Lotus Moon Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 Hello! I would really appreciate some feedback on my first yaoi story, Zang Fu Theory, a yaoi fanfic. I don't have a Beta, so I'm sorta "roughing it". Today I just uploaded the 4th chapter, and it's a WIP. Title: Zang Fu Theory Author: Lotus Moon Rating: Starts off as R (for language - these are the Saiyuki boys, after all), but will eventually turn into NC-17. Summary: Hakkai's temporary possession by a fire oni sparks a tense triangle between the quiet healer, Sanzo & Gojyo. Feedback: Any constructive criticism is appreciated. Anything from typos/technical errors to believable characterization, general plot, etc. Even just a "you're on the right track" would be good. I have a fairly thick skin. Also, as a newbie, I suck at summaries , so if there is a better way to attract readers in the first place to the story, I would love opinions in that area as well. Fandom: Saiyuki URL: Zang Fu Theory Thank you so much for reading this promo; I appreciate your time! If Saiyuki isn't your thing, that's cool. I wish everyone happy reading and writing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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