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Knowing that most Sekirei doujin wind up being NTR annoys me. So I considered how to shift that around, make Minato a more suitable protagonist for a series that's Pokemon with giant boobs. And it occurred to me that the same thing which made Minato a wimp could go the opposite direction.

In canon, his mother and sister's domineering attitudes did a lot to crush him down. In this, his grandmother who took care of him and Yukari died early. Since Takami can't really leave Minaka to run wild with MBI, Minato more or less takes over. With the new responsibility as effectively being a parent, rather than be drug down, he becomes more resentful of Yukari's behavior. As a result, eventually, something she does pushes him to the point where one night, when they're about 12 and 13, while they're home alone, he rapes her.

From there, he establishes the ground rules: he doesn't care that much how she acts in public, but she will treat him with the basic respect she should as his younger sister and listen when he specifically tells her something. Other than that, when they're home, she's his bitch and does what he says, when he says. He usually doesn't do anything outrageous, but every couple weeks he does something to keep her from getting uppity: enemas, forcing her to spend a weekend as a cat (wearing only the ears, anal-bead tail, and collar and crawling around and eating on the floor), letting her friends come over to visit but forcing her to keep remote control vibrators in her pussy that he sets off whenever he feels like it, etc.

Aside from establishing his control over Yukari, Minato also spent his time getting ready to be on his own, without the money his mother earns, building up his own little nest egg with proper saving and some investments. Goes to Shin Tokyo for college, and eventually winds up getting involved in the Sekirei Plan, I prefer by finding Akitsu before running into Musubi. Having had a little time to prepare for Minaka's call from what he heard from Akitsu, Minato has time to ask a few questions and makes arrangements to get a proper MBI card. With that in hand, he puts it to proper use, using it to buy and sell various things to build up actual personal funds.

Having those unlimited card and actual cash of his own comes in handy. After acquiring property of his own, Minato wings his other Sekirei. Or, by virtue of some loophole or legal issue or something, he winds up owning Izumo instead of Miya. He's certainly not going to evict the tenants, particularly those with nowhere else to go, but they live under his roof and will follow his rules. No problem with Homura, who pays rent, Matsu, who winds up being Minato's Sekirei, or Uzume who pays what she can, does chores, and really has nowhere else, along with not feeling bad about taking advantage of Minato's hospitality.

Miya on the other hand has no way to pay rent, isn't Minato's Sekirei, and could, were she so inclined, find another place to live with no fear from the plan or MBI. She actually does feel bad about taking advantage, but also feels resentment that he owns what was supposed to be her and Takehito's home. In order to try and get the inn back, Miya tries seducing Minato, hating that it's the only thing she can think of without resorting to violence, which carries it's own issues. Minato makes an agreement: in exchange for her tacit support (i.e., doesn't have to fight or give information she doesn't want, but basically the same role she'd have in canon), training his Sekirei, and free access to her, he'll sign the property back over to her, no strings attached after he wins. So begins Miya's shameful affair and fall into depravity.

And those other people who ask for help, well, he's learned you don't give anything away for free. Of course, he doesn't care about the money, what with the card, but still insists they give something. Fortunately, for the benefit of their Ashikabi, escaping the city, getting the treatment she needs, or just not starving, in the end, Kuno, Uzume, and Hikari and Hibiki are willing to do it. And selling their bodies is so much simpler than any of the other things he could have demanded.

With Yukari in the city...he won't force her to move to Izumo, but he checks on her frequently, which comes in handy when she wings Shiina. By the time Higa sends Kochou and Katsuragi to test their strength, Minato's party is already out to bring them home. Knowing her abilities, Minato makes sure to capture Kochou to blind Higa, keeping her around as a possible surprise asset. She's held at Izumo and "interrogated". Nothing serious, but she winds up horny enough to practically beg Minato.

Same thing happens to Taki and Toyotama when Mikogami and Higa send them after Homura. A small skirmish with Sanada captures Kujika, and Kaho's desperation to protect her Ashikabi takes a turn for the worse, from their perspective. A bargain from the disciplinary squad places Benitsubasa in Minato's custody for a time.

Once Yukari and Shiina are back under Minato's roof, it's time to reestablish the pecking order. Rather than just doing something to Yukari, Minato decides to punish her by punishing Shiina. He's in a skirt, and looks and acts enough like a girl anyway. With that, Yukari is reminded, Minato is in charge, and what's hers is his. After her recovery, Chiho happens to walk in on one of Uzume's "payment" sessions, and joins in to try and make her feel better, only to wind up getting pulled down into the depths of perversion with her Sekirei.

After that, all that's left is the proper netorare reveals. I see Kochou getting embarrassed but aroused by open groping during a confrontation with Higa and Kakizaki, while Toyotama just makes a casual request for sex from Minato in the same situation. Taki tries desperately to show off for Minato against Mikogami. Benitsubasa breaks completely when Minato casually masturbates her and causes her to orgasm and Natsuo doesn't care at all. Karasuba is shocked by the revelation when Miya defends Minato and is held as a lover in response.

Haruka calls, desperate when Kuno disappears, only to hear her voice, in sexual ecstacy, declare Minato vastly superior to Haruka. Kaho doesn't notice her Ashikabi's presence until she's already said too much for him to stand. Seo befriends Sanada and they wind up coming looking for their missing Sekirei, only to find Hikari, Hibiki, and Kujika naked on their knees, giving Minato a triple blowjob.

I had a similar scene in mind for Uzume and Chiho, and for Yukari and Shiina, but couldn't think of anyone that would actually care that would be appropriate and not involved in the sex. I also see Shiina never mentally maturing into a man, just being pushed into living as a girl.

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For extra NTR all around, how about Minato gets Chiho pregnant? Yukari who has been involved longer than any of the others feels like Chiho stole Minato, and Uzume feels like Chiho is being stolen from her. Plus, the feeling of forcing the poor, sickly girl to have his child. The next to get pregnant would depend.

Maybe Shiina acts up, so Minato gets Yukari as a way of reminding him who is in charge. Removing Miya from being able to enter the battlefield becomes necessary, so he knocks her up to keep her at home. MBI wants proof that Kuno isn't going to run off again, so he gets her pregnant as a way to show that she's there to stay. Uzume starts causing problems after Chiho gets pregnant, so he puts her in her place by forcing her to do the one thing she never wanted or thought she would have to do.

I don't know. Just that one of the usual ends for NTR is for the girl to get pregnant, so I figured that was a way to go.

  • 11 months later...
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How about making Minato the Sekirei Plan's Mr. NTR? And all because Takami decided to add something to the Sekirei so that none of them would ever harm him. It turns into causing them to react to him, even when they've already been winged. Moreover, he can steal them completely, wings and all, though it requires more genetic material. Namely, just like in all NTR, as soon as he cums inside them, they're his.

For Chiho's part, this is really convenient, since it offers her a way to make sure Uzume is safe even if she dies. Watching as the winging was transferred was just a bonus; seeing Uzume try and resist, only finally succumb to it was wonderful for her. Same for Yukari and Shiina, but also with the added upside that Shiina and Kusano are on the same side now.

At the end, Minato is the only one to show up for the final round, and he comes with the entire First Gen Disciplinary Squad and all the other Sekirei. He wins by default.

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