Mamacita Posted June 7, 2008 Report Posted June 7, 2008 Uncontrolled Desire IN REVIEWS: • Rev #2, "N" #2035366640 — not a review Ties That Bind http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=34717 Ch 2: • false alarm bec his his human Ch 4: • Xander day ort?" t?" Xander • Was Giflusflustered? Ch 5: • Nibblind tnd tugging • "No [para] "Not a very good • whole bodemblembled in • Finally sulleulled back • him in head ead a hundred • was not decenis bis bare • nightmare ane wae was going Ch 6: • hisSh. "h. "Drink? • But omoromorrow night • He could understand P. [para] H. [para] He considered • imagination. flu flushed a • Slayer. ow eow every • jumpjumped to her feet • And she smibackback • deal witotecotective, and Ch 9: • smirked up at She She gave • force herseo tuo turn away • down to thigthighs and up Ch 10: • And he's alotecotective and • so much of hersen Ozn Oz that • hoped he d led learn • accepted it spvoluvolumes more • hadn't missed e cae calling • had after jus just told • inches from h his hiss has hard as glass Ch 11: • himself alongsidr bor body • to place bot both on the Ch 12: • it was wroHe aHe also • about him tng lng like Ch 13: • search and replace maybe? all the quote marks are odd characters. there are too many things to write them all here. just about every line, literally. i don't know but i think single quotes also are "bad", double and single quotes • here are the wordords: • sat in thertyartyard under Ch 14: • fortunately back to regular quotes! • leaned slightlyhis his strength • got a fainto ofo of grief Ch 15: • we're back to the "foreign" quote marks. don't know if this was part of the glitchery or what. • here are the wordords: • found herselfventvently hoping • fine beforecamecame along Ch 16: • geez. quotes normal again! • I know I c I can and • rea really? Just • brokenly whie cle climaxed • into the kitchWillWillow was • It's allht Bht B Ch 17: • trouble wng Ang Angel • That was a. Or. Or the time • Howg hag had • resolving a damn t. Wh. When • from her pla placed it Ch 19: • he had prob wai waited for them • She shrie She She knew this • And you ar hon honorable • He pulled heose ose to him Inevitable http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=37851 Ch 1: It's XandHe aHe asked ^----fixed Reflection of Love IN SUMMARY (out on p.27 of Buffy> General): • inherits a hoand and finds IN STORY: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=19812 Menu 1: • Buffy's gentle attens cns couldn't • because e wee were Menu 2: • she was q cer certain • than a le ole of feet Menu 3: • by his late fat had had also • not repeat lf, lf, he deduced Menu 4: • dark la [para] th [para] that gave Menu 5: • answer wit without causing • wonderful c be be anything • Williamome ome on Menu 6: • feel muche ate at ease Menu 7: • going to storkiorking, he • FirmFirmly shoving Menu 8: • she gradualbecabecame • cheeks a l a light • even [para] wh [para] what I'm • righrougrough the mirror • of the ng, ng, making Menu 9: author accidentally posted Part 8 in both Menu 8 and Menu 9, Menu 9 should be deleted Fatherly Advice http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=20282 • was in tod hea heaven • at the blo [para] vam [para] vampire • ke fke father
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