Conqueror's paradise

[KnightmareKingUnlimited]

I would like to ask anyone that is willing to please let me know what they think of my story “Conqueror’s Paradise” and “Conqueror’s paradise the honeymoon centuries” Stories in the Rwby section. I am looking for both feedback and someone to discuss ideas with. 

[WillowDarkling]

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[KnightmareKingUnlimited]

Author: KnightmareKingUnlimited
Title: Conqueror’s paradise and Conqueror’s paradise the honeymoon centuries
Summary: When a dragon lord sets his eyes upon the girls of the rwby verse the warlord decides he’s going to make them his women.
Feedback: Anyone is welcome
Fandom: Rwby
Pairing: Oc x harem of rwby girls
Warnings: Rape, Incest, Pregnant, Slave, Bdsm
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered stories
URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096445 (Conqueror’s paradise) http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096446 (Conqueror’s paradise the honeymoon centuries)

Review Reply thread: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600096445 (Conqueror’s paradise) http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600096446 (Conqueror’s paradise the honeymoon centuries) 

 

I think and hope this is right. I am still new to this site so yea.