Akari_Tenshi

Most derogatory words referring to a body part in a sex scene piss me off, though I can deal with it. Also, leaving words incomplete or spelled incorrectly. Inaccurate grammar. The list goes on and on.

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097738 Here's the link to my story. It's already posted, and I'm still working on it.

I'm looking for a beta that is good at description. My strength is dialogue, but I'm really weak at description. How are you at it? My story is an original, but I haven't been able to update in a while due to circumstances beyond my control.

Are you good at detail or dialogue? I'm looking for a beta strong in the detail area, since dialogue is my strong suite.

Read Breaking Dawn, of course! It's a four book series!

Currently re-reading the Twilight series and recently read The Host. Both are by Stephanie Myers.