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Anyone here ever felt they were sick? Perverted and just wrong?

Well, you're not. I just read "Raping little suzie" and you're not THAT sick until that story arouses you. For those of you who don't know it here's a small summary, and even that needs a warning:

WARNING: EXTREME SICKFUCK-NESS

I wouldn't even read this if I were you... let alone the actual story.

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It's about a man who lives in a world were some sort of plague causes girls who've had their first period to die unless they get pregnant with a relative's baby. So he's constantly raping all his female family members to save them. And the story is about his four year old daughter. After taking some extreme form of viagra, he violently rapes her. (up untill here I'd be like: "Hey man, whatever floats your boat" but this is were it goes too far) --> His cock turns out to be so big, and her body so small, that he fills her up to her womb, and further. He goes through the back of her womb up to her lungs and heart until he feels her heart beating against his cock. This is when he cums, and then she dies. Coming down from the viagra he realises what he's done and reanimates her. The End.

Scarred me for life sad.gif

At some point it just gets hard not to judge dry.gif

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Okay when I first read your post, I admit, my first thought was "I'm sure I've read worse. How bad can this be?" But omg... that is seriously sick... seriously. Not the sickest thing I've read (at least not what you've posted from it) but it's certainly up in the top 3 of the sickest ones I've seen

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Umm, why did you read this story if it was so horrible?

I'll admit it sounds pretty gross. Not My cup of tea, judging the the story summary you gave, it seems like it was likely written by a twelve year old.

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Yeah, this is probably just some kid who wrote on the site just to show off to his little friends, so he could be a "big man". It's not worth the time to read it.

Funny how they think they can blend in with the adults writing on the site with their terrible grammar and spelling, not to mention the COMPLETE LACK OF PLOT LINE OR SUBSTANCE.

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I feel better. tongue.gif

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Huh. does it make me a sick freak if I could figure out a way to save the story?

Synopsis: Most of the world is dead after a virulent plague breaks out. The virus causes sterility in females and mutates when it encounters the Y chromosome, causing cellular decay in males. There is no cure for the virus. If that weren't enough, the virus mutated into a second stage, persistant in juvenile females. The onset of puberty, culminating in the first menstrual cycle, retriggers the virus, endangering the few small clans of survivors left. The only known prevention is the series of hormones released during pregnancy. Unfortunately, with the death of modern society there are no more pharmacuetical companies left to produces artificial hormones, leaving actual pregnancy as the only cure. Insert tale of Heroine here, detailing her existance in this troubled times.

Further notes--->

Change Male perspective to female.Society is now obsessed with women, as their bodies will literally either save or damn mankind. In fact the clans are run by Matrons, who patrol the families to keep an eye on all the underage females if they suspect the onset of puberty they automatically claim the girl.

Change "raping his female relatives" to some sort of ceremony. Granted, the best way to ensure pregnancy, as well as ensure best offspring, is multiple donors. Some sort of town wide gang bang then? Though a little more refined... Hmmm. Starting on her tenth birthday, if she has yet to be selected by the matrons, every girl is sent to the Ovarium, where she is regularly bedded under the watchful eyes of the Matrons. She's not allowed to leave until it is confirmed she's with child...

Dump the four year old. Seriously, that's messed up in more ways than I can think of. The best way to 'save' that is to forget that it ever happened in the first place. What were we talking about again?

So am I sick freak? Or do I just have the ability to be inspired from trash?

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OK you know what I just realized is wrong with the plot of this story? The initial plot is that women who have had their first period are the ones that need to be raped by relatives, BUT the father rapes his FOUR yr old daughter. Are we supposed to really believe that a four yr old has had her first period when she's just learned to walk, pee by herself, and eat solid food. I didn't get mine till 15...so unrealistic....

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Unrealistic?

Well, the apparent age of the author takes a downturn with every sentence. He knows women get periods, and maybe why, but not when or how.

And the main idea of the plot seems to be 'dick so big it kills.' Yeah, that's a mature plot device.

The rest is just rationalization to put him in a position to rape. I mean, if lives depended on it, would he have to rape them to save them?

Unless there's some additional rationalization that it's only savior sex if they release certain hormones associated with rape.

There's a scene.

"Now, Mary, you're going to spend the weekend at your Uncle's. If he or any of his boys touch you in your secret private girl place, i want you to try really hard to fight them off. But not too hard, or you'll die..."

Maybe it's adrenaline and we could just do it on horseback? Or....that's it. A man from the next clan over rides up, several generations into the New World and has good news. You' don't have to rape n'more! It works just as well if they drink coffee during!

But the bastards at the protagonist's place feel that the rape is important and refuse to change...

Eh. There's no real saving this. I should be working on the next chapter of Lamia anyway.

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I don't know. I doubt there's ever such a thing as a bad plot (having read both the Illuminatus Trilogy and Schrodinger's Cat trilogy), just really crappy authors. Take away the rape and the four year old, and its pretty much any other 'sex prevents the plague/demon/apocalypse themed story. I'd wager that half the people here could take the same central ideas and come up with something not only acceptabel, but enjoyable.

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Wasn't a AFF story, if you must know, I read it on Encyclopedia Dramatica

Zyx, are you sure it was Encyclopedia Dramatica that you read this story from? Because I searched there and absolutely nothing came up like it. In fact, the site isn't anywhere near the sort of site that looks like it's excepting story posts. It refers to itself as "the evil Wikipedia".

Just wanted to get it straight because I wouldn't want someone going around saying that I wrote crap like this when I didn't.

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Anyone here ever felt they were sick? Perverted and just wrong?

Well, you're not. I just read "Raping little suzie" and you're not THAT sick until that story arouses you. For those of you who don't know it here's a small summary, and even that needs a warning:

WARNING: EXTREME SICKFUCK-NESS

I wouldn't even read this if I were you... let alone the actual story.

SPOILER :It's about a man who lives in a world were some sort of plague causes girls who've had their first period to die unless they get pregnant with a relative's baby. So he's constantly raping all his female family members to save them. And the story is about his four year old daughter. After taking some extreme form of viagra, he violently rapes her. (up untill here I'd be like: "Hey man, whatever floats your boat" but this is were it goes too far) --> His cock turns out to be so big, and her body so small, that he fills her up to her womb, and further. He goes through the back of her womb up to her lungs and heart until he feels her heart beating against his cock. This is when he cums, and then she dies. Coming down from the viagra he realises what he's done and reanimates her. The End.

Scarred me for life sad.gif

At some point it just gets hard not to judge dry.gif

OH....MY....GOD! That is seriously FUCKED UP! UGH! >.< (wishes their mind wasn't a visual mind) Who the HELL would WRITE something like that!? That is really going way to far! I can undertsand that you are scarred, I am too... -__-

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I am an extreme advocate of free speech, have a sick mind, and have found that through hentai and horror movies I have a scarily high tolerance. So, I respect the author's right to write something like that, but... ew, put it away! *shudder* It's like guro, but worse! I'm sick, but even I have standards.

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Anyone here ever felt they were sick? Perverted and just wrong?

Well, you're not. I just read "Raping little suzie" and you're not THAT sick until that story arouses you. For those of you who don't know it here's a small summary, and even that needs a warning:

WARNING: EXTREME SICKFUCK-NESS

I wouldn't even read this if I were you... let alone the actual story.

I don't believe in censorship in any form and I'm an extremely open minded person. Probably more so than is healthy. Nothing at all squicks me but I have to admit, that made my stomach turn. :rolleyes:

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