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Sounds hot. But you know you could always have that Hinata’s mom was absent because of some illness that reclaimed her to stay somewhere far from Leaf and only recent has she became well enough to return.

Her dark side hmmm she could have a run in with Orochimaru OR one of her ‘clients’, a new one, decides to take revenge and beats her near death and Yami surfaces. Also Yami goes between being male and female. Male whenever they are before others but only when they are alone does Yami assume her real form.

And you could always include characters from other series if you want, being members of that ring that Naruko takes over. Also think about this, have Naruko be able to summon tentacle monsters.

Also just throwing it out there but you always write a one-shot to help you out. You said that you’ve been struggling with this story so maybe writing something different might help.

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The characters from other series or the tentacles, cause you can have her find the scroll or try out the summoning jutsu and end up in their world. I can see using a tentacle monster to break Tsunade. If for the former well what characters do you want to see in the story?

And I have an idea if your interested. It involves a remote onsen/hot spring, Hinata and the Raikage.

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no no, i was talking about the tentacles. i was thinking she finds a scroll in one of orochimaru’s old labs. n i do have plans w tsunade. let’s just say naruko isnt the first blonde girl sarutobi’s ‘trained’, lolz.

alright, let me hear it.

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Set in an Naruko AU: Team 8 is on a mission to protect a merchant and Hinata messes up during a bandit attack, a lot on her mind/depressed. Kunerai sends her away to relax at a onsen nearby. They are completely unaware that the Raikage and his team are watching them. They following Hinata and pay off the owners and pay some bandits/others to keep her distracted. Ay and two others corner Hinata and begin to seduce her as they keep her from leaving, unaware that Ay’s two men are both mentally and physically conditioning her for when Ay makes his move. He starts with a kiss and quickly escalates to pounding her like a ragdoll until she passes out.

Later the rest of Team 8 is looking all over for Hinata and run into Ay+his men and he is quickly accused by Kunerai but he denies/claims he was just passing through. She demands to check the duffle bag/suitcase he was carrying but he argues it was top secret. Inside a tied up Hinata hears what is going on and every part of her demands she cry out for help but a small part of her keeps her silent. It knows her team would lose a fight with the Raikage and even if they did manage to free her and get away her clan would put her through hell for losing her purity to the man. But if she stayed quite and went with him then pleasure would come. She stays silent/trembling with excitement/dread as both Kiba and Akamaru smell the bag but can’t detect her scent at all. Soon Ay is let go and the two groups go their seperate ways, Team 8 resumes their search and Ay’s team heads back to Kumo. Ay takes the time to whisper to Hinata he’ll reward her all the way to Kumo as he uses raiton to to pleasure her, Hinata looking forward to when they would stop to rest.

 

Possible Sequel: Naruko sneaks into Kumo looking for Hinata and is captured.

 

That’s more or less what I got in my head. Another idea is Hinata plus maybe Naruko are runaways and they go into a mixed bathhouse and run into Ay and Bee.

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Ay’s men had a good grasp on her mental state and knew enough of her history to manipulate her via words and subtle genjutsu.

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Looking forward to it.

How this for the next chapter:

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