Review Responses- Heyoo

[Heyoo]

Update for anyone who reads this thread (which honestly may just be MTL):

I took a break from writing for a bit because I wasn’t really feeling it. I’ve put my WWE fics on hold for a while as I am not really into the product right now and writing fics for it was making me sad.

I have recently been working on my Riverdale Beronica fic and have actually been having a lot of fun with it. While I don’t wanna make any guarantees, my hope is I can post it sometime this week.

-Heyoo

[Guest Darkprince]

I need more Alexa fan fiction! that was the best read ever! U cant leave us hanging like that lol. especially now that she has her eyes set on Nikki bella! :D

[Heyoo]

6 hours ago, Guest Darkprince said:

I need more Alexa fan fiction! that was the best read ever! U cant leave us hanging like that lol. especially now that she has her eyes set on Nikki bella!

I’m glad you enjoyed it! There will definitely be an update, but I’m not 100% sure when.

[Guest DarkPrince]

Any updates when this will be continued plz!? I really want to read more of this? its sooo good.

[Heyoo]

On 11/26/2019 at 11:49 PM, Guest DarkPrince said:

Any updates when this will be continued plz!? I really want to read more of this? its sooo good.

I’m glad you like it so much haha! I’m not 100% sure when this will be updated as I’m working on updating my Riverdale Betty/Veronica story since it has been longer since I’ve updated that, but once that is done, I’ll come back to this.

[Guest DarkPrince]

OMG PART 4!!! Thank you so much!! Please dont ever stop this series! 

[Heyoo]

Review on “Fire Melts Ice”

From Deadman on November 24, 2019
 

There's some interesting stuff here. I'm kinda curious to see what Jughead would write next.

Obviously, a very delayed response here but thank you for reading and glad you found some things to like. I do often consider writing a follow up where Veronica commissions a story. We will see if that ever sees the light of day.

Edited April 4, 2020 by Heyoo

[Heyoo]

On 12/24/2019 at 7:46 PM, Guest DarkPrince said:

OMG PART 4!!! Thank you so much!! Please dont ever stop this series! 

Hoping to post part 5 someday here haha. I have it started and may go back to it now.

[Heyoo]

Review On “Sweett Victory”

From SailorNemesis on April 04, 2020
 

Good job, I think I can tell whose fics inspired you.  Hopefully read more, but only girls please.  With vaginal fisting.

 

Thinking of MTL? If so, guilty as charged . I have considered branching out into different gender pairings, but I love femslash enough that it may be a while before I ever do that. I’ll consider the fisting, haha.

Edited April 4, 2020 by Heyoo

[Heyoo]

Review On “An Empress. A Princess. A Queen.”

From MTL on April 05, 2020
 

Great to see this story posted here, I love it more every time I read it. Asuka slowly accepting Charlotte's superiority is a thing of beauty here, and there are some fun hints of things to come. Hopefully eventually you get there, lol. And you post One Hot Night With Hart & Fire on AO3, so both websites can have the full set. And yes, I know that the story was a bit rough, but I think people on AO3 would still like to read it.

 

Wow, you really have turned the corner on this fic, haha. I have considered putting Hart & Fire over there but reading it now...oof. If I post it anywhere else, I would want to just drastically rewrite it. Maybe it’ll make its way over there at some point though.

 

Review On “An Empress. A Princess. A Queen.”
 

From Clukesh on April 05, 2020
 

This was an amazing story I think a great way to continue would be the following night after Carmella cashed and for Charlotte to get topped by Carmella or Charlotte topping the iiconics or something like that great job would love to see more from you

 

Thank you! I can say with confidence at least one of those things will happen next chapter :-) I’m not sure when I will get to writing Chapter Two of this though.

[Heyoo]

Review on Sweett Victory

From SailorNemesis on September 16, 2020
 

Chap1 super-hot.  I hope Betty gets fisted hard sometime.

 

Thank you! I’ve included fisting in one of my stories but it’s not a huge kink of mine. There is a brief mention of Betty getting fisted in Chapter 2, but whether fisting ever evolves beyond that in this fic—well, never say never, but as of now, I don’t have an idea for it.

From Sazbi on September 16, 2020
 

Hope there's more

 

Thank you! I definitely want to write more, specifically in terms of adding Cheryl to the mix, though when that will transpire, I’m not sure.

 

[Guest Alexa on top]

Do you plan on continuing this story or others like all red returns

[Heyoo]

Have a bit of catch-up to do! Here we go!
 

Reviews on Sweett Victory

From SailorNemesis on September 26, 2020
 

Read 3 chapters.  Hot stuff, very sexy.  Needs some fisting though.

 

Thank you so much! I’ll see if there’s ever any inspiration to have some more in-depth fisting. It’s not a well I go to a lot because there are other things that interest me more but I’m not ruling it out.

From Deadman on September 29, 2020
 

I do like the idea of this continuing and getting a little fun. Maybe go with Donna meeting Cheryl as she suggested.

 

If I ever continue this, Cheryl will definitely get involved somehow.

 

From TheChemist on December 20, 2020
 

This was a great story! Had me hooked from the first paragraph. I've been wanting to use Donna Sweett in a story for this very reason - dominating Betty. You added in Veronica which was a great idea as well. Loved your wiriting style; it was very clever and perfect characterizations as well.

Now I need to go read the rest of your work!

 

Seeing you in my reviews was an extremely pleasant surprise!! I’ve followed your fics for a long while and have always really enjoyed them, so the fact that you took the time to not only read but offer feedback on one of my stories—it truly means a lot. I would love to read a Donna story from you :-) the more fics like this, the merrier IMO.

 

[Guest Breaking blackheart]

Great job on breaking blackheart ots so good continue to get better with each story

[Sazbi]

Loved Broken Blackheart and the dynamic of all the women established. Definitely hope there’s more of Raquel Gonzalez and Dakota explored, even Io’s depravity as the bottom of the roster behind the scenes.

[Guest Story request kinda]

Would you ever do like aew women wrestlers like brandi,taynara,anna jay,brit baker, 

[Heyoo]

On 1/6/2021 at 9:31 PM, Guest Breaking blackheart said:

Great job on breaking blackheart ots so good continue to get better with each story

Thank you so much! It was one of my favorite fics to write thus far.

[Heyoo]

On 1/8/2021 at 3:11 PM, Sazbi said:

Loved Broken Blackheart and the dynamic of all the women established. Definitely hope there’s more of Raquel Gonzalez and Dakota explored, even Io’s depravity as the bottom of the roster behind the scenes.

Thank you so much! I definitely hope to revisit this continuity some time and explore these dynamics some more. I have a second part started but I have a lot of other fics I want to get to first before I make any significant headway on that one.

While not exactly exploring the Raquel/Dakota dynamic, I do have a fic with Dakota bottoming that I’m hoping to publish soon.

[Heyoo]

On 1/14/2021 at 11:36 AM, Guest Story request kinda said:

Would you ever do like aew women wrestlers like brandi,taynara,anna jay,brit baker, 

I definitely have considered it, specifically Anna and Tay, but I feel like AEW needs to give more time to its women’s division before I devote a substantial amount of time writing something for it.

[Guest Idea]

On 1/18/2021 at 4:41 PM, Heyoo said:

I definitely have considered it, specifically Anna and Tay, but I feel like AEW needs to give more time to its women’s division before I devote a substantial amount of time writing something for it.

Thats understandable maybe have anna jay visit taynara while she's in nxt and have them both be dominated by an nxt wrestler who gets like mad that an aew wrestler is in the locker room just food for thought

[Guest Breaking blackheart]

After re reading it i love how you mentioned that indi would only give her ass up for candice i think that would make a great story of the first time candice fucked indi

[Guest Return?]

Do you plan on writing more or currently writing

[Guest yay]

so happy you're back loved the new story hope another chapter to alexa on top comes next

[Guest Amazing]

God what a great chapter aj lee is so amazing she never gets story’s of her being fucked and I love how she’s already the Bella’s bottom but is to stubborn to admit it, I would love a spin off of the Bella’s making and breaking aj lee and Paige cause you mentioned Paige already being their slut

[Guest Marcel]

I think Kaitlyn should join the Bellas and Eva and make AJ airtight