Rowen Posted July 21, 2008 Report Posted July 21, 2008 Title: Forgotten Relics Author: Rowen Rating: Adult Summary: A standard mission for first year graduates takes an unexpected turn. Feedback: Desired Greatly URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097201 Looking forward to feedback, anything is welcome from story flow to grammatical errors, pick it apart. It helps me get better! B) Thanks in advance, John (aka Rowen) Quote
Rowen Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Posted July 23, 2008 Any one? I would really love a critique so I can know if my writing sucks and I have a lot of work or if I'm generally going in the right direction and just have a few things to work on. I NEED to focus in other words, help me out. B) and as always, thanks in advance. Quote
Rowen Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Posted July 26, 2008 Chapter 3 is up! It was rather fun writing that chapter, seemed to flow a little easier than the last two. anyway, enjoy! Quote
Rowen Posted July 26, 2008 Author Report Posted July 26, 2008 I've had several hits to the story now and am pretty pleased with that. Even got a 5 star rating from some anonymous member. I still would really like a good critique of these chapters and the story in general. I'll never know what I need to work on if I don't get a little subjective help here. You don't have to sugar coat it, if you hate it let me know but tell me why and where the story lost your interest. I look forward to any reviews, critiques, ect I can get. Thanks again everyone. Quote
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