TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Report Posted September 20, 2016 This thread will be here to respond to reviews left on the story Naruto: Learning His True Self, which can be found here: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106011
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From ANON - anon on September 18, 2016 With all those big dicked Naruto stories we really needed someone to write one where he is small like he might actually be in the manga, would love to see it continue to non hardcore teasing OK… Thank you for the review, and the teasing and such won’t be too hardcore. I’m saving THAT for the ‘cruel’ version of this particular story.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From Bageltiger on September 18, 2016 I like where this story is going. Thank you, Bageltiger, and I hope you continue to enjoy this story.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From ANON - Unknowingly on September 18, 2016 I can already tell were this is going all i see is NRT and sadlly i wont be waiting for the 2nd chapter There’s not going to be any NTR, but I can understand if you feel it’s going to go that way and I respect your decision not to keep reading.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From JAMESCUN on September 19, 2016 plz have nohamaru cuckold him … Well, all I can say is “wait and see”.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From York on September 19, 2016 Can some one please explain to me the appeal of these types of stories I wish I could, York, but I can’t any more than I can tell you why “bondage” erotica appeals to some people, or why “CBT (cock/ball torture)” erotica appeals to some people. It just does, and so long as no one is hurt it’s just a harmless way to get aroused.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From ANON - Jecha on September 19, 2016 Jojojo, now begins the good. Waiting for the continuation. Yes it does.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From ANON - Ero-sennin on September 20, 2016 Can naruto be trained before getting a bull??? And can the bull be Haku? Or a futa by chance?? Like a futa Hidan or sonwthing (her/his? Curse jutsu would be amazing for sexual activities)?? The way I’m planning this story pre-bull training unfortunately won’t be an option.As for Haku being the ‘bull’, well, he certainly could be one of the potential bulls they ‘interview’ (don’t want to just go with the first guy, you gotta try out several to find the man who best fits you). As for a Futa (not Hidan, bloodplay and the like aren’t my thing)… Hmmm, that is certainly an interesting idea for one of the potential candidates.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From sneak13579 on September 20, 2016 Please make Sasuke harem story. Unfortunately, I don’t see that happening sneak13579. Sorry.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From ANON - naruto17 on September 20, 2016 im really enjoying this and i hope you continue it. you are a very good writer, this and your other Naruko fics are very good. but cuckolding is my FAVORITE fetish, so i hope you do more stories like this. i hope sasuke is the bull just because of how much more humiliating that would be for naruto. Why thank you naruto17, and I’m planning to continue this story. Thank you for the praise of my writing skills and that you enjoy my stories. I enjoy cuckolding porn from time to time myself, and I’ve already got a different version of this story planned (it’ll be a lot ‘crueler’ to Naruto than this story will be).As I’ve said in regards to ANON – Ero-sennin’s review, I’m planning to have them ‘interview’ several potential bulls, and Sasuke is likely to be one of the candidates.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From sopinade on September 20, 2016 It is verry good but do astory where sakura and hinata cuckold and humiliate him with the raikage make him a slave who raise the babies thanks:) Hmmm, that certainly is an interesting idea for me to consider.
TheDogSage Posted September 20, 2016 Author Report Posted September 20, 2016 Quote From No_1 on September 20, 2016 Again, fantastic work, I love it! Thank you, I’m glad you feel I’m doing well by your challenge.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - Larry on September 20, 2016 Why? This kind of thing makes no sense. Naruto's father is supposedly this powerful man, but allows to be psychologically abused like this? He lets them abuse his son? And this second chapter, where Naruto just goes along with Hinata proposing the same humiliation and violation be visited upon him when he's clearly stated it's not what he wants is fucking disgusting. I get that you're doing a challenge here, but you're doing it poorly. There is no build-up. There is nothing believable about the sequence of events. Why are you doing this? It's no good. Well, thank you for this well-written, thoughtful critique of my story. It’s people like you that keeps me from making it impossible for ANONs to review. I see your critiques, and I guess it’s a good thing I’m doing this for free.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From Bageltiger on September 20, 2016 I can't wait for hinata to become super slutty. I don’t think Hinata will become ‘super slutty’ in my story. There are plenty of other stories for you to get that Bageltiger.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From Shadowdragon1580 on September 21, 2016 Hope ya update soon I update as soon as I can, Shadowdragon.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - voice of god on September 22, 2016 Please let this be a very long story in the making You’ll just have to wait and see.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - Zweig on September 22, 2016 Nice story. In regards to potential Bulls I would like to see I have those four: Haku (I think he would fit really good for the final Bull, though Konohamaru would be a good choice too) Neji Gaara Suigetsu Hope you use my suggestions and update soon. I’ll definitely take those into consideration.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - on September 22, 2016 how well do you know the Naruto universe? From this, piss poor. This is impossible due to uzumaki's strong life force = near perfect bodies. genetics, even worse. A micropenis is a penis that is less then 7cm (2 3/4 in) in length, micropenis form due to hormone in balance in the groin area. As said by another reviewer, an Uzumaki’s “strong life force” does not equal “near perfect bodies”. It means they live longer than normal people even when using techniques that shave years off them and that they have chakra dense enough to make them viable jinchuuriki for the Kyuubi no Kitsune.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From Naruto-Gremory on September 22, 2016 Must agree with other reviews do something original. From Naruto-Gremory on September 22, 2016 Do you accept my challenge Naruto Namikaze lives with her family friend Kushina after a fire burned down his house as a child. They live their lives, until fellow colleague Mikoto Uchiha, who is jealous of their close friendship makes a surprise move. No. And… No.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - Braeden1002 on September 22, 2016 Interesting concept especially since the other stories of a similar nature tend to be one-shots or a similar situation to Minato. I'm guessing that eventually Naruto will become Hinata's girlfriend either full time or outside of their professional capacity as ninjas. To the point where he may become an actual participant as someone to cleanup the aftermath or as a bottom to Hinata and Konohomaru. Now I do have a slight request, would it be possible to see a similar story to this but one where Naruto is the bull. Whether as a series of one-shots or a similar plotline to this one. … GET OUT OF MY HEAD! As for the request… I really should, shouldn’t I? Especially considering I’m planning a “cruel” version of this fic where Hinata isn’t as kind as she is here. I’m gonna get MEAN to poor Naruto in that one, and people who don’t like this story definitely shouldn’t read that one.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From Bageltiger on September 22, 2016 I can't wait for hinata to takes some really big cocks. Don’t be expecting anything ridiculously large (biggest will be around 12”).
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - ice on September 22, 2016 this story dosen't make sense naruto is to far stong willed for this to make sense and hinata to kind for her to do this to him Naruto? Strong willed? You mean the guy who basically became a battered girlfriend to Sasuke for the entirety of the second part of Naruto and had to be stopped from giving up repeatedly during the final battle (and was in fact the only named character who had to be stopped from giving up)?
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - LemonSmut on September 22, 2016 Like always... Dont like - dont read... Those who insult writer just because they dont like the type of fanFICTION they write is rather pathelic in my opinion. I dont particullary like this fic myself, because i dont like the cockolding theme, but aside from that, the story is not worse than other fics on this site. he even used other characters (kiba/konohamaru) And Naruto certainly is not a bull... he was hopelessly in love with Sakura, got beaten by her and didnt even realize Hinata's feelings in the Manga... please guys ... if you want to bash the writer, dont make things up... Naruto tiny cock is not possible because of Uzumaki bloodline? really? you guys have read why too much fanfiction to come to this conclusion. Uzumaki are famous for longlivity and their seals not for perfect bodies and such... lol Just get it into your heads that fanfiction, and especially smut fanfics mostly dont make sense their are tons of harem fics located in the Naruto verse and they make no sense what so ever... like i said FICTION ... You? You I like LemonSmut. In fact, you may even be my favorite reviewer, because despite not liking the fic, you’re not being an asshole about it and defending my right to write it. And yes, I’m being an asshole in these responses, but since both sides are acting like children I’ll just say “They started it!”
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From JAMESCUN on September 22, 2016 i hope konohamaru gets her pregnant Hinata won’t be getting pregnant for a while yet.
TheDogSage Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Posted September 30, 2016 Quote From ANON - anon on September 22, 2016 Konohamaru, huh? Didn't see that one coming. While I'm not the world's greatest fan of the subject matter, this is far and away the best written Cuckold/Sissification Naruto Story, and I can tell that you put effort and attention to each chapter. I for one hope that some of the more domineering females like Anko or Tsunade or perhaps even Kushina get brought into the action, since I'm sure it is only a matter of time before Naruto is introduced to pegging. Maybe on Anko, Tsunade, or Kushina being brought into the action, and definitely on the ‘it’s only a matter of time before Naruto is introduced to pegging’.
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