olefish Posted September 13, 2012 Report Posted September 13, 2012 (edited) I'm looking for a beta to look over my bits and parts of my original novel. The story centers around Claude who moonlights as a prostitute in Renaissance France. He pisses off the wrong person one night, and the man returns to demand restitution Well the stranger turns to be a sexy and very dangerous vampire. The novel is mostly about Claude evading his clutches and succeeding and failing in various ways, mostly comical, sometimes life threatening. There's quite a bit of religious blasphemy, and the sex scenes are few and not graphic. There's a lot of innuendo though. I find innuendo more interesting than explicit sex personally. People mention that the writing style is different. So I'm looking for beta readers to comment on story arc. Special bonus if you do some editing. See the first chapter We can trade stories if you would like. I have a very critical eye. Anyway hit me up if you're interested Edited September 23, 2012 by olefish Quote
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