Shehanitan Posted July 19, 2015 Report Posted July 19, 2015 Hiya guys. I've been inactive for years but I've recently been invigorated and has been writing my first Star Wars fanfiction. I have evolved my writting since I last posted a chapter on AFF and I do spellcheck and I re-read my chapters and try and fix errors that I notice. However I've alos recently gotten trouble with both writing and reading as I throw about letters and I don't always notice it. NEEDED What I need help with is a second pair of eyes that could pick out these errors as well as word use, grammars and just those weird kind of sentences thta happens when you're not a native english speaker. If you like FF8 slash fics you might ahve read my eraly works. Otherwise please check it out to get an Idea what I mean when I say I write explicit slash stories: http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296764479 FANDOM This story is set in the Star Wars world and I've only seen the movies and read one or two series + some reserach into a few aspects but I'm really not as canonwise as some. The story starts somewhere between episode 1 and 2 and probably more during episode 2 timeline. I think it is required that you've seen the movie "Star Wars Episode 1" to truly enjoy and understand the aspects of the fanfiction. WHAT IT'LL BE This will be a highly explicit, lemony slash story with the main pairing being Obi-Wan Kenobi and Darth Maul. It will be a long story but I'm trying to keep the chapters to around 8-10 pages in "Word" font size 12 (about 3250 words) Seeing eth pairing thsi might be concidered in teh gray area of non-con in places. There will also be battling violence and language. If this seems interesting please shout your interest. I will give you chapter 1 and 4 of the story. chapter 1 I've spell checked and re-read and fixed as best as I could. Chapter 4 will be untouched This is to show you what you'll be working with and I'll want to know how you work. I would love it if you just colored or put a * at the places there's an error. I love to learn and if you coudl point out the errors so I can see and learn we will slowly get less errors. Thank you for reading this request and I hope someone will be interested /Shehanitan Quote
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