CuriousWriter Posted June 11, 2017 Author Report Posted June 11, 2017 not really my cup of tea. plus i think she can get an abortion n keep her career if anything. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 11, 2017 Report Posted June 11, 2017 Yeah but remember that she doesn't even know she could've gotten pregnant before meeting Naruko in the scenario so how would she know about abortion? Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 11, 2017 Report Posted June 11, 2017 How about she though she didn't have to worry about protection until her first bleeding but didn't know that she was fertile 2 weeks before that and don't know she's actually pregnant until Naruko take her for a check up? I didn't even know that until recently. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 11, 2017 Author Report Posted June 11, 2017 no preg stuff unless its a henge, i’m srry man. just not into it. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 11, 2017 Report Posted June 11, 2017 I know that, I'm not asking for Tenten or anyone to end up with kids (beside that one worker Naruko got that get coerced into raw sex repeatedly) I just want to use Tenten's carelessness in a way that end up with her under Naruko's thumb. You know as a bonding experience that establish their relationship as Mistress and servant or something like that. It might be overcomplicated. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 11, 2017 Author Report Posted June 11, 2017 i’ll think up something, but not all girls need to fall under her rule. makes it more fun to corrupt later on~ Quote
Guest Turgon118 Posted June 13, 2017 Report Posted June 13, 2017 There is a solution for the pregnancy sex: have it during the period corresponding with the end of the series. Some of the girls will have to marry and have children by their positions (Hinata and Ino, and Hanabi if you add her). And Naruko will probably still pimp them out. Just changing their category to married women and later MILFs. And pimping them out while they're pregnant from their husband or from a client with them passing the child as their husband is then a possibility. Quote
Guest Futa is Love Posted June 17, 2017 Report Posted June 17, 2017 Yo it's been a while. Kind of bringing up an old idea. Specifically tentacles. Difference this time is instead of a monster or whatever, how about a water jutsu? Water is malleable and can be used safely or dangerously, and if Naruko and/or one of her little workers have a non sex related appointment that they need to attend but they're too filled up or covered with cum. And they have to look presentable, just use some water tentacles to clean out all of their holes. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 17, 2017 Author Report Posted June 17, 2017 Yeah, sorry, just did my midterm yesterday n have to do a whole bunch of reading. I am aiming to try n write some stuff tmrw though after I do my HW. Summer classes, what can ya do? ha, like a water pounding enema? that sounds sexy alright. Quote
Guest Fanboy of the Smut Posted June 18, 2017 Report Posted June 18, 2017 I love your story.  Since this is a kink and fetish story, how do you feel about incest? Here’s what I’d like to see: since Naruko was trying to recruit Hinata, what if Hiashi finds out?  He brings Naruko over, initially furious as what she’s done to his daughter, but they all end up having a threesome.  Maybe with some daddy kink thrown in? (I would have suggested the same scene with Inoichi and Ino, but I like the idea of strict, powerful, Hiashi more) Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 18, 2017 Author Report Posted June 18, 2017 hm, idk about Hiashi, but I am considering Hanabi. the point of Hinata’s gimphood is to hide who she is. that’s the excitement she feels if she is ever found out. but I do like the daddy kink once in a while, just not sure i want to do it w hiashi. Quote
Guest Fanboy of the Smut Posted June 19, 2017 Report Posted June 19, 2017 13 hours ago, CuriousWriter said: hm, idk about Hiashi, but I am considering Hanabi. the point of Hinata’s gimphood is to hide who she is. that’s the excitement she feels if she is ever found out. but I do like the daddy kink once in a while, just not sure i want to do it w hiashi. Well like I said, I didn’t know whether to suggest this idea with Hiashi and Hinata or Inoichi and Ino.  I chose Hiashi because I think he’s sort of an underrated hottie.  But Inoichi and Ino might work better.  Then, because of their blonde hair and blue eyes, Ino and Naruko can fantasize their sisters while Inoichi has his way with them.  And then, the scene can end with Naruko playing with herself while she watches Inoichi pound Ino’s cunt (or her ass) Quote
Guest Fanboy of the Smut Posted June 20, 2017 Report Posted June 20, 2017 And, just an idea, even though the story is about Naruko, maybe as she builds her own brothel up, you can put in a chapter that focuses on another girl every so often. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 20, 2017 Author Report Posted June 20, 2017 maybe, depends on how deprived i turn them Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 22, 2017 Author Report Posted June 22, 2017 Not really, writing a term paper right now. Summer class is almost over thou Quote
Guest Fanboy of the Smut Posted June 29, 2017 Report Posted June 29, 2017 Sorry.  Just one last idea.  Since Naruko has visited the Kyuubi’s cage within herself, what you Kyuubi could shrink himself down (or take on a humanoid form) and they fucked between the bars of the cell, like in a lot of cop porn? Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Posted June 29, 2017 Oh trust me, I got ideas for Kurama. But that’s a gd one to try! Great news, i just have my final tmrw n i can finally get back to writing for u guys. Man, trying to keep a 95% avg in a class can be trying. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 29, 2017 Report Posted June 29, 2017 95% average? Dang that's good. The closest I got in class was 80% average in Advanced English which is my second language. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Posted June 29, 2017 thx! i wrote some of the chapter last night, so tonite i’ll aim to do some more. let’s just say it’ll be sexception~! Quote
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