sweetmamajama Posted March 8, 2017 Report Posted March 8, 2017 Welcome, my dearest children! So I made this tread to reply to reviews on ma shit in general. I may only have one story and one review at the time of posting this but hopefully there will be more stories from me and more reviews! I would just like to say that I appreciate all of the reviews, even the short ones, its still better than nothing. That being said don't be stingy ppl, I need to feed! FEED MEEE! My profile: http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296972017 The Divine Hand: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108110 Tcr 1 Quote
sweetmamajama Posted March 8, 2017 Author Report Posted March 8, 2017 The Divine Hand Chapter 1 Quote From ramblingrobin on March 12, 2016 This is interesting. I want more of this. Xoxo Robin Congratulations! You are the first to comment and therefore you will forever hold a special place in my bosom! Yeah but seriously thanks for bothering to comment, means a lot. I know I'm late to reply but when I first got it I was jumping up and down and giggling like an idiot. And you'll get more, the chapter 2 is up and you'll still get more...eventually! Quote
sweetmamajama Posted March 18, 2017 Author Report Posted March 18, 2017 The Divine Hand Chapter 1 Quote From tcr on March 18, 2017 As I never betaed off Chapter I, only read over it to Beta II, I figure I'm safe doing a review for it. Firstly, quite an intriguing beginning. Conflict, antagonist, protagonist, all thrown together. Interesting start and I definitely look forward to betaing this further alongside CR. Second, for the fact that English isn't your primary, SMJ, this definitely doesn't show too drastically. Seeing II as a beta, I can say with certainty that you wield the language well. There are points where the beta cap was on, but some of those were stylistic rather than a point of contention. Third, you have a highly artistic side. Your art schooling shows through in both chapters with your descriptions, painting the scene, I think, quite well. It's a great thing. All in all, some minor things, but a great start. Well thanks tcr for leaving a comment and praising my magnificence and my majestic art, I appreciate it. Oh and since clovey was betaing this one, any mistake is her fault! I wash my hands! Tcr 1 Quote
Tcr Posted March 18, 2017 Report Posted March 18, 2017 4 minutes ago, sweetmamajama said: The Divine Hand Chapter 1 Well thanks tcr for leaving a comment and praising my magnificence and my majestic art, I appreciate it. Oh and since clovey was betaing this one, any mistake is her fault! I wash my hands! Lol. Blame CR, eh? You do have your own style, unique and colourful as you, yourself are. Quote
sweetmamajama Posted March 18, 2017 Author Report Posted March 18, 2017 1 minute ago, Tcr said: Lol. Blame CR, eh? You do have your own style, unique and colourful as you, yourself are. Ok let me put it to you like this: anything that works – I'm responsible for it, anything that doesn't work its the betas fault. ……..I love you clovey Quote
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