lollers Posted May 24, 2013 Report Posted May 24, 2013 This will be review responses for http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106276'>Elliot. These will be sorted by chapters. Quote
lollers Posted May 24, 2013 Author Report Posted May 24, 2013 (edited) Chapters 1-3(since I just now got my thread up) @dazedandconfused: Heehee, thank you! I can't wait to get to that part too! I haven't really given the Fairy Godmother much thought... e 3e I wonder how I should make her out to be... And meeting the Prince for the first time... well. > u> That will be interesting, to say the least. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING!! @anon#1: Sorry for the shortness. orz I have it... thought out in a certain way? To where, I word vomit everything that should happen in a certain timeframe(i.e. Finding out about the Ball) without dragging it out? But I'm relieved to hear that you like my writing. ; -; I'm always nervous that it doesn't live up to expectations. As for the girl part, I haven't quite decided HOW I'm going to go about it... But Elliot will definitely resemble a girl. For the Ball until Midnight. For future plot sake, this is a must. C: But, I promise to make it up to you with lots of boobless humor and drama!! <3 @anon#2Iknowwhoyouare: ... e ___e -stares- (to everyone who thinks this a strange response, this is a friend of mine. <3) @Fire_Demon: -gasp-NOWAI?! QuQ Gosh, you make me want to spill the beans. 8T Haha, wellll, Elliot just may do that. And the Prince will definitely let him off because he's a girl. e ue Kufufufu, I can't wait to write out the prince's personality. Added 5/24/2013: @Ireyon: Why, thank you! <3 I'm definitely going to continue this! Already working on my the new chapter. QuQ I.. really need to slow down spitting out the chapters. -eyeballs- I'll end up spoiling y'all. ;DDD @Anon#1(this is just what I'm going to call you. ='D): Heehee, well, to not give away too much.... after the ball, expect a... entirely different plot line occurring? o u o I've excited that this thread is being put to use!! <3 Edited May 24, 2013 by lollers Quote
lollers Posted May 25, 2013 Author Report Posted May 25, 2013 5/24/13 @midnightsscream: Heehee, well, you'll just have to see. <3 And no worries... I promise it won't last more than two chapters, if even that~ @dazedandconfused: Oh gosh, I don't think I could make a self-pity character. orz I loooove drama and characters that clash! Heehee, I totally understand! I'm not a fan of genderbender myself. <3 Quote
lollers Posted May 25, 2013 Author Report Posted May 25, 2013 (edited) 5/25/13: Anon: You haven't ceased to amaze me thus far with your eloquent (and dare I say it, superb) writing. Love how you've taken this tale and spun it into your own. Keep up the good work! Why thank you! I simply adore hearing that you're enjoying the story! -melts- Anon : really interesting beginning. can`t wait to read more! Heehee, I'm glad you think so! The next chapter will probably be out by Monday or Tuesday. > u> Let us see how much writing is done over the beach-filled weekend. Dazedandconfused: Hmm, I wonder if Ms. Tots will turn out to be Elliot's fairy godmother! I have some vile words for Lady Tremaine but am too much of a lady to post them here, LOL. Prince Charles! Oh, I love this story. Poor Elliot, I can't wait to find out what you have in store for him. ~~ laughs evilly ~~ Well, I never considered exactly who will be the fairy godmother but... well, let's just say some ideas popped into my head. 8'D Bwahaha, yeaaa, she's an... unpleasant lady. = u= Ohohoho, can't wait to read to write it out!! Fire_Demon: Someone sure seems like an arrogant ass... But I'm telling you,it's all pent up sexual frustration.Charlie needs to get laid and fast!Poor Elli.But he couldn't have really expected Lady T. to let him have a day off.That's just how Evil Stepmothers work!Please update asap!*batting eyelashes**puppy dog eyes* Oh, definitely!! 8'D someone needs to fix that. > u> -nudges Elli- Only naturally~ Anon: Oooh, I am getting so excited for the ball to happen. Prince Charles seems like a righteous and pompous ass and I can't wait to find out what happens when he first lays eyes on Elliot. Why, won't Elliot be able to make a break for it even when he's dressed like a girl and run away from his home instead of going to the ball? Is his Fairy Godmother going to make him go to the ball? Then again, why can't he just take off after the ball and not go home. It's going to be epic I am sure. Charles needs a dose of his own medicine. =T -shakes fist- Hmm, I have the basic idea. I'm going to tweak and adjust until it seems sensible. <3 With the new idea that sparked, I think I can shape the situation, nicely. Fire_Demon: I read the Anonymous review below me and I thought 'That is an excellent question!' So what?Is it going to be like Enchanted where Ella has to go to the ball and even being chained to a tree can't stand against the spell he's on?Is his fairy godmother gonna be guy?Imagine this burly Wolverine style guy with white fluffy wings smoking a cigar and shaking his sparkly wand and sprinkling sparkles everywhere... Haha, that's never occurred to me! ...We'll see. e ue Sabaku_Lotus: I like it so far. I can't wait to see what happens to Elliot. I can image the prince being more of a boy or a warrior and really stubborn/arrogant rather than charming. I can't wait to see what happens when he runs into cross dressing Elliot. Bwahaha, I think only his last name is Charming. 8'D Other than that, well... I suppose he's charming to the ladies? OuO Hi, I just answered your reply to my challenge in the forum!I really like Elliot and hope that he can start a new life away from his horrid step-mother and step-sisters. I felt so bad for him not being able follow through with his escape plan because she locked him in his room. I am curious how you are going to have his fairy godmother arrive and transform him for the ball. I think sparks will fly between Elliot and Prince Charles but not in the way we think, LOL.I look forward to your next update, ~~~ Katie ~~~ Sweet!!! ='D I'll definitely look at that! Oh, sparks will definitely fly! <3 Thank you! I'll update as soon as I can! Edited May 26, 2013 by lollers Quote
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