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    Vocabulary Turn-offs

    Most derogatory words referring to a body part in a sex scene piss me off, though I can deal with it. Also, leaving words incomplete or spelled incorrectly. Inaccurate grammar. The list goes on and on.
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    New Beta

    http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097738 Here's the link to my story. It's already posted, and I'm still working on it.
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    New Beta

    I'm looking for a beta that is good at description. My strength is dialogue, but I'm really weak at description. How are you at it? My story is an original, but I haven't been able to update in a while due to circumstances beyond my control.
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    Hardcore Beta, Will Edit Anything

    Are you good at detail or dialogue? I'm looking for a beta strong in the detail area, since dialogue is my strong suite.
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    What Are You Reading?

    Read Breaking Dawn, of course! It's a four book series!
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    What Are You Reading?

    Currently re-reading the Twilight series and recently read The Host. Both are by Stephanie Myers.