Kakashifan727 Posted April 10, 2013 Report Posted April 10, 2013 (edited) Alright, not much to say here. I think I did okay with it, besides its more for the sex than plot anyways. This is also where I will post my responses to reviews if I feel the need to. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094091 Author: Kakashifan727 Title: The Touch of Winter Summary: ReaderXFrost. Oneshot. You can't sleep, and you find a stranger near your window. Fandom: Rise of the Gaurdians (I need to go die in a fire, but Frost is just so adorable) Pairing: ReaderXJack Frost Rating: Adult+ It is a Solo for now, but ask and I will add things; this may also mean adding more tags in the description/Authors Note since they wwon't fit in the summary. Tags: Handjob, Vanillia, Other, Angst, WAFF, Hurt/Comfort Feedback: Mostly on thr sex. Was it too long? Was I too descriptive/step by step? Was it realisitc or felt forced (Besides the fact that its a PWP)? Do you want me to add more kinks? Maybe change the PoV? I was really going for a 'It's our first time' type of thing with the emotions and how the vhars messed up. Edited April 10, 2013 by Kakashifan727 Quote
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