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Ooh, gotcha. I wondered if it was something to do with levels or something like that. Well, that's all from me until the next chapter, I guess. Thank you!

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Umhello? Is something going on? Do you need inspiritarion? You haven't published anything in a while, I've never written hentai before, but maybe I could try to help? Please post soon!

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I've been writing out stories. I try to bounce around so I don't burn out on a series. Currently there's about a thousand words in two requests so far. Generally I'm more active on HF than here. Some of my incomplete stories are here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Chris_Stork/12670/Scraps-Incomplete-Verses

On the matter of the Slutification story: I have something of an outline for the next Seras arc. Any feedback is welcome. Spoilers of course.

I have a primary villain for the piece now and s/he will make reoccurring threats to Hellsing and other throughout. It won't be quite revealed in the next arc but will be heavily hinted at until shown in the arc after. I've planned out nine chapters with the theme of 'degradation'.

First chapter starts with Seras infiltrating a corporate building. The security catches her and bangs her. This is going to be more humorous as these guards are more normally endowed. Not much sex, more of a setup chapter. After that Seras is back and gives over here intel. She leaves and Integra tells Pip to fuck Seras after some goading he does.

Switch back to Integra as she analyzes the files and comes to the conclusion that they have vampires on the payroll and these vampires have raped a number of women. She sets a trap. It fails and it's shown that the company is relocating all their assets. Seras gets dejected and wanders around. She thinks about what it would feel like to be forced into sex. She finds a gang of men and they 'rape' her.

Next part Alucard and Seras raid a warehouse that is still in use by their quarry. Bloodbath. Seras is very wild and Alucard fucks her so hard she is in pain and can't walk afterwards. Cut to Integra and some Geese having sex. They finish and Integra gives them the week off. Later Seras visits the Geese at a club. She has disguised herself and they fuck her without knowing who she is.

Second to last chapter, Integra is caught by the vampire-rapists and they bang her silly. Seras tries to save her and is overwhelmed. Both are drilled senseless and they give out all the information the vampires demand of them. After they leave Seras reveals that she had control of them and everything hey said is meaningless. To celebrate have an ear in the company Seras and Integra go to Jan's to bang. Large orgy, multiple penetrations, donkey cum drinking. Both jokingly marry Jan and get clit rings to seal their vows.

Any thoughts on what I have so far? Nothing is set in stone and I'm more than willing to adjust things.

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Hey Mr., you've done enough bouncing in other stories, right? You haven't updated the SoS one in a mooonnnthhh... *whiny voice* Someone else has actually updated and is like the most recent story on the page! AND you haven't done those Iscariot chapters we were promised either, but maybe you're setting up for that. (I dunno.) *shrug* I know little about writing such things...But yeah. Pleeeaase update ASAP.

I don't know if I've told you before, but you write some really good hentai/porn.

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I have a thousands word in it complete here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Chris_Stork/12670/Scraps-Incomplete-Verses/38547/Chapter-9/SoI--Religious-Studies-201

SoS isn't on hiatus so much as I'm not actively working on it. I've come to the conclusion that SoI must complete first as SoS is being set when Integra is starting to show and she has already told Seras who the father(s) is/are. When it was likely that there'd only be one clear winner in the vote it wouldn't be so hard to work around but with it possibly going to a tie I can't really work around it.

On that note, with the outline I posted earlier does anyone have any feelings about how the next arc is going to be? Anything you would like to see or not see?

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The next chapter in SoI is done. A warning though as it is a bit shorter than most chapters. Luke's chapter will likely be about the same size. Hans will clock in at about 3k words though.



I hope this chapter is what Iscariot fans wanted. If not, well they will be in future adventures.



On that note, I've written up a more detailed outline of how SoS will be plotted out here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/Chris_Stork/blogs/7665/Updates-and-Questions



Does anyone have any thoughts on it?


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Yay! Finally! You da man, it was worth the wait! Although you are right and it could've been longer, there's no rule against writing another chapter with them in it! Put two shortish chapters together and you get one decent one! (Not that I'm like adding to your load or anything man, if you don't want to add another Iscariot-themed chapter, 's all good here. Just saying, if you really feel that unsatisfied over the shortness of the chapter.)

Anyway, cool beans, see you next time!

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I'll probably go back to the Alexander part and put an anal scene in. This isn't the shortest chapter but with the lead-in it likely feels that way.



In future chapters I'm thinking of splitting the Iscariots between Seras and Integra. Heninkel and Yume for Seras and Alexander and Enrico for Integra. This isn't set and I'm more than open to suggestions. When I do get there is there anything anyone would like to see in it? I went looking for Iscariot fanfiction but there almost isn't any.


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Next chapter out: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600054582&chapter=21

As we are down to one more chapter before the end, a few things: Once the Hans chapter is posted that will be it for requests. If you'd like to see someone with Integra it unfortunately will have to wait. Voting will go one for about two weeks after the Hans chapter is up and it will be locked, I will tally the votes and get the last chapter out.

I'm thinking about posting some what ifs and non-canon entries to SoI. It'd go on HF as AFF doesn't handle that sort of thing well. Does anyone have an opinion on it?

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A first draft of the Integra/Hans chapter: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Chris_Stork/12670/Scraps-Incomplete-Verses/43925/Chapter-8/SoI--Hans-chapter

Currently I'm planning on expanding the parts with the horse and Integra giving Hans a blowjob. Does anyone have any suggestions for what they'd like to see?

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http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600054582&chapter=23

And the last chapter is done. I hope everyone has enjoyed these parts with Integra, though the focus will now return to Seras. I do have some Clue-like what-ifs planned for Integra based off different ideas I had. The first will feature her children as an introduction to them. These will be posted on Hentai Foundry.

Thank you for reading.

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So, are you like continuing the story on adultfanfiction, or just on Hentai Foundry? Cause you haven't updated in like forever (which to be fair may not be your fault) but the last chapter felt kinda end-of-story-ish, so I'm slightly confused.

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A few things:

One- Until two days ago there wasn't any more chapters.

Two- I have to manually edit in all the line breaks and formatting here. It's time consuming.

Three- I've generally gotten the impression that the story isn't well-liked on AFF. One review and the last six responses here are all mine.

I'll put the next chapter up soon.

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Yay! Thank you mister. And if you're running out of ideas or anything, you can look back on the rest of the conversation I think there are some plot ideas back there that you sorta forgot or maybe haven't done yet.

And I think a lot of people on AFF are just silent lurkers. (Myself included.) We appreciate your work, I swear.

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I haven't forgotten, for the last year I've been working fifty-sixty hour weeks. That really takes a toll on you. I just haven't had the time or energy to write much. Now it's different and I hope to write more this year.



The next couple of chapters will have Seras/Pip, Seras/Alucard, and a few gangbang chapters.



I'm open to suggestions on what people would like to see in future chapters. If any one has any thing they want in I'm more than willing to hear it.


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Ouch...I can't imagine working that long. I just have a part-time job, so...ouch.

Good luck with feeling more energetic n' stuff, I have no suggestions!

...yet.

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Yo, I have a suggestion! We've seen several chapters with the Millenium characters in 'em, but only one with Iscariot, and none with Seras instead of Integra. (In fact Seras hasn't really encountered the Millennium members either, has she?) How 'bout we get some action with them? Dunno if anyone else has asked, but if they have then my apologies for being redundant. Like, if you're ever stuck on ideas, there's a whole bunch of canon characters that you can (pun not intended) fuck around with.

Stay frosty.

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I have thought of it and I do have plans for some Millennium members to fuck Seras. Just not soon. Hans will have her much later when I do a pregnancy themed arc in the story. Zorin and Alhambra are coming the arc right after this one concludes. Luke is a side character I haven't yet decided what to do with. Rip is in the same spot Luke is in. Major and Doc won't be in simply because they don't have much of any personality to write. Schro is -spoilers redacted-. Seras will be having fun with Yumie and Heinkel eventually, she will slut-train them next arc.




I'm about halfwayish through the next chapter, a Seras/Pip one. I'm going to be making a call back to that promise Seras made to herself way back in chapter two.



Does anyone have any kind of suggestions or things they'd like to see soon?


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