Flashlight's Review Response Thread

[Flashlight237]

So yeah, while I have only one story written so far, I decided to make this thread to reply to reviews (since the site does not have a PM system for whatever reason). Of course this thread would be a bit more useful, as it doesn't require the creation of additional threads.

The first review I got is from a user named Harem-Lover-26 on the story Total Drama Universal Restraints Inn.

Good So far. If you ever do a sequel you can have the male train to dom and have them train the girls as challenges

Harem, I have no idea what to make of your comment. First of all, yes, there will be a sequel. I have planned on having it focus on the girls of Total Drama Pahkitew Island. I think the title Universal Restraints Inn Meets Pahkitew Island would be fitting. I have placed cameos of some of the contestants of Total Drama Pahkitew Island, which makes the story feel more complete.

Second, the story has nothing to do with competition. It's about the nineteen girls who have competed in the Total Drama series spending two weeks at a mysterious hotel somewhere between Tall Timbers Island and Mortimer's Point: real-life locations at Lake Muskoka. Nobody's getting eliminated, bro. I recommend reading through the story more carefully. I have forwarded your comment to my partner.

[Guest Flashlight237]

Well, here are the reviews during a month-long time period.:

From Harem-Lover-26:

Hope to see more of Duncon in this. He could become a dom in the Deamon wing

It's a possibility, but he'll have to go through an intense training course.

Well its good to see Izzy is as stange as ever. I can total see her being a sub one minuet and a dom the next

Izzy basically has no other choice but to submit during the two-week gathering at the Inn.

From Jay Human:

This story are hot

I have no clue what to make of this.

Yeah, this is considered a necro-bump, but it's better than making another thread for my story/stories.

[Flashlight237]

Well, back to this. Sure, it may break the site's rules against thread necros, but it's better than making a new thread. Now, let's look at a couple new reviews I recieved. This time, it's for my third story: The Many Fetishes of Gwen.

First off, I got this review from Sir Pootis:

Very promising start. Definitely hope to see more. But I have to say, I hope the next chapters are a tad longer and with a bit more descriptions, as hot as it was, the first chapter felt short and sort of simple.

A buddy of mine once told me that it's difficult to decide between length and brevity. Sometimes, you gotta make things short in order to make a point.

Then, here's a review to the same story from HalfBane:

Hot story. Plus I like how you are giving a lot of the characters backstories for their kinks.

Well, there are 26 Total Drama females, yet only three of them (Heather, Lindsay, and Gwen) have stories focused on them. Since many people like to use Gwen for their fetishes, I felt she was the perfect character for this story. I'm not sure if you read Total Drama Universal Restraints Inn or if you count the stuff in that story as "backstories" though.