silverlining990 Posted August 30, 2012 Report Posted August 30, 2012 (edited) This is the spot for my story, Pokemon Lemon Yellow. It does contain pokephilia, so heads up. You can read it here, http://anime.adultfa...hp?no=600053546 It's a story mainly for fun, but it will follow a central plot and each chapter will have a plot. I've gotten some good feedback, as well as lovely reviews. I'd love to hear what anyone thinks on this story. If you have any grammar, vocab, plot holes, etc. Any criticism at all, go ahead and lay it on me. But make sure it's articulate and that you get your point across without going overboard. As long as you pepper in some apologies and then lay it on me, I'm good. I've already edited the first chapter of present tense jumps, so don't worry about that. I also want to know what ideas you have for any smut stuff. The only game and anime characters I'll use will be the gym leaders and some random trainers, and maybe Red and Blue somewhere later. If you have any OCs you want to see, or any pokemon you want to see paired, I'll do the best I can. And if you have any ideas at all for pokemon, and like the way I write, then hit me up here and let me know what I can do for you. Edited September 6, 2012 by silverlining990 Quote
Recommended Posts