Whispers in the Dark

[Krynn]

Hello everyone! I finally registered my forum account, and here I am! I have been writing an abduction based novel called Whispers in the Dark. This is a story I am super interested in writing, and each morning I wake up with a new piece of the puzzle. I feel like Bryson is writing through me, as his story flows. I am excited to be able to share it with the AFFO community. I really love reading all comments, and they generally make my day and motivate me to write faster! 

Author: Krynn
Title: Whispers in the Dark
Summary:  21 year old Bryson is in the process of moving from British Columbia to Alberta, Canada when he is abducted from a rest stop along the HWY. His captors, three older men who were just released from prison, take him to a secluded cabin in Northern Alberta where his true anguish is just about to begin...
Feedback: I love motivating comments and comments in general. If you see something in my writing you think I would benifit from knowing about (tips) feel free to mention. I know I do not have the best grammar in the world, but I don’t let that stop me from trying to write a good story. 
Fandom: N/a
Pairing: M/M, Bryson/Quinten/Ethen/Devan
Warnings: Adult +  Slash Male/Male Rape Torture Abduction Humiliation Dark Abuse Anal Oral
Solo story or chaptered story: Chapters
URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108314

Edited August 30, 2016 by WillowDarkling
Fixed link to story

[WillowDarkling]

Be careful that you put in the correct link to the story. I’ve fixed it for you this time. Welcome to the forum and happy writing. 

Willow Darkling, Forum Moderator. 

[Krynn]

Opps, that is weird. I thought I was on the story page when I copied the URL. Thank you for changing it! 

[DemonGoddess]

I also split off your review replies in your own topic in the correct forum.  No biggie, this can take some getting used to!

Topic is here.  You can link to the topic in your chapters, and your readers don’t need a login to talk to you there.