Kimmimaru Posted June 22, 2012 Report Posted June 22, 2012 Author: Kimmimaru Title: Tangled Summary: Sometimes even the purest emotions can destory a person.... Feedback:Constructive Criticism is needed, this is an experimental peice, thank you. Fandom: Harry Potter (Marauders Era) Pairing: Sirius Black/Remus Lupin, James Potter/Lily Evan's, Sirius Black/James Potter. Warnings: Abuse,Angst,H/C,Oneshot,Other,Violence (Alcoholism, domestic abuse, lots and lots of extream angst!) URL: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096137 I'm kind of new to this site, but I have posted before on another one so I am not new to fanfiction in general. Most of my stories are Marauder centric, usually focussing on Sirius Black. This particular story is one I am proud of but would like some feedback as it IS experimental, I have used a different form of writing to try and give it an almost song-like flow. I really hope you enjoy but it is rather heavy going, so, in advance thank you for reading! Love, Kimmimaru. XXXXX Quote
Lisbet_Adair Posted June 24, 2012 Report Posted June 24, 2012 I took a look at this and reviewed it. It's worth checking out. Quote
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