Tigro Spottystripes Posted March 15, 2013 Report Posted March 15, 2013 (edited) A few notes first: For the "real" Titans, please try to stay as much in character as possible, within the parameters of the proposed story. I picture this taking several chapters, please don't squeeze it too much. No pregnancy or pregnancy risk, if necessary have Raven mention there is no risk because they are not only of different species but from different realities. No angst etc. Now for the story itself It starts with Raven meditating; recently she figured out how to contact Ravens in alternate realities and has been participating in a "council" of sorts, mostly just sharing potentially useful intel back and forth, but somtimes also taking the opportunity to socialize with her peers. But today she accidently took a wrong turn while traversing the astral pathways and stumbled into the mind of a Raven in a not so parallel universe, actually one relatively quite unaligned. In almost just a flash she witness her alternate self in the middle of a gangbang; the not so parallel universe she stumbled upon is a smutty fanfic! Shocked she pulls back in haste, instinctively retreating back into her own body. But because she moved so fast she created a vacuum in her wake that sucked the ficRaven back with her, and now there is two Ravens in her room. Visually ficRaven is an exact copy of Raven, except she got a very noticeable cameltoe. And personality-wise, she is horny, slutty and kinky. Due to the nature of her native reality, ficRaven produces a sort of smut-field around her that gradually affects the people around her into getting into the mindset natural where she comes from; it is not a complete mind control though, it can be resisted to some extent with focus and strong willpower. The effects fade after a little while away from her. Realizing what happened Raven apologizes and tries to start researching how to send ficRaven back; she wasn't aware travel between realities was possible like that and needs to look into the mechanics of the interdimensional communication meditation enchantment to figure out how it could've happened. But obviously it is not gonna be easy under the advances of ficRaven and the effects of her smut-field. You can guess what happens next (though them being Raven, there's gonna be some generous use of shadow constructs as "toys", and of course tentacles!). Afterwards, after they've fallen asleep from exhaustion, Raven wakes up; remembering recent events she concentrates on resisting the influence of the smut-field and calls the other Titans to her room. With them at the door she explains she needs them to babysit ficRaven so she can concentrate on figuring out how to send her back. She doesn't tell them exactly the nature of where ficRaven comes from, just that she is from a different reality with somewhat different culture. Now the focus switches to the other Titans having to deal with ficRaven's advances and the temptation of the smut-field; since she is almost exactly like their Raven the Titans feel awkward with her teasing and stuff, and resist but at the same time trying to not hurt ficRaven's feelings. But as time passes it gets harder and harder for them to resist, they still do though. But eventually they kinda change their minds, but not completly though, they are still who they are. They get together and after talking between themselves to see if everyone agree they head to Raven's room to ask her if it would be ok if they did stuff with ficRaven, since it would be almost like they would be doing it with Raven herself and stuff. At first Raven thinks they just wanna be free of babysitting duties, but after they hesitantly and awkwardly explain it, she, still kinda too focused on her studies, though also knowing full well what it is like to be under the influence of ficRaven's smut-field, just nods and waves them off. (perhaps Starfire isn't with them, being innocent and free spirit as she is, she never saw anything wrong from the start and has been having fun with ficRaven all along, at least when the others didn't try to steer her attention to other things) But after the group darts off to "attack" ficRaven, Beast Boy stays behind. He is kinda embarrassed and hesitant to speak. Raven figures out and spells out to him she really is ok with it, no sarcasm, and after he still doesn't leave she finally gets it, and reassures him that while she doesn't think she is ready for the type of thing he has in mind at the moment, him being with ficRaven right now won't hurt his chances with Raven when the time comes when she will be ready. And as he starts to leave she gives him a tip, ficRaven's body exists under cartoon physics and she won't get hurt by his bigger animals. Now some chapters with the different pairings, including multiple Titans on ficRaven as well as them between themselves, from the effects of the smut-field. And perhaps for the epilog, after Raven figures out how to return ficRaven to her reality, and after each of them says their goodbyes, BB has a last request. Since at the moment Raven still can't handle her emotions enough to do it with him, but managed to do it with "herself" without blowing up the T Tower, he would like to watch them before ficRaven is sent home. After some thought, and lots of convincing from ficRaven's part, Raven accepts the request. Then later that night, after ficRaven is gone, the story ends with BB being allowed in Raven's bed if he promises not go past snuggling and to make sure to let her sleep. ps: perhaps during the chapters after they got the greenlight to go at it with ficRaven, for humorous purposes have them have a few run-ins with the real Raven and mistake her for ficRaven before being straightened out by her. Any questions? Edited March 16, 2013 by Tigro Spottystripes Quote
Guest Crocface Posted March 16, 2013 Report Posted March 16, 2013 Ah, now this is an idea I like. Well defined, lots of room for interpretation, a premise that isn't the horrible nonsense usually found in this kind of thing....... The BB/Rae elements are an enticing touch too. I'm incredibly tempted to take a swing at this when I've finished my current story. I don't suppose the who 'smutfic dimension' angle can be changed, though? I mean, I'm all for slutty alternate dimensions, but it being so specifically a smutty fanfic one is kinda off-putting to me. Feels too much like the old 'I've been sucked into my favorite fandom and will now hang out with the characters!' cliche. Might just be me, though. The idea of a 'smut-field' is hilariously amazing, though. Quote
Tigro Spottystripes Posted March 16, 2013 Author Report Posted March 16, 2013 (edited) Ah, now this is an idea I like. Well defined, lots of room for interpretation, a premise that isn't the horrible nonsense usually found in this kind of thing....... The BB/Rae elements are an enticing touch too. I'm incredibly tempted to take a swing at this when I've finished my current story. I don't suppose the who 'smutfic dimension' angle can be changed, though? I mean, I'm all for slutty alternate dimensions, but it being so specifically a smutty fanfic one is kinda off-putting to me. Feels too much like the old 'I've been sucked into my favorite fandom and will now hang out with the characters!' cliche. Might just be me, though. The idea of a 'smut-field' is hilariously amazing, though. The idea with her explicitly coming from a fanfic is to allow for the lampshading of some porn clichés while still feeling "realistic". But if you think you could write it better with "ficRaven"'s native reality being somthing a bit less in-your-face but still on the same theme, go ahead. Btw, regarding kinks, pretty much anything that doesn't involve negative feelings nor permanent damage should be ok. Edited March 16, 2013 by Tigro Spottystripes Quote
Guest Crocface Posted March 16, 2013 Report Posted March 16, 2013 What would you describe as negative feelings? Things like humiliation and degredation would fall under that, I assume. Would light bondage, assuming all involved were conscenting? Name calling as a form of dirty talk? Quote
Tigro Spottystripes Posted March 16, 2013 Author Report Posted March 16, 2013 (edited) Just about everything that is consenting and/or playful are A-ok (even things like pain and "gross" stuff, if they are enjoyed or at the very least not considered a big deal by those involved, are just fine). I just don't like feeling depressed while i'm trying to read stuff to make me happy. Edited March 16, 2013 by Tigro Spottystripes Quote
Guest Crocface Posted March 16, 2013 Report Posted March 16, 2013 Fair enough and good on ya, then. I'm gonna start writing this very afternoon. Quote
Guest Crocface Posted March 20, 2013 Report Posted March 20, 2013 Hey, thought I'd pop in with an update, since it's been a few days. Chapter one is currently hovering around two-thousand words, and should be ready for posting in another two to three-thousand. It will include everything up to Raven accidentally bringing slut!Raven back home. It hopefully will be up by the weekend, though I can't promise that on account of me being a really slow writer. Just thought I'd let ya know. Quote
Tigro Spottystripes Posted March 21, 2013 Author Report Posted March 21, 2013 Cool, thanx for the update! Quote
Guest Crocface Posted March 23, 2013 Report Posted March 23, 2013 Hey, chapter one is now written and posted. http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061072 Hope ya like it. Quote
Tigro Spottystripes Posted March 24, 2013 Author Report Posted March 24, 2013 That was great! There were a couple little things you took in directions i didn't expect but even those things just made it better! Thanx! Quote
Guest Crocface Posted April 14, 2013 Report Posted April 14, 2013 Right, been a while, but chapter two is now up. Quote
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