or do they have to walk or rely on their own servants or horses?
    How are messages sent when necessary? Is there a public/private postal system, or does everyone of importance have to send messengers? How fast can news get from one point to another?
    Are there magical means of communication -- crystal balls, scrying in a pool of water, telepathy? How common? How reliable? How expensive?
    How available is water transportation?
    How common is travel (for any reason)? Does the concept of travel "to see the world" or for fun, even exist? How dangerous is travel? How large a group is considered safe? How much traffic is there inside/outside the main cities? Which areas are the best/worst?
    What are the fastest means of travelling long distances over land? Over water? Which are the safest?
    What is transportation like? Are there good roads? Who built them? Who is responsible for maintaining them?
    Where would a traveller stay at night? Are here enough travellers to support inns, or do people have to stay at the equivalent of medieval monasteries or in people's homes?
    Are some classes of people (slaves, peasants) not expected to travel at all? Are some (heralds, messengers) expected to travel constantly?
    How do people find out what is happening in the world -- rumour, town crier, newspapers, TV and radio? How slanted is the news they get this way, and in what direction? Is there freedom of the press? If not, who controls/censors it and through what means?
    How are books produced? Are they common (has the printing press been invented), or are they valuable hand-written objects? Where are the great libraries/collections? How accessible are they to scholars, wizards, the general public? Who supports them?
    Urban Factors
    How many people are there in this country? How does this compare with world population? What is considered a small town/large town/city in terms of number of people?
    Is population shifting from rural to urban, south to north, mountains to coast, etc.? Why? What effects has this had on the places being left? The places gaining people?
    Does city layout reflect some philosophy (religious or architectural or political), such as that the "head" of the city must be at the centre, the highest point, or the most strategic location? Or were layout considerations mainly practical? Or did most cities "just grow"?
    Are there public or private parks in most/any cities? What kinds of activities take place in them?
    Are cities generally laid out on a square-grid system of streets? How wide are the streets and alleys?
    What are the landmarks in each city? Where are the interesting neighbourhoods, like Chinatown, the dwarfish section, etc., and what things give each its special character?
    Where do people go to shop? To eat? To have fun? To do touristy things?
    Are there questions that must be asked or avoided when visiting someone (e.g., how's the family, how's the business, never talk politics or religion, etc.)? Are there topics that can only be raised by the host? By the guest?
    How seriously does the culture take the responsibilities of host and guest? What rules define when someone becomes a host or guest (e.g., in some mid-Easter countries, giving bread and salt to someone makes the person your guest; giving him a 5-course meal without bread or salt doesn't)?
    What things are considered courteous to offer a guest: food, reading material, personal guards or attendants, music/entertainment, a person of the opposite sex to sleep with?
    What is considered a courteous response to a host's offer? Are there things it is considered rude to accept? Rude to turn down? Rude to ask for? Rude not to ask for?
    When a guest arrives, is food or drink offered immediately, after an interval, or only on request? Is there a particular food or drink that is customary to offer a newly arrived guest?
    How do the different customs of various countries/races interact, conflict, etc? Example: A man from a culture where it is not polite to refuse a host's offer of food being the guest in a culture where the guest is expected to say "when."
    Which peoples/countries/races have been in conflict in the recent past? Why? When and why was the most recent war? Who won? Who is still mad about that?
    What major weapons of war are available (e.g., siege towers, catapults, cannons, A-bombs)?
    How much as the presence of magic affected strategy and tactics? Do army commanders have to use specific unusual formations or techniques to deal with possible magical attacks? How can magic be used as part of a battle plan (example: getting a weather magician to make it rain so that the enemy cannons are harder to move in the mud)?
    How are armies usually structured? Is there a formal, independent command structure, or is everybody officially under the command of the lord who brought them to the king's army, or what? If a formal structure, what are the various ranks and titles?
    Who can call up men for an army? How is this done? Does the king ask his lords for men, and the lords then draft their peasants, or can the king go straight to the bottom?
    Are there professional soldiers/mercenaries? Is a career in the king's army possible, or would you have to be a mercenary or sell-sword in order to make a living as a soldier? Does the army accept volunteers?
    How large is a typical army? What percentage of the soldiers in it will be trained (knights, professional soldiers, guards, mercenaries) and what percent will be untrained recruits? Are recruits given training, or are they expected to learn on the job (i.e., in battle)?
    How is the army supplied? Are soldiers allowed to live off the land/peasantry, or do they pay for what they take? How are supplies handled during long campaigns? How many days worth of supplies can the army haul along with them? (Ref. ALEXANDER THE GREAT AND THE LOGISTICS OF THE MACEDONIAN ARMY for the math on how much a horse can carry, etc.)
    What are the accepted conventions for making war (example: only fight in winter when nobody is busy with crops; don't make war on civilians; only certain kinds of weapons are used; etc)? Do they differ from race to race?
    How does the presence of non-humans (dwarves, vampires, etc.) affect strategy, tactics, and battles generally? Are special weapons required if an army is facing certain kinds of non-human armies? How would non-human soldiers turn their physical differences from humans to their advantage?
    Are particular non-human races traditionally better with certain weapons (e.g., dwarves with axes, elves with bows)? Why--because they have greater strength, better eyesight, more manual dexterity, etc?
    What do you need to do to cast a spell--design an elaborate ritual, recite poetry, mix the right ingredients in a pot, speak the right words in an ancient language, etc.? Are there things like a staff, a wand, a familiar, a crystal ball, that are necessary to have before casting any spells? Certain specific spells? If so, where and how do new wizards get these things? Do they make them, buy them from craftsmen, inherit them from their teachers, order them from Wizard Supply, Inc.?
    Is there a numerical limit to the number of wizards in the world? Why?
    Where does magic power come from: the gods, the "mana" of the world, the personal will power of the magician? Do different races/species have different sources for their magic, or does everybody use the same one?
    Are different races/intelligent species good at different kinds of magic? If so, what types are associated with what species? Are there species that use magic more or less unconsciously--for instance, dragons using magic to fly without consciously being aware of it, or werewolves using magic to change?
    How does a magician tap his/her magic power? Does becoming a magician require some rite of passage (investing one's power in an object, being chosen by the gods, constructing or being given a permanent link to a source of power, etc.) or does it just happen naturally as a part of growing up?
    Does a magician's magical ability or power change over time --e.g., growing stronger or weaker during puberty, or with increasing age? Can a magician "use up" all of his/her magic, thus ceasing to be a magician? What do such magicians do then--retire to teach, commit suicide, get a normal day job, go into consulting?
    Is a magician's lifetime normally longer or shorter than average? Why? Does this vary for different races/species? Are there races/species all of whose members are magicians?
    Are certain spells illegal (as opposed to magic generally)? Why--because of the effect of the spell, or because of the ingredients or procedures needed to cast it, or what? How are violations of this law detected?
    How are illegal magicians apprehended? Punished? Is this the responsibility of the magician's guild, or do ordinary law enforcement agencies have to deal with it?
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Shadowknight12 in Your opinions, please.   
    What Robin said. Unless you're writing yourself, or mostly yourself, no need for that tag.
    Sounds like a funny story, though.
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    Techno-Ninja got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 11: 12-19-10   
    Pen Name: Techno-Ninja
    Story Link: AFF Prompt Response: Yule
    Type of Fic: FlashFic
    Rating: Adult
    Fandom: Star Ocean 2
    Pairing: N/A
    Warnings: AFFO, Angst, Challengefic, COMPLETE, Fet, MC, NoSex, Other, TF
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    Techno-Ninja reacted to Shadowknight12 in Meaning of Reputation Scores? So tell   
    In no particular order.
    Good: Seducer, Hot Stuff, Fast-Talker, Prized Lover, Keeper, Philanderer, Charmer, Head-turner.
    Bad: Lech, Ogler, Funky, Repulsive, Pervert, Sniffer, Sleazy, Dirty.
    Neutral (-5 to 5?): Stalker. Because it's hilarious.
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    Techno-Ninja got a reaction from FairySlayer in Tomoe2005's FanFiction Writer's Meme   
    1. How about a brief introduction of yourself?
    I'm Techno-Ninja. :3 As the pen name implies, I have a thing for music made with machines, and the long dead art of survival and espionage.

    2. Fabulous! And what got you into fanfiction to begin with?
    I just stumbled across this site one day, read a bunch of fics, and was inspired to write some of my own.
    I wrote a crappy eyesore in 2005, lost internet access, and forgot about this site for a few years.
    Then, I came back one day, read some more, remembered I had an account, and was inspired all over again.
    I deleted the eye bleeder off my account and started posting new stories.
    ...It only took about six years for me to write something decent. =P
    3. I see, so what kind of fanfiction do you like to write?
    So far, I have only successfully written and posted yaoi and slash. I have plans to write het and yuri/femslash in the future.
    I write pure crack, warm and fluffy romance, and everything between. ^^
    I favour the Naruto fandom, but I have written for Star Ocean as well.
    I have an original story in the works.
    4. Do you tend to write the same pairings/characters? Or are you a fandom whore?
    I am very much a whore. XD I see potential in a lot of pairings and characters, so I write about a pretty big variety.
    My attention span is short. Usually I'll obsess over a pairing for a few weeks at a time before moving on to another one. Ninety percent of my work doesn't see the light of a computer monitor. x.x
    5. What is your more popular fanfic and why do you think people like it so?
    Sugar and Alcohol (Fandom: Naruto Pairings: Deidara/Tobi/Itachi, Deidara/Tobi, implied Kisame x Itachi, off-screen Kakuzu x Pain.)
    Probably because it's a cracky fic revolving around the Akatsuki.
    It's also my most lemon-filled story to date. =P
    6. Forget other people, what is the fanfic you've written you're most proud of?
    Unspoken (Fandom: Naruto Pairings so far: Izumo/Kotetsu, Genma/Kotetsu)
    It's not finished yet, but I'm loving the story I am in the process of developing.
    7. Do you find writing easy? Hard? What are the most difficult aspects of writing you struggle with?
    It depends on how much sleep and caffeine I have had, and what kind of a mood I am in.
    I suppose I would have to say hard. The most difficult aspects for me are how to begin a story and how/when to end it. Also, the length and flow of my chapters varies greatly.
    8. Write a few sentences of so of your favorite pairing or character.
    My current obsession is with Ashton and Noel from the video game Star Ocean Two.
    Ashton is an unlucky swordsman who tripped over a rock while fighting a double-headed dragon. This somehow ended up with them being attached to his shoulders. He also has a barrel fetish. Noel is a mage. He loves animals and seems to have a deep understanding of their body language. He is self-conscious about his vaguely animal-like appearance.
    "Please stop." Noel whispered, squirming beneath the swordsman.
    "This is revenge for hitting Creepy with a snowball and making him attack me!" Ashton declared.
    Said fire dragon bit Ashton's hair. He ignored him in favour of rubbing one of Noel's fur tipped, elf-like ears.
    The dragon host's curiosity was a force to be reckoned with.
    An involuntary shiver ran down Noel's spine as a quiet moan escaped his lips. His eyes rolled back in his head.
    Ashton looked on in fascination at the pile of putty beneath him. The two dragons on his shoulders stared as well, just as intrigued as their host.

    9. Are there any fanfiction trends/clichés you can't stand or are just sick of?
    I love me some yaoi.
    I hate the Seme/Uke thing, and the formulas that go along with it.
    Perfect asshole seme that is loved despite being a complete jerk.
    Girly, whiny, useless uke.
    And basing who goes on top or bottom based on appearance or age? Pfft!
    I like reading and writing about characters who have personalities, and who aren't overused cliches.
    For example, in one story I wrote, I had a 19 year old who is 5'5", with big blue eyes and long blonde hair top an older man three inches taller, and much more muscular than him. I also implied that giant shark man gets topped by a short, frail, younger man.
    I also like it when characters top and bottom. I don't see enough stories like that. "Seme" always tops, "Uke" always bottoms. Bah! I don't have much knowledge about homosexual relationships, but I'm pretty sure most don't go down like a typical yaoi. XD
    10. Are you guilty of any of the fanfiction trends/clichés you now hate? Or any other ones?
    I'm not sure.
    11. What was the first fandom you wrote for? Do you still like/participate in it?
    Naruto. And yes, it's still my favourite. I've got a tattoo that can prove it. =P
    12. Name your OTPs or most frequently written pairings/characters and explain what it is about them you love to write.
    Counting the works that are never finished or posted...
    Kakashi x Iruka (Naruto)- This is the pairing that got me into fanfiction. A cool, laid back guy, and an easily agitated teacher. Their personalities make for some interesting dynamics.
    Izumo x Kotetsu (Naruto)- They're best friends, who are never seen apart. It's easy, and I like the idea of them together.
    Sai x Sakura (Naruto) - The possibilities with this pairing cover a great range for me. Crack, romance, angst/tragedy, and everything between.
    Shino x Hinata (Naruto)- They are two quiet, often overlooked characters who I think would make a very sweet couple.
    Deidara x Tobi (Naruto)- Tobi is such an idiot who's always getting on his senpai's nerves. Little does his senpai know that Tobi isn't the idiot he makes himself out to be...
    Ashton x Noel (Star Ocean 2)- Ashton has a barrel fetish, and Noel has an overly sensitive erogenous zone. It's crack, really.
    13. What would you call your writing "style"?
    I would call it "my own." :3
    14. Do you read other people's fanfic? If so, what do you find yourself reading the most?
    Yeppers. I frequent the Naruto, Star Ocean, and Tales of Symphonia archives.
    15. Name one thing you'd LOVE to write, but have been too afraid or shy to do.
    A natural body magic fic. ...DeviantART is full of people with this fetish. XD My most popular drawings involve it.
    It would be fun to write, because it would be so different. That's also the reason I haven't wrote it. It's just so weird.
    16. Do you have trouble taking criticism? Or worse yet, do you have the dreaded bloated ego?
    Nope. My ego is probably too small, and I like criticism. Being told what I can improve upon is a great help.

    17. When you write, is there anything that helps? Music? Quiet room? Repairing toaster ovens?
    Music. Lots of music. I also like to submerge myself in the media of the fandom I am writing for before I write. If it's an original story I am writing, I like to bounce ideas off of friends.
    18. What inspires you?
    People, emotions, music, other fanfiction, canon events in the fandoms I like...random plot bunnies tend to spawn in my brain out of nowhere.
    19. Lastly, how would you sum up your fanfiction experiences and yourself as a writer?
    I read more than I write, and I lurk a lot. I've come across some very talented people.
    I only recently became active in the forums, but I really like the AFF community. It's nice to be able to write what I want and not have to worry about being looked down on for it. That's not a luxury I have anywhere else.
    I'm not a particularly well-known authoress, but I don't mind. I write for myself, for the fun of it.
    20. Tag some friends, because they'll have you for it.
    Eh, no thanks.
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    Techno-Ninja got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 8: 11-28-10   
    Pen Name: Techno-Ninja
    Story Link: In The Snow
    Type of Fic: FlashFic
    Rating: Adult+
    Fandom: Star Ocean 2
    Pairing: Ashton x Noel
    Warnings: Challengefic, COMPLETE, Fet, SoloM