Got lots of hits but hardly any reviews on my Supernatural story

[silkmink]

Hi guys!

I am a first timer and in need of a little feedback. I have 1043 hits but only six reviews and those are from only two people. Mostly they're from one fantastic reader who commented on every chapter.

The main reason I have so many hits is because I have opened a Facebook page to promote my story. I have added many hardcore Supernatural fans to my page and post links to the story. Don't worry, I put very explicit warnings as to the content; explaining that people under 18 or who are upset by graphic sexual situations should absolutely not click the link.

The thing is that I have cast a wide net and people who liked one chapter tended to go read the others when I alerted them to new posts. The problem is that we all know that a person opening your story and reading two lines still generates a hit whether they liked it or not. The lack of votes and reviews is disheartening. I don't even know if I want to keep writing. It takes a lot of time and I am pretty busy.

By the way, the story is based on the television show “Supernatural” but I do include footnotes to explain certain things that non-viewers may not know. Also, the first two chapters are pretty much all sex but subsequent chapters really delve into the story (one chapter actually has no sex). My goal was to have it read like an actual episode from the show (just with some hardcore sex in it). I made every effort to remain true to the characters as they were created. They act and speak in ways that are (hopefully) consistent with the actual show.

Thank you for reading this long and rambling post and I would love it if you guys would give my story a look and tell me what you think. If you don't want to review on the page, you can also email me at silkmink@gmail.com

P.S. If you haven't seen the show, see my attachment to see what the Winchester brothers look like. Dean is on the left and Sam is on the right.

Author: silkmink

Title: Supernatural: Demons from the South

Summary: Sam and Dean Winchester head to South Eastern states to investigate a cannibalistic killing and meet a whole lot of sexy monsters and one human along the way. (Takes place around season 5)

Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism much appreciated.

Fandom: Supernatural

Warnings: M/F, Angst, BP, D/s, Oral, Violence, Fingering, MiCD, OC

URL: http://tv.adultfanfi...hp?no=600097268

[Aysha c.c.]

I think you should talk to Slayitalldown She also has a Supernatural fanfic on the site and I think the two of you would likly be good for each other. I know the show but im not really into it and I prefure reading cartoons and anime. Good luck.