Guest goshujin-sama Posted February 10, 2017 Report Posted February 10, 2017 Yeah I get that reasoning, just can't get over my fixation on a pregnant female Naruto(naruko) getting fucked(or raped) throughout her pregnancy. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 10, 2017 Author Report Posted February 10, 2017 hm, maybe a bad ending? Quote
Guest goshujin-sama Posted February 10, 2017 Report Posted February 10, 2017 Do you plan on Naruto being an oppai loli, because that would be awesome. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 10, 2017 Author Report Posted February 10, 2017 ...I think I’m sticking petite. maybe a henge scene later on for that. Quote
Guest goshujin-sama Posted February 10, 2017 Report Posted February 10, 2017 I'd write it myself but I'm not confident in my writing skills nor do I think I have time in my schedule to do it. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 10, 2017 Author Report Posted February 10, 2017 meh, these type of chapters take me at least an hr if I’m busting my hump. Thou it’s really just mapping out the chapter that takes up my time. Like I said, stuck in that step currently. I know what I want to do, just getting from start to middle is killing me. Quote
Guest goshujin-sama Posted February 10, 2017 Report Posted February 10, 2017 I get your problem. Also whenever I have an idea I think is good, I try to get it into writing, but it never turns out very decent. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 10, 2017 Author Report Posted February 10, 2017 thx. dont be afraid to drop an idea, always up to listen to it. goshujin-sama 1 Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 10, 2017 Author Report Posted February 10, 2017 11 hours ago, BitterNTR said: Here’s another idea. Before Hiruzen dies, I’d be interested in a scene where he finally gets tempted by Naruko and ‘collects his debt’ (e.g: Free home, monthly allowance, etc) from her. Hm, should we drag the summon monkey into this? I mean, this is the ninja of 1k techniques. I’m sure he’s got some creative ideas if he’s waited this long for her? maybe seals, jutsu, hell, even a good ol dp with a shadow clone. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 11, 2017 Author Report Posted February 11, 2017 Firgured how she’s going to lose her virginity. It’s her birthday, festival for the forth. she’s asked by a guy to do a party for her. She goes for it and w how hot it gets, has sex n it turns into a gangbang. maybe a piar of fox ears n a tail around her waist to spice it up. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 11, 2017 Author Report Posted February 11, 2017 (edited) Anyone have a good idea on what her shinobi attire should be? I was thinking Kasumi’s black sleeveless tunic from Dead or Alive franchise. but I’m open to options. http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/deadoralive/images/a/a9/Kasumi_-_Costume_04.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130121023710 Edited February 11, 2017 by CuriousWriter Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 11, 2017 Author Report Posted February 11, 2017 Also please note that by the time she graduates, she will have a Marie Rose body type to keep with the loli theme of the story. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 11, 2017 Author Report Posted February 11, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, CuriousWriter said: Anyone have a good idea on what her shinobi attire should be? I was thinking Kasumi’s black sleeveless tunic from Dead or Alive franchise. but I’m open to options. Or perhaps Golden Darkness from To-Love-Ru. The long sleeves had a nice idea for concealed weapons n the show of leg is a gd distraction for those who she’s appealing to sexual and its dark, so nice fit for a ninja instead of Naruto orange. Edited February 11, 2017 by CuriousWriter Quote
goshujin-sama Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 Yeah, I think the golden darkness outfit would go nicely for this naruto Quote
goshujin-sama Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 (edited) On 2/9/2017 at 10:38 PM, CuriousWriter said: thx. dont be afraid to drop an idea, always up to listen to it. A seduction/infiltration/information gathering specialist Naruko . I have some ideas that can expand on this but I would like to know what you would think about it Edited February 12, 2017 by goshujin-sama Quote
Guest Gin Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 naruko goes undercover in a place were she can't use chakra http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888012 Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 12, 2017 Author Report Posted February 12, 2017 8 hours ago, goshujin-sama said: A seduction/infiltration/information gathering specialist Naruko . I have some ideas that can expand on this but I would like to know what you would think about it Sounds perfect for what I want to do. hit me with what you got. 8 hours ago, goshujin-sama said: Yeah, I think the golden darkness outfit would go nicely for this naruto figured it would. innocent, yet alluring all at once. Quote
goshujin-sama Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 -Naruko excels at seducing her targets over a period of time, and killing them when their guards are down. -any useful information is reported to the village through messenger summons. I'll get back to you when I can think up more ideas for this Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 12, 2017 Author Report Posted February 12, 2017 3 hours ago, goshujin-sama said: -Naruko excels at seducing her targets over a period of time, and killing them when their guards are down. -any useful information is reported to the village through messenger summons. I'll get back to you when I can think up more ideas for this Pretty typical as to seduction, so let’s aim for something not so clean and cut. What happens if she’s caught? What if her target brings friends in? How utterly base and deprived should Naruko end up by the end of Naruto Part 1. Hell, I’m curious if we should do things like canon or shift it into a more interesting light. alter the Wave arc, the Chunin Exam, Tsunade arc, and the Sasuke Retrieval mission. So many ways to spin parts. Especially the Chunin exam with all the foreign dick she can get her hands on. Maybe a BBC scene w Kumo. Guys, as long as it ain’t scat, I’m pretty open to anything. Quote
goshujin-sama Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 If her targets have her trapped for a good while after she's caught , you should have them attempt to break her, like what you see in mind break hentais Quote
C_Wade Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 This turned out longer than expected… On 10.2.2017 at 0:08 AM, CuriousWriter said: That depends when Naru starts ovulating (idk when, probably 9 n work to her first period. Yes, I do research on this). n im a bit scares on the idea of preg since u kno what that means for a jinchuriki. So I take it that means she is still younger than 9 years old? Because it isn't explicitly stated anywhere. So if my assumption is correct I was wondering about your story pacing, as in, how much time/chapters will be spend before the actual beginning of Part I? Will you just time-skip along or actually write it out? On 11.2.2017 at 2:55 PM, CuriousWriter said: Firgured how she’s going to lose her virginity. It’s her birthday, festival for the forth. she’s asked by a guy to do a party for her. She goes for it and w how hot it gets, has sex n it turns into a gangbang. maybe a piar of fox ears n a tail around her waist to spice it up. I like that, maybe she could do a strip-tease for them as well? I always think thats hot but barely anybody writes it... Another question, will this be Naruko only, or will some of the other girls eventually join? E.g., maybe Hinata still idolizes Naruko and wants to be just like her? I’m sure there are ways to include the other girls as well, should that be an avenue you wish to take. 2 hours ago, CuriousWriter said: How utterly base and deprived should Naruko end up by the end of Naruto Part 1. I think at that point Naruko is pretty much ‘gone’. Considering she started whoring herself out when she was still a little kid. I think a better question might be, how open she is with her depravity. Will everybody know what a slut she is? Maybe only the adults know, kind of like with her jinchuriki status? Or something else? 2 hours ago, CuriousWriter said: Hell, I’m curious if we should do things like canon or shift it into a more interesting light. alter the Wave arc, the Chunin Exam, Tsunade arc, and the Sasuke Retrieval mission. So many ways to spin parts Depending on how closely you want to follow canon, there are tons of things that could be done differently. For example, Naruko could sleep with Gato’s men to turn them against him, or sleep with Zabuza/Haku and convince them to go with them against Gato. She could also ‘motivate’ the workers, so that they don’t quit working on the bridge. During the 1st chunin exam she could notice that one of the examiners is a former customer of her, and she lures him outside to convince him to give her the answers. In the 2nd task she could offer Orochimaru her body to spare her teammates lives… But I think it’s all kind of early to answer questions like that, since we really don’t know much about how Naruko will develope yet... Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 12, 2017 Author Report Posted February 12, 2017 (edited) 53 minutes ago, C_Wade said: This turned out longer than expected… So I take it that means she is still younger than 9 years old? Because it isn't explicitly stated anywhere. So if my assumption is correct I was wondering about your story pacing, as in, how much time/chapters will be spend before the actual beginning of Part I? Will you just time-skip along or actually write it out? I like that, maybe she could do a strip-tease for them as well? I always think thats hot but barely anybody writes it… I plan to jump from here to there, but do at least 4-5 chapters before she becomes a genin. Hehe, you read my mind on this one! ;P Quote Another question, will this be Naruko only, or will some of the other girls eventually join? E.g., maybe Hinata still idolizes Naruko and wants to be just like her? I’m sure there are ways to include the other girls as well, should that be an avenue you wish to take. Maybe, it’s a tough call since its her rise to slutdom. Quote I think at that point Naruko is pretty much ‘gone’. Considering she started whoring herself out when she was still a little kid. I think a better question might be, how open she is with her depravity. Will everybody know what a slut she is? Maybe only the adults know, kind of like with her jinchuriki status? Or something else? I think so, she’d be nothing more than a glorified whore with the skills to murder u in your sleep. As for her whore status, I think ppl who’ve bought her know, n a a lot of adults. but only the kids who’s she’s seduce for money would know. maybe a lot of rumors thou. Quote Depending on how closely you want to follow canon, there are tons of things that could be done differently. For example, Naruko could sleep with Gato’s men to turn them against him, or sleep with Zabuza/Haku and convince them to go with them against Gato. She could also ‘motivate’ the workers, so that they don’t quit working on the bridge. I was thinking similarly. Quote During the 1st chunin exam she could notice that one of the examiners is a former customer of her, and she lures him outside to convince him to give her the answers. In the 2nd task she could offer Orochimaru her body to spare her teammates lives… That first part is great! Thou I think Oro is a bit too asexual for that. thou it could be kinky with snakes... Quote But I think it’s all kind of early to answer questions like that, since we really don’t know much about how Naruko will develope yet... it is, but I love thinking up ideas like these! XD N let’s not forget about the shadow clones. Combo w Henge n she has an enterprise on her hands. PLUS! All the exp back to her...truly, she will be a slut like no other. Edited February 12, 2017 by CuriousWriter Quote
C_Wade Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 5 minutes ago, CuriousWriter said: N let’s not forget about the shadow clones. Combo w Henge n she has an enterprise on her hands. PLUS! All the exp back to her...truly, she will be a slut like no other. Although by the time she gets her shadow clones she will be genin, at least if you follow canon on that one (an extension for BitterNTR’s Hiruzen Idea, maybe she also offers her body in exchange for techinques? that way she could gain Shadow clones faster). And once she is genin I think the story will concentrate more on her whoring herself out on missions, and not in Konoha as a prostitute I think? Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 12, 2017 Author Report Posted February 12, 2017 5 minutes ago, C_Wade said: Although by the time she gets her shadow clones she will be genin, at least if you follow canon on that one (an extension for BitterNTR’s Hiruzen Idea, maybe she also offers her body in exchange for techinques? that way she could gain Shadow clones faster). And once she is genin I think the story will concentrate more on her whoring herself out on missions, and not in Konoha as a prostitute I think? Brilliant! I was wondering what to do on that! Hm, I think maybe by the age of 10? that should be a good age to do it. But now what to have him do? This is the guy with 1000 jutsu, and i’m sure he’s got a perverse mind if we all rmbr keenly. slightly wondering if I should drag his summon into it, hehe. Quote
C_Wade Posted February 12, 2017 Report Posted February 12, 2017 4 minutes ago, CuriousWriter said: Brilliant! I was wondering what to do on that! Hm, I think maybe by the age of 10? that should be a good age to do it. But now what to have him do? This is the guy with 1000 jutsu, and i’m sure he’s got a perverse mind if we all rmbr keenly. slightly wondering if I should drag his summon into it, hehe. Well, if you want to use jutsu I guess summoning is one thing to do, I don’t really care for beast stuff, but it isn’t a no-go for me either. Otherwise he could also use the shadow clone to ‘demonstrate’. Another thought I had was some teacher/student role-play (maybe with costume), since he is called the professor… or a combination of those. Quote
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