Naruko Uzumaki: Konoha's #1 Slut! Discussion Forum

[CuriousWriter]

That is a rather good point. Maybe a one-off or like you said, a halloween special of some kind.

hm, or it could be another story...damn, talk about a dark but sensual one.

Gd news! I am literally almost done with the chapter. It should be out by tmrw. Just have to finish up a scene.

[Guest Gawd]

I think Edo Tensei is perfectly workable in this story.

She pretty much develops into the dominant mistress in all this, so reviving them to further her goals (or her own pleasure?) would work.

She could use people as sacrifices she needs to get rid off. Don’t know how serious you’ll take the story aspect from here on out, but for example Mizuki, Danzo, maybe even Hiruzen etc could be sacrificed.

She would have an easy job doing that as well … they wouldn’t suspect her until it was to late.

The Edo Tensei might need an overhaul compared to it’s canon counterpart though.

[CuriousWriter]

overhaul how?

[CuriousWriter]

And it is done. Just want my beta to take a gander at it folks.

[Guest Gawd]

Overhaul in the sense that it isn’t all cracky and so on.

On the other hand .. that could also be a fetish if you know they are Edo Tenseis

[CuriousWriter]

At least they’d be durable! Lol

[CuriousWriter]

http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106089&chapter=9

Chapter 9, her pride and fall~! is now out. Enjoy!

As for a better visual of her position at the end, here’s a link:

https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2485711

[CuriousWriter]

yesh, not a lot of feedback at all from the last chapter. Well, I’m starting the next one right now. can anyone tell me if the last one was jsut not good or something?

[CuriousWriter]

Okay, well, hopefully someone gives me some feedback on the last chapter bc I feel like I drew myself into a corner. It’s at a point where the fic can go into some seriously f’d up stuff.

[Guest Omega]

I liked the chapted. It was fun. And thats the thing about fantasy.  You can go as fucked up as you want. 

[CuriousWriter]

Very true, but i fear im just getting bored with the setting or something.

[Kousetsu]

I am going to sit back and see where this is going.

[Guest PervSensei]

Is there any chance of Naruko and Hinata ending up in Kumo?

[CuriousWriter]

Mm, that IS possible. Thou i have something bttr in mind. If I ever get there sadly.

[Guest PervSensei]

Honestly I just want a story in which Hinata ends up in Kumo that doesn’t involve her cheating or having been with Naruto. So basically she and Naruko both end up being NTR by Kumo.

But I am curious what you have in mind involving Kumo. Also are considering writing special chapters involving the exploits of Naruko’s honey bees?

[CuriousWriter]

ikr? ugh, all the same stuff.

hehe. if i ever get the time, but honest it would be summarized.

[Guest PervSensei]

That’s too bad I was hoping you would built up similar relationships that Naruko has with Mizuki between the girls and other clients. Like Hinata and Anko/Tsume, Ino and Shikamaru’s dad?

 

That said are you going to have Danzo ‘recruit’ Naruko and her honey bees into ROOT?

[CuriousWriter]

the prob is, its about the number 1 slut, not the second rates XP plus that takes time.

that’s a possibility.

[Guest PervSensei]

That’s disappointing. Will they at least make more cameos/join in? Say they join Naruko at a VIP party? Or pay a visit to the Hyuuga clan?

 

Is she going to have her own special division?

[CuriousWriter]

that is a plan of mine. After all, what an orgy or two w/o lil cum dumps to fill?

The Scarlets XD jk, idk at the moment.

[Guest PervSensei]

Nice and please consider it.

[CuriousWriter]

i will, but to be honest my inspiration has faltered lately. maybe im dragging out the academy years too long. I kno i have at least several more chapters b4 she even graduates.

[Guest PervSensei]

I could pitch you some ideas if you like. Like say Tsume introduces Naruko to pet play, or she goes to an Inuzuka client who has been keeping a few of her girls for far to long.

Another is that a drunk Anko decides to treat herself to some young meat and soon has Naruko helping with her job at IT

Or Hinata’s mother seeks out Naruko and tries to get her to repent her sinful ways only to end up being sexual dominated by the younger girl.

Naruko’s darker self, Yami, reveals herself/himself and joins in on the fun.

Naruko could be kidnapped and ends up joining a sex trade ring and is allowed to leave/return to Leaf in other to help their operation?

[CuriousWriter]

i actually have that idea noted.

somewhat a similar idea came to mind.

she’s kinda dead already, it was how she got her claw into hinata wo much issue. of course, Naruko wont be happy w just one hyuuga as her Gimp.

hm, that’s actually interesting. In what way?

if anything, she’d purposely get captured just for the thrill then wipe them out.

[Guest PervSensei]

Hmm then how about another Hyuuga OC? Maybe make her the sister to Hinata’s mother? The idea just sounds so hot.

Yami would be the more dominated one, assuming a male form, being Naruko’s enforcer/guardian and making sure their girls can handle even their roughest clients. Basically he is modeling himself after how Mizuki treats Naruko. Again the idea of Naruto and Naruko dominating a girl together just sounds hot.

That or take over.