Kid Doomsday

[evodmasters]

Where: DC comic-verse

Name: Kid Doomsday (Yes I know about Doomsboy)

Race: Synthetically created hybrid

Age: 4 years old (aged to 16)

Height: 6 feet tall (9 feet when transformed)

Weight: 200 pounds normal (550 when transformed)

Background: When Superboy fails to be apart of the legacy of Lex Luthor, he realizes that he should not have used the DNA of his hated enemy. He then comes to the conclusion that the being who beat Superman should be a more worthy successor of his new legacy. Unfortunately, during the clone's incubation period the approved subliminal implants were replaced with life lessons from PBS shows, (such as Mr. Rodgers Neighborhood), thus creating a conflicted boy who fights against his violent instincts, but desperately wants to please his “father.”

Occupation: Lab Rat

Abilities: Super Strength (about as much as Aquaman when in normal mode, but he nearly rivals Doomsday when transformed), Healing, Adaptability, Intelligence (above average human), High Speed Running and Reflexes, (All abilities accept for intelligence are enhanced when transformed.)

Weaknesses: Conflicting morals and desires within himself makes it hard for him to hurt things, intelligence is lowered when he goes into Doom-mode. He has a hard time fighting women due to lack of exposure too outside world. He hates it when people look at him and call him a monster.

Features: Tall for a 16 year old, with gray skin and long white hair. Besides that he looks human when he is not transformed into Doom-mode. When in Doom-mode, his height increases, he gains a large amount of muscle, and bone protrusions come out of his joints.

Connections to cannon characters: Sees himself as Lex Luthor's son and as a rival to Superboy. He is a clone of Doomsday and Lex Luthor.

How does he get along with those around him: He is a disappointment to Lex Luthor when he finds out about Kid Doomsday's gentle nature and puts KD through trials to try and fix the implanted corruption.

What other characters think of him when they meet him: Basically he seems like another villain to those around him, but he is a rather gentle guy when left to his own devices. But he will fight when provoked/threatened or when his “father”, Lex Luthor, tells him to.

Edited June 16, 2012 by evodmasters

[Ajwf]

You're issue is probably that his weaknesses are all apart of his "morale compass" and would be turned into strengths as time went on.

You also kinda skipped "Personality" and "Appearance". Having no clue what he looks like, I'm at a bit of a loss.

[reves_damour]

The most important questions for a sexual story are going to revolve around his sex life. Do girls (or guys or beats or robots or whatever he's after) just fall for him on mere sight, or is he considered to be a rather average or even ugly person. Does he know how to go after partners better than a seasoned prostitute, or can he barely manage the social negotiations to playing a game of tag (the latter being much more typical for an average 4 year old, no less one who's had little social contact).

The character, like most, does have potential, but you're going to have to flesh him out a little more, especially in the personality / social intelligence aspects. If he's not going to be a bumbling pre-kindergartener (and a pretty funny looking one having a 16-yo body) on the social IQ scale, that should be explained too.

Personally, I would drop the accelerated aging part and just make him a 16-yo person unless you plan to make his accelerated growth a central part of the story.

[evodmasters]

I am okay with changing the age around, but it is more like he is forcefully developed to be older than his age implies. A couple of examples of this would include Superboy, (comic or Young Justice cartoon), or The Cuckoo triplets from X-men. Though I can see how this would be confusing and it would not be too hard to say that he aged normally in the tube for 16 years.

His build is athletic, but he has grey skin, red eyes, and bone protrusions coming out of his joints, I wouldn't call him handsome or ugly. I'd would say he is more exotic and a bit scary based on his appearance alone. As for his sexual preferences, I would go with M/F to start with, but since this is WIP and I want to follow the narrative, it is possible that his sexual horizons might expand. I do not plan on him being a rapist, but it will be a challenge for him to find someone to look past his appearance and origins to give him a chance.

Edited June 20, 2012 by evodmasters