YaoiSmutMaster Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 (edited) EDIT: I found a beta offsite. I am looking for a very open-minded beta, that has good grammar, spellling and punctuation skills. They don't have to be college level lol but enough where the fic is easier to read. Story flow and making sure I tie up loose ends, are other problems I have. So if you are a stickler for tidy endings, please apply. This is a Naruto yaoi fan fic, actually it is a gift fic and I have two complete chapters ready. It is only three chapters long and the last chapter is 40% done. Like most of my stories, it contains incest and...somewhat explicit shouta, it is a unique part of the story lol There is explicit sex and dirty talk. No canon or ooc/ic nazis! I don't subscribe to those notions, I am not Kishimoto. So I don't try to write like him, plus the situations I put them in dictates how I characterize them. In other words, I don't follow the trends. If you don't mind the story content and have the skills I am looking for, please contact me. If you have never beta'd before that's fine too. I would be honored to be your to bust your cherry Edited May 14, 2008 by YaoiSmutMaster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DangoLover139 Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I'm pretty open minded and I love ItaSasu (if that's what you mean by incest.) Sadly this isn't my first time being a beta (or I would take you up on you offer XD.) I am pretty good at picking up on sentence fluency and structure, and am a spelling bee master. Not really but in my own mind I am. But if you are go coma happy (I do) on your story I will be able to help but I can't promise you anything. I will always comment on the plot wether it needs imporvement or you should keep on going. I you're interested contact me at apatheticwhitemoon@yahoo.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YaoiSmutMaster Posted September 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 Please forgive me for such a late reply D: Life just really sucks at times. I would love to have you beta some of my stories, if you are still willing and when I have some availible. My muse is on stike at the moment Thank you so much for taking the time even offer and it is much appreciated. I truly hope to take you up on it in the near future, if the offer still stands I'm pretty open minded and I love ItaSasu (if that's what you mean by incest.) Sadly this isn't my first time being a beta (or I would take you up on you offer XD.) I am pretty good at picking up on sentence fluency and structure, and am a spelling bee master. Not really but in my own mind I am. But if you are go coma happy (I do) on your story I will be able to help but I can't promise you anything. I will always comment on the plot wether it needs imporvement or you should keep on going. I you're interested contact me at apatheticwhitemoon@yahoo.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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