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  1. This is a new sotry in the HP section.

    The idea is that Harry is born a girl, her name is Heather and instead of Hagrid coming to get Harry, its Snape.

    The disclaimor says that some of the chapter was copied directly from the book. But I have the book in my lap. And it is nearly all of it. All they are doing is changing names and only a few other things. I don't know if this counts as plagerist, but if I were J.K Rowling, I would be furious about this as it seems more copying then a fan fic.

    There for, I leave it up to you to decide and thought I should just bring it to attention.

    http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095655

  2. Humming faintly, Rae uncorked yet another bottle, having just finished off a rather large group of sue's. "Ah, there is nothing quite like the satisfaction of making your own ink.” She said, sighing happily.

    Hearing a series of thumps from the room next to hers, she rolled her eyes. “Kids.” She muttered before a very distinct shout of “LET ME GO!” Due to her enhanced hearing, she was able to recognize the voice immediately and groaned.

    “Again? This is getting fucking ridiculous.” Grabbing her katana she left the peace of her room and made her way over to the other. Not even bothering to knock, she simply kicked the door in, watching in satisfaction as it flew across the room, hitting the “storm trooper” and taking him with it.

    Looking at the other two males, she growled loudly, eyes glowing dangerously as she pointed her blade at them. “Don't fucking move or so help me I will cut off your dicks and shove them so far up your ass you will taste them!” She threatened.

    The three men cowered and didn't move realizing the sword was no prop and the woman before them not normal. Going over to Kagome, Rae scowled darkly and unceremoniously scooped her up into a fireman’s hold, returning to her room. Once the door was sealed she opened another portal and stepped through into Cal.

    Growling loudly, the half-demon allowed her energy to flare, knowing it wouldn't hurt the young priestess in her arms, merely zap her back into wakefulness.

    Kagome moaned softly and opened her eyes. Looking around, she panicked slightly until she realized she was being carried like a sack of potatoes over Rae's shoulder, back in Cal.

    “Oh! Hi Rae, did you save me?” She asked, squirming to be put down. The arm around her only tightened though.

    “Yes,” Rae growled, her voice rough in irritation. “But for the last time.”

    Kagome blinked. “Umm...can you put me down?”

    Rae smirked. “Oh I'll do more then put you down my dear.” She purred, stepping into what could only be described as a dungeon, though a bit warmer. Setting the young woman down, she quickly shackled her to the wall, infusing the chains with magic so that Kagome couldn't get free.

    “Hey! What are you doing?” Kagome shouted, struggling against the chains. “Let me go Rae!” Her spiritual energy began to crackle around her, but Rae simply ignored it, her angel half nullifying it easily.

    “That won't work on me so you may as well stop. You are going to stay here and think about how you are behaving. You have been more like a sue lately then an author, always winding up the damsel in distress. It is getting to the point where you are becoming a liability, hell, I got hurt the last time I had to save you. So I am giving you a choice. You can either shape up, and act like an author, or we can dump you back in your own world. Of course there is the third option of joining the Sue's. But then we would be forced to kill you.” She said, heading towards the door.

    “Where are you going? You can't just leave me here!” Kagome shouted.

    Rae snorted. “Watch me. I am going to give you some time to think things over. Until then, I am going to go back to what I was doing before I had to rescue you. AGAIN.”

    Leaving the room, she allowed the door to slide closed behind her and stretched. The chains could be released by someone besides her, but not by a human. So if someone else wanted to let her go, or needed to for some reason, they could.

    "Cal? Could you give Kagome some food and water at some point? She is going to be staying in there for a bit to think." She asked, heading to the kitchen to get a snack to take with her.

    "That shouldn't be a problem. As long as she doesn't put up too much of a fuss, she might even be better company then the last motionless girl that I got left with. Less bloody too." Cal told Rae keeping his tone professional.

    Rae chuckled softly. "Thank you Cal." Checking her phone, she nodded and returned to the still open portal, closing it behind her. “Well fuck.” She mumbled, looking at the now sue filled room. Dozens of eyes turned to her and soon the room was filled with mass chaos as Rae happily tore into the group.

  3. Baked Fish and Vegetables

    4 fish fillets

    4 medium potatoes, cut into 1 inch cubes

    4 medium carrots cut into 1 inch pieces

    4 small onions, quartered

    4 Tbsp. Butter or margerine

    Salt, Pepper, Garlic Powder, Celery Seed (to taste)

    On eac of four square 9 inch peices of aluminum foil, place a fish fillet and protion of potato, carrot, and onion. Add 1 tablespoon butter/margering to each squre. Sprinkle with seasonings. Fold foil over and seal edges well. Bake on cookie sheet at 350 for 40 minutes.

  4. Sighing softly, Rae allowed her consciousness to finally return to her body. Being what she was, she was able to use the art of meditation for more then just calming her mind. She had spent the time healing her body, trying to repair the damage that was done during the last fight without having to use her virus. The wounds from Merry Ellen Sue had proven difficult and the scars were still red and sore, though that would fade.

    Stretching, she looked around the room slowly, her stomach growling loudly in protest due to her lack of eating. Standing, she decided to ignore it for the time being and headed into the bathroom, stripping on the way there. Stepping into the shower, she began a slow cleansing ritual, already aware of her friends leaving, having been able to hear them while meditating.

    Once finished, she continued to stand there, letting the hot water soothe her muscles. Reaching over to the a small electrical panel on the wall she pressed a series of buttons, the screen above it flickering to life, the image of a rather angry Crane, glaring back at her.

    Hi Jonathan.” She said softly, unable to look away.

    Crane's eyes bore into hers his expression never changing. “What do you want Rae.” He snapped.

    Wincing, she lowered her head slightly. “I just wanted to make sure you are ok...”

    Snorting, Jonathan finally broke eye contact with her and went back to mixing some chemicals. “You expect me to believe you care? After forgetting about me in the bag, letting god knows what happen and then leaving, again without so much as a note?”

    Rae whimpered and bit her lip, shoulders hunching. “I'm sorry Jonathan. I never meant to forget about you. I was going to let you out right after we were done at the tower but there was a fight. I couldn't risk you getting hurt. After that we were all so tired and some people needed patching up and I just...I'm sorry...” She sniffled quietly, eyes watering a bit.

    Jonathan looked up after a bit and gave a sigh of resignation. He was far to used to her running off like that, hell, he did it to her plenty of times. Never leaving that world, but still, it caused her pain, just as this had caused him. Not that he would ever admit that, anger was simply easier. “When will you be back.”

    Rae smiled faintly and stood up straight again. “Soon, I hope. I don't really know. But time flows differently here so it shouldn't seem like very long there. Once this is done, I will return for a good long time. After all, I still have a promise to make good on.” She chuckled, smirking at him.

    He smirked back in response. “Yes. You do.”

    With that, the call ended and feeling better though still slightly upset, Rae left the shower. Grabbing a towel and drying off she got dressed finding a pair of black jeans and a white tee with the words “Heaven in Hell” written on the front in dripping red. Brushing out her hair, she allowed her feathered wings to spread out, settling on one black and one white.

    Leaving her room she quickly caught the scent of blood and headed towards the medical bay, stopping first to grab an impressively large amount of raw meet from the kitchen. Entering the medical room, she quickly caught sight of the dead, pink-haired woman on one of the tables, recognizing her as the source of the scent she had picked up on. Nibbling the raw meat, she looked the girl over. She wrinkled her nose at the conflicting scents, especially the pheromones and snorted softly.

    Cal?” She called softly between mouthfuls, head tilted to the side in curiosity. “Who's this?”

    "I have no idea, but her laying in the middle of a sidewalk seemed to have been getting a lot of attention. I don't really see why it was necessary give her to me, but Apollo was insistent." Cal answered, a bit flippantly.

    Rae looked her over, taking another bite of the raw meat. "What did Apollo-chan say exactly if you don't mind." She asked, trying to asses the situation and see if there was anything she needed to do.

    Cal sighed. "Something about her being murdered by someone with a tail and ears or someone in red and black and to cover it up. Didn't pay real close attention to be honest, all seems quite trivial compared to some of the things you all do on a daily basis." He said seeming a bit board with it. "All that really matters is there's a dead body stinking up my medical bay and they haven't come back to deal with it." Cal claimed, sounding almost sarcastically exasperated.

    Giving a patient roll of her eyes, Rae mumbled softly. "I am sure there was more to it then that Cal..." Leaving the room, she took her plate to back to the kitchen and washed it before returning to her room and slipping things into her bag. Looking around for her katana, she frowned faintly, knowing it had been in the room when she left. "What do you know about the pheromones she is doused in? Is she a Sue?" She asked, still searching, “and have you seen my blade? It needed sharpening and was here a minute ago..."

    "The pheromones she was covered in were suppose to make her more attractive to men. Probably something the Sues made, but she isn't a Sue. She appears to be a normal human. I'd say she was a bit more heartless than most, but that seems pretty normal for humans." Cal stated with an air of sarcasm. "And your blade is being cleaned, I'd prefer to keep as little of the Sues as possible around. Never mind the two that are follow Kelk around. Bloody ghost, have to burn so many sheets because of them." Cal grumbled harshly. "If you'd like I could have your blade sharpened." He added after a moment, leveling out his tone to a begrudged professionalism.

    Rae nodded faintly as she contemplated the information. "I would appreciate it." She said softly, pulling on some shoes. "A civilian tainted by sue's...how annoying. I take it you are done with any scans and Apollo wants the body dumped in a less suspicious manner?" Using a small amount of magic, she altered her shirt so that it looked like her wings were a little less real.

    "She did mention getting rid of the body in a way that'd make it look like it wasn't murder. I was going to leave it until she got back to have her do it, but if you'd be willing to remove her from my medical bay that'd be grand." Cal told her, actually sounding a bit happy about it. "Now, if only getting rid of all the dead things were so easy." He added with a sigh.

    Rae chuckled softly. "Though it probably isn't what you mean, I just cleaned out the fridge of any raw meat in it. Thank you for stocking that by the way." Grabbing her leather ankle boots, she slowly zipped them up, grabbing a leather vest and pulling it on. As much as she said she hated it, she also added some make up to highlight her inhuman eyes and appearance.

    "I can get rid of it for you. I spend enough time amongst humans to know of many stupid things they do that result in death." Returning to the medical bay, she held her breath against the stink of the pheromones. Pulling out a small vial, she dumped the contents into the hole in the young woman's chest and used magic to create a barrier over the hole to keep the fluids both in and out. "Could you remove her clothes for me and douse her in water soapy water? It will help remove the pheromones and make the story I am about to set up more believable."

    "Not the worst thing I've had to undress and clean before." Cal commented before some mechanical appendages extended from the table to cut away the clothes before rinsing the body. "It doesn't make much difference to me how you get rid of her. Though, I'm sure that Apollo and Foe would care, and I can't rightly yell at them for dumping me with a body if I can't tell them where it went." Cal noted calmly seeming quite interested in the ability to be upset at them.

    Looking over the body, Rae mumbled softly to herself and nodded. "I don't suppose they sent over the missing heart as well?" She asked. "Also, how do I look? Think I could pass for a con-goer with some sort of demon/angel fetish? Because I really do not feel like dressing up or altering myself too much." She said, once again using magic to alter the body a bit.

    "The heart is in the bag." Cal stated dropping a plastic bag on the table next to the corpse with a mechanical arm. "And you look like you could pass for a human in a costume, but at this point I think you could wander out there looking however you want and pass as someone in a costume." Cal noted almost sarcastically, disappointed in humans. "You should be fine, the body might be a bit harder to explain, but you seem like you have a plan." He added.

    Rae nodded and smirked, eyes glinting slightly. "Of course I have a plan, I wouldn't attract the men I do if I was some mindless twit." Picking up the bag, she removed the heart and slid it into the cavity, placing a warming charm over the corpse.

    "I have half a mind to dress up as Jonathan. He would certainly find that amusing. But I fear that would attract more undesired attention. Granted, I do have a few canisters of his toxin, but fun will have to come later."

    Shouldering her bag, she looked over the body a final time. "I need my sword now Cal, if you don't mind. And could you please tell me where everyone is? I'm sure you monitor things closer then you let on and I don't want to go into the unknown. It's not wise, especially when someone is clearly dangerous." She reasoned.

    Cal sighed. "Apollo, Bronx, Foe, and Kelk seem to be dealing with the people who killed the girl. As long as you avoid the main convention hotels you should be fine." Cal stated as an arm dropped from the ceiling holding Rae's sword. "Your sword is cleaned and sharpened. Now, if you wouldn't mind removing the corpse before it starts to stink again." Cal stated, sounding a bit displeased with having the body at all.

    Rae released a small amount of irritated energy, her emotions still a bit raw as she grasped the sword, tying it to her belt. "Patience is a virtue Cal. I don't need to cause more trouble by being careless. I only have a few more questions and she doesn't smell bad. It's not like she has started to decompose or anything." Grabbing a towel, she began carefully trying to wrap it around the girls torso. "Now, what about Sanura and Kagome?"

    "Kagome seems to have gotten herself lost, somewhere. I'm sure she's fine, she usually is." Cal stated dismissively. "Sanura is wandering the Con, apparently on the hunt for more Sues. As much as I hate to say it, she could use some hobbies that don't involve killing things and taking parts of them as trophies." Cal told Rae.

    Rae snorted. "Fine? The last two times that woman has been out she has been nearly raped by a demon, and taken hostage by a Joker-stu." She snarked before checking to make sure she had everything. "You know, there are worse hobbies. Sanura could collect live specimens to experiment on and turn into horrible monsters that will cause the destruction of the world." Once satisfied she had all she needed, Rae nodded faintly. "Last question. If I open up a small portal in here, will it cause any problems for you? It's not my favorite mode of transportation, but its more accurate then your random doors that open up into trouble, and easier then sneaking out."

    "Like I said, fine. Kagome does this sort of thing professionally." Cal assured Rae. "At least, I think being kidnapped and put in life threatening situations where someone needs to save them is a profession. If not then I'm not entirely sure what a Princess is." Cal added in a moment of thought. "Anyway, a portal would be fine, I'll just localize the room and it should work." Cal told Rae dismissing the last concept.

    Rolling her eyes, Rae animated the body and began to focus her energy. "I think that is my cue to leave before I get into the debate of professional jobs and royalty. See ya later Cal, thanks for the help."

    Opening the portal, she stepped through it into an empty hotel room. Having checked the girls pockets, she had managed to find a hotel card key, the room it belonged too being the one in which she was now standing. Looking at the dead girl standing behind her, she sighed. She hated using magic like this, but it was necessary.

    Flicking her wrist, she watched as the girl traipsed out of the room and onto the balcony before “falling” over the edge of the railing, having looked like she was going to flash people below. The result was what looked to be a foolish girl, impaled on something below, her body cooling and blood pouring out. Gruesome, but effective. Rae only hoped there had been no children around.

    Going into the bathroom, she turned on the shower so that it looked like the girl had been using it. Once done staging, she opened another portal and stepped through it, coming out in a deserted alley. Looking around, Rae soon left it, mixing with the crowd easily. Opening her mind, she touched it to the link she had created with Bronx, letting her know what had happened and that she would be around and hunting low level sues.

    Finding a nearby hotel, she went up to the counter and was able to get a room thanks to a small bribe. As she made her way up to the room, she let a small amount of her energy leak, making sure to be enough to attract low level sues, while leaving the higher levels to think she was too far below them to bother with.

    Once in the room, she sat her bag down on the bed and began to pull out several empty ink wells, setting them on the bedside table before settling herself in a nearby chair to wait. It wasn't long before the door burst open and several sue's stormed in. With a predatory smirk and a flick of her wrist, the door closed behind them, sealing itself.

    My, my, what do you we have here.” She purred, standing and allowing her wings to stretch. “Don't you know it's rude to barge into other peoples rooms like that?”

    Looking around in confusion at this unexpected “welcome” one of the sues finally managed to find their voice. “Who are you?” She demanded.

    Rae shrugged. “No one of importance.” She answered, small fangs gleaming softly. Before the annoying woman could ask anything else, Rae struck, attacking the group. The sues tried to put up a fight, but at such low levels it was more of a massacre then anything else, their inkish blood leaving quite the mess.

    Looking around ink spattered room, Rae went to the nightstand and uncorked one of the bottles, watching with satisfaction as it began to siphon the so called “blood” of the defeated into itself. Once all traces of the sue's were gone, the door once again unlocked and the young woman took up her spot on the chair once, waiting for the next group to come. As she waited, she pulled out a sketchbook, took up the first inkwell and begnn a new drawing.

  5. In all honesty? No, I wouldn't pay. Why pay for something you can do for free yourself? The fact that people are lazy about such a simple thing is and don't want to take a few minutes is rediculious. Instead, they want someone who is already busy as heck keeping the site going, to come in and fix it for them. If they were 5, I could see that. But as we are all adults, or should be, I don't see why people can't just suck it up and do it themselves...

    That may be a bit harsh, but *shrugs* I believe people should behave like the capeable adults they are. But then, I am a bit jaded XD

  6. What I don't understand is how she became this way. It is my understanding that she was always like this. Where as her own mother was the biggest sweetheart in the world. I should know, I KNEW my great grandmother.My grandmother even broke HER heart and was mean to her! None of her other kids were ever like that.

  7. So, I feel the need to at least talk about this a bit to vent frustrations.

    Why must people be so fucking insensitive?! I mean seriously, last night was my grandmothers birthday. So we went out to dinner. My sisters husband of only a couple months (and bf for a couple years) just went to jail a few weeks ago. We all know it is breaking my sisters heart because she misses him and he is going to miss a lot of things.

    So what does the old bitch do? The ENTIRE night, all she talks about is him being in jail when it is CLEARLY upsetting my sister. She ended up crying at the table in the middle of the restaurant for fucks sake! But did the bitch stop? NO! She just kept going on and on! I swear, the next person I run into that does something like that, whether it be my grandmother or not, I am going to give them one warning before tearing into them.

    NO ONE makes my baby sister cry but ME. And I don't even do it. That is my right as an older sister. The only other person with that right is my mother.

    *takes a deep breath* I feel better. For now.

    Oh and on another note, the other thing that pisses me off is that the old bitch talks about it to anyone and everyone that will listen. Even though my sister has asked her not to repeatedly. *twitches*

  8. This one is pretty good. Personally I intend to cut down the icing recipe a bit. It makes too much in my opinion. But I decided to post the original so others can decide for themselves.

    Spiced Pumpkin Cupcakes

    1 pkg. (18 1/4 oz) yellow cake mix

    1 pkg.(4 servings) vanilla instant pudding mix

    1 cup canned pumpkin

    1/2 cup oil

    1/2 cup water

    3 eggs

    1 1/2 tsp. Ground Cinnamon

    1 tsp Ground Cloves

    1 tsp Vanilla Extract

    BEAT all ingredients with electric mixer on low speeds just until moistened. Beat on medium speed for 2 minutes. Spoon batter into 24 paper-lined muffin cups, filling each cup 2/3 full

    Bake in preheated 350 degree oven for 20 minutes (use the middle rack.) Frost cooled cupcakes with spiced cream cheese frosting. Makes 24 cupcakes.

    Spiced Cream Cheese Frosting

    1 pkg. (8 oz) softened Cream Cheese

    1/4 cup softened butter

    1 tsp Vanilla Extract

    1/4 tsp Ground Cloves

    1 box (16 oz) Confectioners Sugar

    BEAT Cream cheese, butter, vanilla, and ground cloves until light and fluffy. Gradually beat in confectioners sugar until smooth.

    Note: I would highly recommend an electric hand mixer for frosting and only add about 1/4 -1/3 cups of confectioners sugar at a time.

  9. So, yeah. As the topic title says, I need some help/advice. I have never written an outline for a story and have no idea how. I think this is part of why I have a hard time finishing a story, after a point, I forget where I was going with something or what I was going to do. So, does anyone know of any websites that can help or can help me with how to do this?

    The next thing I need help with is that I found the beginning of an old story I started back in '09. I like the idea of it but it was horribly written and some things need to change. But I am not sure how to go about it. Any idea's for this?

    Any help is appreciated! *hugs all*

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