moss gypsy Posted November 17, 2014 Report Share Posted November 17, 2014 Howdy, yall! Retro-vertigo has been revised and updated! Chapter 4 now available (Ch. 5 is currently in the works). Thank you, to those who have previously read, and if you haven't, and you like a good sci-fi story, please check this one out! Although Retro-vertigo takes place within Joss Wheadon's Firefly/Serenity universe, I've tried to write the story from an angle that anyone can read--even if they aren't familiar w/ the t.v. show/film. Link to my fanfic here. Retro-vertigo is the story of the crew of a small, Firefly class star ship known as Serenity, and their adventures with four new passengers: the sassy and gifted Liana Laveau, stoic and former soldier, Chris Geautreaux, trust fund baby and smooth talker, Shin Shimazu, and finally, the small boned "Skinny" Sam Collins, who has a penchant for gambling. The group are musicians; the men, former band mates of Jayne Cobb, the crew's crude, yet lovable, gun-for-hire. The band enlists the help of Captain Malcolm Reynolds in order to make it back to their home planet for a huge music festival--without raising the attention of the Feds--because these musicians aren't just some simple band--they're also cocky & charismatic drug smugglers. This fanfic includes 5 OC's, one of which is a minor character who is deceased prior to the story. I didn't really intend for it to be a "song fic" (I'm not even exactly sure what makes a fic a "song fic"), but, because the story revolves around musicians, there are some lyrics within the story. I've tried not to go overboard w/ them. The fic also revolves heavily around dreams and flashbacks--fair warning to those of you who can't stand stories with parts told from that particular point of view. Please R&R! I welcome constructive criticism, and if you'd like to beta Retro-vertigo just inbox me! Happy reading&writing, yall! ~moss gypsy aka space oddity aka Jesse Noel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted November 20, 2014 Report Share Posted November 20, 2014 Like the story a lot, Jane had a girlfriend once; who'd a think it! Only complaint is the chapters are a bit short but that's not really an error thing, I just like long chapters Hope you keep going on this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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